I have not been to Medford, nor Milan;
I have not seen a war, nor won the peace;
I’ve risen to six thousand cloudy dawns
that – not once – promised sun, and storms to cease.
I have not stood to spurn the March of Time;
nor have I dreamed of stories minus loss.
Imposter lands do beckon – paths unwind
as stubborn seas remain, to me, uncrossed.
I have not drowned the snowy streets in ink
that pours from some dark room behind my eyes;
nor have I dwelled in candled inns to drink
the lees, when it was all was left behind.
And yet, I say again, on time I borrow:
“Fear not! – for I shall do it all tomorrow.”

 

Anthony Wang is a high school student in Toronto.

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14 Responses

  1. J. Simon Harris

    Very nice work, Anthony! You have a strong command of the sonnet form. It’s hard to believe you’re just a high school student (16 or 17 years old, or so I gather from line 3). I hope you continue writing.

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  2. Trevor Siggers

    Anthony, your pen must continue. Don’t put it off until tomorrow. Brilliant and thanks for sharing your thoughtful lines.
    Best wishes
    Trevor

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  3. Barbara Barnes

    For one so young a new sky star’s been hung.
    Thank you Anthony Wong

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  4. Amy Foreman

    Well done, Anthony! This sonnet is simple, elegant, and musical . . . all that a sonnet should be. I sincerely hope we see many more poems by you in the future. Keep on writing and submitting; you’re the real deal!

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  5. Terry Reeves

    The thing you have not done
    so far is to gain understanding – but then few of us have ever done so.

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  6. C.B. Anderson

    Anthony,

    Amazingly, you seem to have mastered the strict iambic line at a fairly young age. And your teachers should congratulate you on your mastery of English diction and grammar, especially your expert placement of commas. But the final couplet, a nice ironic twist, is where your greatest talent lies.

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  7. Ramon Rodriguez

    Anthony, thank you for sharing this your creation. Like some have already said, don’t stop writing! I’m looking forward to seeing more of your poetry!

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  8. James A. Tweedie

    Anthony, Years ago, I wrote my Dad a Father’s Day letter thanking him for all the things he hadn’t been and hadn’t done. Sometimes it is the thing left undone that saves us! A good poem and, as C.B. points out, a great closing couplet.

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  9. David Watt

    Anthony, this is a terrific sonnet. You definitely should continue to write, as your talent is obvious.

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