Salt desert, Great Rann of Kutch, India.‘Curse of the Desert’: A Poem by Stuti Sinha The Society December 21, 2023 Culture, Poetry 18 Comments . Curse of the Desert Ill-tempered droughts strip lands of foliage sheath. Its barren womb still yields a wilted crust that liberates, from layers underneath, a swell of ruffled soil and choking dust. Fluorescent flares and roars of forking light, that carve the palms of charcoal-tainted skies, make flickers of abated hope ignite chimeras in a mortal dweller’s eyes, yet flaking shores remain unquenched as clouds somnambulantly stray and then proceed. An arbitrary whim of flighty crowds of blooming billows indisposed to bleed. Thus hexed, the fabled glory and allure of Kutch now languishes without a cure. . . Stuti Sinha is an Indian writer & musician who lives in Dubai. In 2023, she was acclaimed in the San Antonio Writers Guild Poetry Competition, Erbacce Poetry Competition, The Passionfruit Review Poetry Contest and selected as a finalist in the DiBiase Poetry Contest. She has been published by the Society of Classical Poets, Sky Island Journal, Celestite Poetry, Moss Puppy Magazine, Slice of Life Lit Mag, Duck Duck Mongoose Mag, and Sonder Magazine, amongst others. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 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It feels a privilege to be able to write about some of that which has inspired me. Reply Paul A. Freeman December 21, 2023 Thus hexed, the fabled glory and allure of Kutch now languishes without a cure. A great final couplet, highlighting how climate change is affecting one of the more marginal environments on Planet Earth. Thanks for the read, Stuti. Reply Stuti Sinha December 22, 2023 Thank you for taking the time to read Paul. Your words ‘marginal environments’ struck a chord with me. Reply Margaret Coats December 21, 2023 I take the “fabled glory and allure” of Kutch to be the Indus Valley civilization that declined about 3000 years ago because of climate change at that time. But I did read about recent hopes for rain, and that seems to be the picture in your second quatrain, Stuti. The hopes must have been dashed as you describe in the third quatrain. What an experience for a “mortal dweller” to hope for the “cure” of the desert in his or her lifetime–even if the result is only temporary foliage. The sonnet is a fabulous triptych of (1) droughts that tend to maintain a desert landscape, (2) dramatic signs that rain may restore greenery, and (3) the ease with which promising clouds disappear. How often this must have occurred during the millennia of the White Desert’s existence! The poem gives us a feeling for it. Reply Stuti Sinha December 22, 2023 Thank you Margaret for taking the time to read. You aptly said, that this situation of droughts followed by the hope of rain, is mocked by disappearing clouds. Kutch is one place amongst many that is affected by this kind of drastic climatic experience, and sadly, these occurrences hurt civilizations then and continue to pose a threat even now. Reply Allegra Silberstein December 22, 2023 What a lovely surprise to read your beautiful sonnet this morning. My neighbors are from India. Thanks Stuti. Reply Stuti Sinha December 28, 2023 Thank you Allegra for taking the time to read. Reply Cheryl Corey December 22, 2023 Stuti, I’m currently reading a tome about British social life during the Raj, which has educated me about the diversity of India’s climate (malaria was always a huge concern, and the monsoon rains a challenge). It seems that India’s climate is somewhat like America’s with tropical, temperate, desert, and cold-weather zones. Reply Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Hi Cheryl, Thank you for taking the time to read. That is absolutely correct and therefore there is also the diversity in landscape, people, cultures, foods, languages, traditions etc. depending on the specific conditions of the region. If these are books you’re reading, I’d love to have some recommendations please 🙂 Reply Rohini December 22, 2023 Absolutely superb! I love your use of imagery: charcoal-tainted skies, chimeras in a mortal dweller’s eyes… so many gems or should I say scintillating ‘hexes’ in the ‘curse. Reply Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Thank you Rohini for taking the time to read and for your generous appreciation Reply Gary Borck December 23, 2023 Very well written, Stuti! It is joy to read such a well-crafted poem. Beautifully descriptive. Every line a delight and a wonderful final couplet. Reply Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Thank you Gary for taking the time to read and for your wonderful words of appreciation Reply Daniel Kemper December 23, 2023 I too never thought about deserts in India, thinking more of its southern, famously monsoon-drenched regions. The Kutch, reminded me of what is arguable the biblical Cush — which has similar deserts — the afar. The human hopes rising and falling with the wind of nature, which is a phenomenon common to all, is well illustrated in its most extreme forms here. Very pleasant to see sonnets of serious craftsmanship. Reply Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Thank you Daniel for taking the time to read. I am delighted that this has been a doorway for people to know a little bit about deserts in India. I happen to have lived for the longest time in one of those ‘monsoon-drenched’ regions in India, you’ve mentioned. Ironically I now live in the desert in Middle East 🙂 Reply Shamik Banerjee January 23, 2024 Dear Stuti, your use of such refined language not only gives us a glimpse into the formation of Kutch but also explains why it (or just every desert) is ‘cursed’. I also like the way you’ve portrayed certain natural events with words like forking light, charcoal-tainted skies, etc. The part, ‘flickers of abated hope ignite chimeras in a mortal dweller’s eyes’ strikes hard because the same is true for farmers of the equatorial regions, whose hopes die every day due to lack of rainfall. This poem is a complete package of excellent articulation and precision. Reply Stuti Sinha January 29, 2024 Thanks Shamik. I truly appreciate the time you’ve taken to read the piece and write such a detailed comment. