‘The Gospel According to Hoffman-Laroche’ by Mike Alexander The Society April 22, 2014 Humor, Poetry 3 Comments Tell me why the patient is still crying. What pharmaceuticals? pain pills? barbiturates? What pretties has the doctor been supplying? Finish the prescription. Don’t give up trying the newest, truest of amalgamates. Tell me why the patient is still crying. Xanax will put you down when you are flying, while Ecstacy delivers altered states. What pretties has the doctor been supplying? Whatever truths you cannot help denying let Sodium pentothal unlatch the gates. Tell me why the patient is still crying. One dosage is for selling, one for buying, Rohypnol for those reluctant dates. What pretties has the doctor been supplying? Tell me what you dole out to the dying. What paradise or punishment awaits? Tell me why. The patient is still crying. What pretties has the doctor been supplying? Featured Image: “Pharmacy – Daily Remedies,” photograph, by Mark Savad. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 3 Responses James Ph. Kotsbar April 22, 2014 Great modern villanelle! (so sadly true) Reply Marc Tretin May 4, 2014 You got it right. We are more than our synapse chemistry, even if we are not, because we FEEL we are more than our biochemistry. Reply Mike Alexander May 10, 2014 Marc, I agree. I myself like how this poem talks about biochemistry & our artificial paradises, but laces in a lot of religious concerns. Done that before, but it’s always a nifty trick. Mike Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Marc Tretin May 4, 2014 You got it right. We are more than our synapse chemistry, even if we are not, because we FEEL we are more than our biochemistry. Reply
Mike Alexander May 10, 2014 Marc, I agree. I myself like how this poem talks about biochemistry & our artificial paradises, but laces in a lot of religious concerns. Done that before, but it’s always a nifty trick. Mike Reply