a town hall (Mrschimpf)‘Wisdom and Sway’: A Poem by Mark F. Stone The Society January 28, 2025 Poetry, Satire 18 Comments . Wisdom and Sway Life was tranquil and calm, not a care, not a qualm, in a town not too near you, but not far away. It was led by a mayor, a powerful player, a grandiose mayor with wisdom and sway. We’d always considered the sky to be blue. It seemed like a perfectly fine point of view. Then the mayor decreed, in a manner routine: “According to science, the sky is now green.” His Council, like trumpets, all praised the decree. They knew the town’s tabloid would surely agree. He said to the Council, “We must have compliance. We can’t let the citizens challenge the science.” He ordered all statues of “blue sky” adherents be toppled and chopped up, the scrap sold on clearance. He said the song “Blue Skies” would henceforth be spurned, the sheet music brought to the town square and burned. But claims of a blue sky continued to smolder. Objections to “science” became ever bolder. The obstinate mayor said, “I’ll shut them down!” He built a huge canopy over the town. To ensure that the blue sky would never be seen, he painted the canopy’s underside green. “The doubters,” he said, “will be put to the test. Suspicion and rumors will be laid to rest!” A glitch soon appeared in the canopy plan. The town didn’t see that a blizzard began. It dumped half a foot on the township below. The canopy caved from the weight of the snow. The warmth of the wintertime sun reappeared. The townspeople shoveled. The streets were all cleared. They smirked when the mayor’s approach went awry. Above them again was the gleaming blue sky! The Council was silent, its fealty in doubt. The mayor was frantic and so he cried out: “Where are my trumpets? Where is my science? How will I ever defeat this defiance?” And so life carries on—every dusk turns to dawn— in a town not too near you, but not far away. It’s led by a mayor—a now humbled player— a grandiose mayor with wisdom and sway. . . Mark F. Stone worked as an attorney (active duty and civil service) for the United States Air Force for 33 years and is retired. He began writing poems in 2005, as a way to woo his bride-to-be into wedlock. His poems have been published by Light, The Ohio Poetry Association, The Road Not Taken: The Journal of Formal Poetry, the Society of Classical Poets, Whatfinger News, Ric Edelman’s The Truth About Your Future podcast, and the Seeking Alpha Alpha Picks podcast. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 18 Responses Cynthia Erlandson January 28, 2025 What a fun story — it had me smiling all the way through, Mark! And your use of anapestic meter, combined with couplets (except for the bookends of first and last verse) were part of the perfect vehicle to convey humor. I hope that no citizens were smothered by the canopy when it came down. And I wish that more grandiose mayors would be humbled. I know of a mayor and town council not at all far away that remind me of this one. Reply Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Cynthia, I’m pleased that it made you smile! Mark Reply Mark Stellinga January 28, 2025 A very clever & ‘happy-ending’ piece, Mark, and one that reminds me of once having been in the same situation as your bio points out you once were. I hope yours worked out better than this poet’s – 🙂 Poetry Wasn’t Enough Remember how Daffodil Finnigan Swore she would never begin-again Loving a man, So she constantly ran From men – so’s not to fall-in-again! Well… into her life walked a poet Who dug her, and – meaning to show it – But easy-to-hate – (And weigh over-wait) – To bolster his chance to not blow it – Plied her with poetry – sending his best – Some very poignant – others in jest – He wooed her with verse ‘Til she deemed him a curse – Then she sued him – for being a pest! Reply Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Mark, Happily, poetry made something happen, in my case. I’m glad you like my poem. Yours is clever, too! Mark Reply Roy Eugene Peterson January 28, 2025 You built a great lesson into this fine poem about leaders who mislead and lie. Seems familiar to me! Reply Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Roy, Thank you for your kind words! Mark Reply Julian D. Woodruff January 28, 2025 Clever narrative and rhymes, too, Mark. The line beginning “The town didn’t see …” threw me a bit; would you consider something like “”None had foreseen it: …” Reply Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Julian, I always welcome constructive criticism. I will mull over your intriguing suggestion. Thank you! Mark Reply Margaret Coats January 28, 2025 I have read this very enjoyable poem before. Mark, did you previously publish it (or an earlier version), under another title, or place it in Comments? Any change to reflect greater brightness with less political blueness? Good to have it appear now. Reply Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Margaret, I’m not sure how you read the poem, since it’s never been published in print or online until today. But I’m glad that you enjoyed it! Mark Reply Paul A. Freeman January 29, 2025 A fun piece with political overtones. Indeed, we can learn from leaders who become tyrannical, though usually there is purpose behind their edicts. I’ve heard religious leaders claim that AIDS does not affect the faithful, and that polio vaccines (when the disease was nearly eradicated worldwide) were a trick of the West to make non-Westerner children infertile. I’ve seen names of roads, cities, bodies of water even, changed to fit in with political agendas and