I love both the metaphor and the message of this poem. Your stars are not those of mythology, but of…
I enjoy the internal speculation given in verse form here (the Chicago weatherman is an apt illustration for the fickle…
Very thought-provoking poem, Scharlie. I read it three times, each time being drawn closer to the mood and the setting.
This is an incredibly engaging work. You masterfully depict a ghostly, ethereal scene, with visions of the dead and a…
Good, Paul--both. In the last line of the 1st, you could go on (not to say should!): the "go's transitory…
I love both the metaphor and the message of this poem. Your stars are not those of mythology, but of…
I enjoy the internal speculation given in verse form here (the Chicago weatherman is an apt illustration for the fickle…
Very thought-provoking poem, Scharlie. I read it three times, each time being drawn closer to the mood and the setting.
This is an incredibly engaging work. You masterfully depict a ghostly, ethereal scene, with visions of the dead and a…
Good, Paul--both. In the last line of the 1st, you could go on (not to say should!): the "go's transitory…