"Sacramento River Valley" by Albert Bierstadt‘Ever Flowing’ by Dusty Grein The Society January 22, 2023 Beauty, Poetry 19 Comments . Ever Flowing Upon the rushing river’s bank I stand, deep water, ever flowing as it goes. The turbulence of my life it reflects as if my mortal pain, it truly knows. I close my eyes while cruel heartache builds and boils. It swirls and churns from deep within, akin to eddies in the river’s course, all ever flowing seaward as they spin. A lifetime lived within each second’s tick, my heart’s emotions ever flowing strong form rapids, waterfalls, and twisting turns, which carve deep channels as they sing love’s song. Though time often appears to stand quite still, it’s always ever flowing, moving fast; toward blank tomorrows and the great unknown, each day it takes us further from the past. Through waves of dappled light and shadows dark we chart the river’s course each day anew, as yearning, ever flowing, on we roll, to seek the distant rest of oceans, blue. Before us lies the fear of change and loss— deep love becomes deep grief when torn apart. Time’s ever flowing nature is our bane, yet passing time can mend a broken heart. My life’s become the river’s equal now, surviving ever flowing pain and grief while drawing strength from pools of love and faith, I cherish moments calm, however brief. . . Dusty Grein is an author, poet, graphics designer, professional editor, and book publisher. Originally from Federal Way, Washington, he currently lives in the hills of central Oregon, where many of his 21 grandchildren occupy much of his free time. When he is not busy writing, editing, and producing books for others, he donates a great deal of his time and graphics talent. In honor of his first-born grandson Eddy, lost to SIDS at 13 weeks old, he creates free memorial images for bereaved families, with a special focus on infant and pregnancy loss. His blog, From Grandpa’s Heart… is followed by fans around the world. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 19 Responses Mark F. Stone January 22, 2023 Dusty, Wow. Such a beautiful poem. Mark Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you. Reply Paul Buchheit January 22, 2023 Life flowing like the waters. Very nice, Dusty. Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you. Reply Paul Freeman January 22, 2023 A poem that has the natural flow of a river. Nicely done, Dusty. Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thanks Paul. Reply David Paul Behrens January 22, 2023 Quite beautiful, indeed! I love the subject matter. Thank you! Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you. Reply Russel Winick January 22, 2023 Very moving. Nicely done! Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you. Reply Cheryl Corey January 22, 2023 The fourth stanza is my favorite. I like the way that you present the theme of life as a river flowing toward the sea, and the way that you carry the theme forward with the words “ever flowing” is nicely done. Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thanks Cheryl. I’m glad the poem resonated with you. Reply Allegra Silberstein January 23, 2023 Life truly is a river flowing as you tell us so beautifully. Thank You …Allegra Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson January 23, 2023 The analogy of life, or at least aspects of life, to a river is probably as old as humans first saw rivers, but your poem is so beautifully thought out and written. I commend you for the evocative imagery and particularly am taken with your final two lines, “while drawing strength from pools of love and faith, I cherish moments calm, however brief.” That is wonderful writing. Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you, Roy. I agree that life as a river is a well-worn trope, but the flow (sic) stayed strong as I crafted it, so I’m happy with the result. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant January 24, 2023 Dusty, this is beautiful composition that I am certain will resonate with many… I hear the echoes of my life in the mellifluous flow of the water. Thank you. Reply Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thanks, Susan. As one of my favorites in the SCP family, your comments mean a lot to me. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant January 25, 2023 Dusty, you are most welcome, and I simply must tell you this. I have just written my first sonnet corona in iambic pentameter for my new granddaughter. It was inspired by your superb sonnet corona: “You’re Sixteen Today.” I am thrilled with the way it’s turned out… a poem that wouldn’t exist had it not been for your shining example. Thank you! Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
David Paul Behrens January 22, 2023 Quite beautiful, indeed! I love the subject matter. Thank you! Reply
Cheryl Corey January 22, 2023 The fourth stanza is my favorite. I like the way that you present the theme of life as a river flowing toward the sea, and the way that you carry the theme forward with the words “ever flowing” is nicely done. Reply
Allegra Silberstein January 23, 2023 Life truly is a river flowing as you tell us so beautifully. Thank You …Allegra Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson January 23, 2023 The analogy of life, or at least aspects of life, to a river is probably as old as humans first saw rivers, but your poem is so beautifully thought out and written. I commend you for the evocative imagery and particularly am taken with your final two lines, “while drawing strength from pools of love and faith, I cherish moments calm, however brief.” That is wonderful writing. Reply
Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thank you, Roy. I agree that life as a river is a well-worn trope, but the flow (sic) stayed strong as I crafted it, so I’m happy with the result. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant January 24, 2023 Dusty, this is beautiful composition that I am certain will resonate with many… I hear the echoes of my life in the mellifluous flow of the water. Thank you. Reply
Dusty Grein January 24, 2023 Thanks, Susan. As one of my favorites in the SCP family, your comments mean a lot to me. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant January 25, 2023 Dusty, you are most welcome, and I simply must tell you this. I have just written my first sonnet corona in iambic pentameter for my new granddaughter. It was inspired by your superb sonnet corona: “You’re Sixteen Today.” I am thrilled with the way it’s turned out… a poem that wouldn’t exist had it not been for your shining example. Thank you!