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson December 21, 2023 Stuti, I am among those who never knew India had a desert. I have lived in a semi-arid region of West Texas with cactus, mesquite, and tarantulas, but still find it difficult to imagine such a desert bereft of any life like the Gobi, the Sahara, and now the Kutch. This is a great poem that brings the reality of the desert into vivid view. The picture above it adds to the solemnity of your well-crafted words. Excellent work and cause for a pause in our contemplation. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 22, 2023 Thank you so much for taking the time to read. India has such diverse landscape. It feels a privilege to be able to write about some of that which has inspired me. Reply
Paul A. Freeman December 21, 2023 Thus hexed, the fabled glory and allure of Kutch now languishes without a cure. A great final couplet, highlighting how climate change is affecting one of the more marginal environments on Planet Earth. Thanks for the read, Stuti. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 22, 2023 Thank you for taking the time to read Paul. Your words ‘marginal environments’ struck a chord with me. Reply
Margaret Coats December 21, 2023 I take the “fabled glory and allure” of Kutch to be the Indus Valley civilization that declined about 3000 years ago because of climate change at that time. But I did read about recent hopes for rain, and that seems to be the picture in your second quatrain, Stuti. The hopes must have been dashed as you describe in the third quatrain. What an experience for a “mortal dweller” to hope for the “cure” of the desert in his or her lifetime–even if the result is only temporary foliage. The sonnet is a fabulous triptych of (1) droughts that tend to maintain a desert landscape, (2) dramatic signs that rain may restore greenery, and (3) the ease with which promising clouds disappear. How often this must have occurred during the millennia of the White Desert’s existence! The poem gives us a feeling for it. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 22, 2023 Thank you Margaret for taking the time to read. You aptly said, that this situation of droughts followed by the hope of rain, is mocked by disappearing clouds. Kutch is one place amongst many that is affected by this kind of drastic climatic experience, and sadly, these occurrences hurt civilizations then and continue to pose a threat even now. Reply
Allegra Silberstein December 22, 2023 What a lovely surprise to read your beautiful sonnet this morning. My neighbors are from India. Thanks Stuti. Reply
Cheryl Corey December 22, 2023 Stuti, I’m currently reading a tome about British social life during the Raj, which has educated me about the diversity of India’s climate (malaria was always a huge concern, and the monsoon rains a challenge). It seems that India’s climate is somewhat like America’s with tropical, temperate, desert, and cold-weather zones. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Hi Cheryl, Thank you for taking the time to read. That is absolutely correct and therefore there is also the diversity in landscape, people, cultures, foods, languages, traditions etc. depending on the specific conditions of the region. If these are books you’re reading, I’d love to have some recommendations please 🙂 Reply
Rohini December 22, 2023 Absolutely superb! I love your use of imagery: charcoal-tainted skies, chimeras in a mortal dweller’s eyes… so many gems or should I say scintillating ‘hexes’ in the ‘curse. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Thank you Rohini for taking the time to read and for your generous appreciation Reply
Gary Borck December 23, 2023 Very well written, Stuti! It is joy to read such a well-crafted poem. Beautifully descriptive. Every line a delight and a wonderful final couplet. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Thank you Gary for taking the time to read and for your wonderful words of appreciation Reply
Daniel Kemper December 23, 2023 I too never thought about deserts in India, thinking more of its southern, famously monsoon-drenched regions. The Kutch, reminded me of what is arguable the biblical Cush — which has similar deserts — the afar. The human hopes rising and falling with the wind of nature, which is a phenomenon common to all, is well illustrated in its most extreme forms here. Very pleasant to see sonnets of serious craftsmanship. Reply
Stuti Sinha December 30, 2023 Thank you Daniel for taking the time to read. I am delighted that this has been a doorway for people to know a little bit about deserts in India. I happen to have lived for the longest time in one of those ‘monsoon-drenched’ regions in India, you’ve mentioned. Ironically I now live in the desert in Middle East 🙂 Reply
Shamik Banerjee January 23, 2024 Dear Stuti, your use of such refined language not only gives us a glimpse into the formation of Kutch but also explains why it (or just every desert) is ‘cursed’. I also like the way you’ve portrayed certain natural events with words like forking light, charcoal-tainted skies, etc. The part, ‘flickers of abated hope ignite chimeras in a mortal dweller’s eyes’ strikes hard because the same is true for farmers of the equatorial regions, whose hopes die every day due to lack of rainfall. This poem is a complete package of excellent articulation and precision. Reply
Stuti Sinha January 29, 2024 Thanks Shamik. I truly appreciate the time you’ve taken to read the piece and write such a detailed comment. Reply