Sherlock Holmes and Watson drawing from original publicationHow to Write a Sestina (with Examples and Diagrams) The Society December 14, 2016 For Educators, Poetry, Poetry Forms 2 Comments by Dusty Grein The sestina originated among the troubadours of medieval France’s Provence region, and the modern thirty-nine line form is attributed to one of these traveling poet entertainers of the twelfth century, Arnaut Daniel. Daniel’s sestina form was admired by Dante Alighieri, who introduced it to Italian poetry as well. Related How to Write a Sonnet How to Write a Haiku How to Write a Rondeau How to Write a Villanelle How to Write a Poem Like the Raven The sestina is one of the more challenging forms of the era, and perhaps that is one reason it is also a very fulfilling form to craft a poem in – especially when it comes together well. Like many French forms, like the villanelle and the triolet, the sestina is very strictly patterned. Unlike these other forms however, the sestina in its original form was not written using rhymes. Instead it uses a set of six ending-words in six different patterns of six-line stanzas (sestets), followed by a three-line envoi which uses all six of these refrained words. This gives the poem its thirty-nine lines. The sestina is a metered form, and as long as the pattern is maintained any meter may be employed; in the English language, iambic pentameter is the most common meter chosen. The Pattern If we look at the ending words for each line, and label them with the letters A to F, the first six line stanza has the pattern: A B C D E F To generate the pattern for the second stanza, we take these letters and starting with the final one (F), we alternate picking up letters from the front and then the back until we have used all six. This gives us the following pattern for the second stanza: F A E B D C This diagram may better help to explain the pattern: We repeat this same technique to create four more patterns, each one reordering the letters from the one above. Our resulting six stanza patterns look like this: Stanza 1 – A B C D E F Stanza 2 – F A E B D C Stanza 3 – C F D A B E Stanza 4 – E C B F A D Stanza 5 – D E A C F B Stanza 6 – B D F E C A The final three line envoi is done many ways. The only hard and fast rule here, is that each line must end in one of the six words, and contain another inside, so that all six are used in these three lines. Purists will say that the pattern should be: (B) E, (D) C, (A) F This is how almost all sestinas were done during the height of their popularity, but since the 19th century poets have made some changes, and now the most common patterns for the envoi lines are (A) B, (C) D, (E) F and (F) A, (E) B, (D) C. The Circular Sestina One of the changes that came about in the 19th century was the introduction of the Circular, or Rhyming Sestina. In order to make a rhyming pattern, two sets of three rhyming words are used: Lines A,C, & E rhyme, as do lines B, D, & F. To accommodate the rhyming of these lines in alternating ababab and bababa schemes, a new sestina pattern was created: Stanza 1 – A B C D E F Stanza 2 – F A D E B C Stanza 3 – C F E B A D Stanza 4 – D C B A F E Stanza 5 – E D A F C B Stanza 6 – B E F C D A Envoi – (A) F, (B) E, (C) D An Example The sestina has, since the resurgence of its popularity in the 1930s, become a vehicle more often used to produce lighthearted and humorous results. Puns have always been at home in the form, and sometimes, the tales they tell are simple, yet strong: Sestina By Elizabeth Bishop (1911-1979) September rain falls on the house. In the failing light, the old grandmother sits in the kitchen with the child beside the Little Marvel Stove, reading the jokes from the almanac, laughing and talking to hide her tears. She thinks that her equinoctial tears and the rain that beats on the roof of the house were both foretold by the almanac, but only known to a grandmother. The iron kettle sings on the stove. She cuts some bread and says to the child, It’s time for tea now; but the child is watching the teakettle’s small hard tears dance like mad on the hot black stove, the way the rain must dance on the house. Tidying up, the old grandmother hangs up the clever almanac on its string. Birdlike, the almanac hovers half open above the child, hovers above the old grandmother and her teacup full of dark brown tears. She shivers and says she thinks the house feels chilly, and puts more wood in the stove. It was to be, says the Marvel Stove. I know what I know, says the almanac. With crayons the child draws a rigid house and a winding pathway. Then the child puts in a man with buttons like tears and shows it proudly to the grandmother. But secretly, while the grandmother busies herself about the stove, the little moons fall down like tears from between the pages of the almanac into the flower bed the child has carefully placed in the front of the house. Time to plant tears, says the almanac. The grandmother sings to the marvelous stove and the child draws another inscrutable house. This poem follows the classic sestina pattern, although the poet chose to be a bit loose with the meter, and so the tale of the child and grandmother becomes a bit less sober than it might have become had she stayed in metric form. Crafting One of Your Own The sestina is often used to tell a story, and that story can be in any genre. I have written westerns, romances and even a comedy using the form, and while it is a challenge, like anything else it becomes easier as you practice. To craft a sestina, and indeed any structured form, I have a process, and that is what I would like to share with you. The first step is to decide on your subject matter. My advice here is to begin with something or someone you know well. For this example I think I will create a story about my cousin. He is a homicide detective in a major metropolitan city, and he has been “on the job” for many years. I am not sure about the actual day-to-day life of a homicide detective, but like many others I read books and watch television shows and movies. This exposure to the make-believe world of crime fighting is all I really need to craft a fictionalized story, in verse. Now comes the most important part in the creation of a sestina – the choice of your six repeating end words. I get certain images in my mind when I picture a homicide detective. These initial mental images are, in my experience, the best things to use when crafting a narrative poem – regardless of the form. Therefore, I have chosen the following six words: a = Job, b = Badge, c = Protect, d = Crime, e = Report, f = Night Finally, before I can begin building the melodic lines in my poem, I must decide