self-aggrandisement (Robert Mugabe Road still stretches across Zimbabwe). Your poem, Mark, is more akin to the Emperor’s New Clothes, where a population agrees to a blatant untruth out to fear, misplaced loyalty, friendship even, in the face of the true facts (but these days, who’s true facts?). Thanks for a poignant, timely read. Reply Mark F. Stone January 29, 2025 Paul, You’re welcome. Thank you for stopping by! Mark Reply James Sale January 29, 2025 Wonderful Mark – well written and exactly observed: a parable for our times, somewhere near us! Reply Mark F. Stone January 29, 2025 James, Thank you! I appreciate your kind remarks. Mark Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant January 29, 2025 I’m with James. This is most certainly a parable for our times. I love it when art highlights the idiocy we are force-fed daily – and you have shone a glaring spotlight in a well-crafted and highly entertaining poem on all that goes wrong when science and governments are intrinsically linked. Thank you very much indeed, Mark. Reply Mark F. Stone January 30, 2025 Susan, You’re welcome! I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Mark Reply Susan Rives January 30, 2025 I truly enjoyed this. Your choice of meter was perfect for describing the complexities (and absurdities) of this modern-day dilemma while keeping the tone light-hearted. Well done! Reply Mark F. Stone January 31, 2025 Susan, Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts. Mark Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Cynthia Erlandson January 28, 2025 What a fun story — it had me smiling all the way through, Mark! And your use of anapestic meter, combined with couplets (except for the bookends of first and last verse) were part of the perfect vehicle to convey humor. I hope that no citizens were smothered by the canopy when it came down. And I wish that more grandiose mayors would be humbled. I know of a mayor and town council not at all far away that remind me of this one. Reply
Mark Stellinga January 28, 2025 A very clever & ‘happy-ending’ piece, Mark, and one that reminds me of once having been in the same situation as your bio points out you once were. I hope yours worked out better than this poet’s – 🙂 Poetry Wasn’t Enough Remember how Daffodil Finnigan Swore she would never begin-again Loving a man, So she constantly ran From men – so’s not to fall-in-again! Well… into her life walked a poet Who dug her, and – meaning to show it – But easy-to-hate – (And weigh over-wait) – To bolster his chance to not blow it – Plied her with poetry – sending his best – Some very poignant – others in jest – He wooed her with verse ‘Til she deemed him a curse – Then she sued him – for being a pest! Reply
Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Mark, Happily, poetry made something happen, in my case. I’m glad you like my poem. Yours is clever, too! Mark Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson January 28, 2025 You built a great lesson into this fine poem about leaders who mislead and lie. Seems familiar to me! Reply
Julian D. Woodruff January 28, 2025 Clever narrative and rhymes, too, Mark. The line beginning “The town didn’t see …” threw me a bit; would you consider something like “”None had foreseen it: …” Reply
Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Julian, I always welcome constructive criticism. I will mull over your intriguing suggestion. Thank you! Mark Reply
Margaret Coats January 28, 2025 I have read this very enjoyable poem before. Mark, did you previously publish it (or an earlier version), under another title, or place it in Comments? Any change to reflect greater brightness with less political blueness? Good to have it appear now. Reply
Mark F. Stone January 28, 2025 Margaret, I’m not sure how you read the poem, since it’s never been published in print or online until today. But I’m glad that you enjoyed it! Mark Reply
Paul A. Freeman January 29, 2025 A fun piece with political overtones. Indeed, we can learn from leaders who become tyrannical, though usually there is purpose behind their edicts. I’ve heard religious leaders claim that AIDS does not affect the faithful, and that polio vaccines (when the disease was nearly eradicated worldwide) were a trick of the West to make non-Westerner children infertile. I’ve seen names of roads, cities, bodies of water even, changed to fit in with political agendas and self-aggrandisement (Robert Mugabe Road still stretches across Zimbabwe). Your poem, Mark, is more akin to the Emperor’s New Clothes, where a population agrees to a blatant untruth out to fear, misplaced loyalty, friendship even, in the face of the true facts (but these days, who’s true facts?). Thanks for a poignant, timely read. Reply
James Sale January 29, 2025 Wonderful Mark – well written and exactly observed: a parable for our times, somewhere near us! Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant January 29, 2025 I’m with James. This is most certainly a parable for our times. I love it when art highlights the idiocy we are force-fed daily – and you have shone a glaring spotlight in a well-crafted and highly entertaining poem on all that goes wrong when science and governments are intrinsically linked. Thank you very much indeed, Mark. Reply
Mark F. Stone January 30, 2025 Susan, You’re welcome! I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Mark Reply
Susan Rives January 30, 2025 I truly enjoyed this. Your choice of meter was perfect for describing the complexities (and absurdities) of this modern-day dilemma while keeping the tone light-hearted. Well done! Reply