Pieta, by Michelangelo‘Once’: A Poem for Good Friday, by Jeffrey Essmann The Society March 29, 2024 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 7 Comments . Once Once he was finally dead; once just a piece Of meat nailed to the planks of scabrous wood; Once suffering had done all that it could To him before it ceded him release; And once it seemed that evil no surcease Or reasonable limit understood And thereby the nobility and good Of human motive rendered mere caprice; Then earth, depleted, lost, benumbed with grief Did with a ravaged tenderness enfold The shattered flesh within her cold embrace And sealed it with a stone of unbelief. But there was something here no tomb could hold: A life that death and unbelief displaced. . . Jeffrey Essmann is an essayist and poet living in New York. His poetry has appeared in numerous magazines and literary journals, among them Agape Review, America Magazine, Dappled Things, the St. Austin Review, U.S. Catholic, Grand Little Things, Heart of Flesh Literary Journal, and various venues of the Benedictine monastery with which he is an oblate. He is editor of the Catholic Poetry Room page on the Integrated Catholic Life website. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 7 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson March 29, 2024 Amen! Reply Cynthia Erlandson March 29, 2024 This is extremely moving, Jeffrey. That evil has no reasonable limit; that earth enfolded Him with a “ravaged tenderness”; that the stone represented unbelief; that no tomb could hold His life — these are all profound truths made more visible by their expression here. Reply Joseph S. Salemi March 29, 2024 A very beautiful and powerful sonnet, wrapping a complete idea of resurrection and redemption in a small space. The language is as perfect, smooth, and chiselled as the Pieta sculpture that illustrates it. I am reminded of certain 17th-century religious poems. Reply Dana Delibovi March 29, 2024 Lovely poem. Austere yet hopeful as as the day itself. Reply Warren Bonham March 30, 2024 Great and timely poem! I really liked the “stone of unbelief” metaphor. Just like the father of the demon-possessed boy in Mark 9, we’re all held back from receiving what is already ours by a little unbelief. Reply Adam Sedia March 30, 2024 A beautiful meditative sonnet. I especially like your ending: associating death and unbelief, and how it was those forces that snuffed out life – which yet survives ( a very subtle allusion to the coming Resurrection). Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant March 31, 2024 Jeffrey, your words are powerful and beautiful. The horror gives way to awe… and the glory that shines in the closing couplet is the miraculous reason for today’s celebration. Very well done indeed! Thank you! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Cynthia Erlandson March 29, 2024 This is extremely moving, Jeffrey. That evil has no reasonable limit; that earth enfolded Him with a “ravaged tenderness”; that the stone represented unbelief; that no tomb could hold His life — these are all profound truths made more visible by their expression here. Reply
Joseph S. Salemi March 29, 2024 A very beautiful and powerful sonnet, wrapping a complete idea of resurrection and redemption in a small space. The language is as perfect, smooth, and chiselled as the Pieta sculpture that illustrates it. I am reminded of certain 17th-century religious poems. Reply
Warren Bonham March 30, 2024 Great and timely poem! I really liked the “stone of unbelief” metaphor. Just like the father of the demon-possessed boy in Mark 9, we’re all held back from receiving what is already ours by a little unbelief. Reply
Adam Sedia March 30, 2024 A beautiful meditative sonnet. I especially like your ending: associating death and unbelief, and how it was those forces that snuffed out life – which yet survives ( a very subtle allusion to the coming Resurrection). Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant March 31, 2024 Jeffrey, your words are powerful and beautiful. The horror gives way to awe… and the glory that shines in the closing couplet is the miraculous reason for today’s celebration. Very well done indeed! Thank you! Reply