on a meter, so I can at least have a framework to craft upon. I have decided to use an eleven syllable meter, known as amphibrachic tetrameter catalectic. If this meter is unfamiliar, here is a syllabic representation of the rhythm: <dee, DUM, dee> <dee, DUM, dee> <dee, DUM, dee> <dee, DUM> So, with subject, words and meter in hand, I can layout the framework of the poem. Here is the first stanza, once the ending words are inserted. (The ~ are soft syllables, and X are hard ones): (a) ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ job (b) ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ badge (c) ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ x ~ protect (d) ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ crime (e) ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ x ~ report (f) ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ x ~ ~ night Now comes the fun part for the creative poet inside you. Using the rhythm of the meter, we tell our story, using the end words in the right places. This is where your skill and dedication to painting word pictures comes into play, and may take some time. If you write one stanza at a time, and then repeat the steps, you can create quite a compelling tale. Using these steps, here is the completed poem I wrote, dedicated to my cousin, and all the men and women who put in long hours and energy bringing those responsible to justice: The Job By Dusty Grein It feels like forever I’ve been on the job. Pinned down by the weight of my gun and my badge; my duty is etched there, to serve and protect. The uniforms tape off the scene of the crime at this point, there still isn’t much to report, It promises to be one hell of a night. My partner and I will work into the night; It’s on days like this I truly hate my job. The worst part of all is the daily report, Complete with the number and name from my badge I lay out the facts of a hideous crime. The victim is gone; one we failed to protect. Now my reputation I have to protect. From hero to scapegoat – it just takes one night; a free-roaming villain, or one unsolved crime. To close every case is the goal of the job, the reason each day that I put on the badge. I wish I could put that inside the report. The televised anchors all love to report to viewers – the public I’ve sworn to protect – The slightest mistake by one who wears the badge. The airwaves are filled with bad news every night, I wish that good news was a part of their job Like how, with hard work, we usually solve the crime. I shudder recalling details from this crime; gunfire – In my mind, I hear its report. Deductive pretending is part of my job. Sometimes sanity becomes hard to protect when facing this ugliness night after night. Emotions grow cold when you’re wearing the badge. My life? A lot simpler before the gold badge. Back then it was mostly stopping petty crime, And helping my neighbors sleep better at night. I still had to fill out each detailed report, the public I still did my best to protect; promotions happen when you’re good at your job. “Now, wearing my badge is more than just a job,” I repeat this each night as I write my report. “By solving these crimes, my whole world I protect.” As you can see, the creation of a sestina is not as difficult as it may seem going in. It does require the building of thirty-nine metered lines, but that is the job of a poet – to build word images and create emotional and mental reactions through the creation of word art. Challenge yourself, and you might be surprised at just how wonderful a metered story can be. Post your sestina in the comments section below. Sestinas Published by the Society of Classical Poets The Colour of Dying by Maroula Blades Sestina: Falun Dafa by Sylvia Telfer The Indian Ballad of Gitchy Naigow by Douglas Thornton Dust, a Sestina by Sally Carter Views expressed by individual poets and writers on this website and by commenters do not represent the views of the entire Society. The comments section on regular posts is meant to be a place for civil and fruitful discussion. Pseudonyms are discouraged. The individual poet or writer featured in a post has the ability to remove any or all comments by emailing submissions@ classicalpoets.org with the details and under the subject title “Remove Comment.” Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Related 2 Responses Carol Smallwood December 14, 2016 Thank you very much for the clear directions and wonderful help on the sestina. I’ve managed the form but meter takes a skill I need because hearing it drives me to distraction. Maybe an article on meter would help? One by you would be much appreciated: tips and directions step by step! Reply Narendra Rajkumar December 21, 2017 A Traditional Sestina – 21.12.17 The Customer’s Experience Penned by Narendra Rajkumar Eighteen years and more worked in a Retail Store, First to reach each day and stayed ’till closing time. Factory management was my experience – The Food Retail Industry was quite different. Each day was something new, meeting customers, Satisfying their needs and being pleasant. Good relations means always being pleasant, You have to work hard to keep them in the store – Your best investment is in your Customers. Maintaining stock, available at all time, No sense coming back to see goods different, Keeping stock levels calls for some experience. Customers must have good shopping experience, Staff must be always courteous and pleasant – You lose customers when service is different. All staff helps to return customers to store, Prompt service, quick, good prices works every time, Helping Hand is a gift to all customers. Display each price – the right of each Customer, Each day of shopping must be a good experience – This must happen for all shoppers every time, Isolate workers who cannot be pleasant, Find something for that, anything different, Word is spread to stay away from the store. Shoppers return for new goods that are different, The idea, always satisfy all customers – All shoppers must like returning to the store, Always make shopping a pleasant experience. Cashiers are important with being pleasant, Quality service, their Watchword, every time. Choosing always to please customers every time, Advise customers if a price is different – Customers understand once you are pleasant, Business can only prosper with Customers. Value what is good customer experience, Failure to adhere leads to closing the store. Different or no prices upset a customer, Someone explains when a product is different, Have someone pleasant welcome all to the store. Reply Leave a Reply to Carol Smallwood Cancel Reply Your email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.