photo of Great Zimbabwe ruins by Edwin Smith‘Houses Made of Stone’: A Poem on Great Zimbabwe by Paul A. Freeman The Society July 9, 2024 Culture, Poetry 14 Comments . Houses Made of Stone Masvingo, southern Africa’s the place; a backwater, land tired and over-farmed, where army ants cut underbrush and race trimmed morsels to their hills. The air becalmed and hot as Hades. Here a ruin lies called Great Zimbabwe; houses made of stone ‘Zimbabwe’ means in English; it defies despoiling Time, abandoned and alone. Its Great Enclosure stands six metres tall, of granite bricks, held up by their own weight; a criss-cross decoration tops the wall, this relic to a long-deserted state. The Iron Age in this locale occurred around the thirteenth century, and its ten-thousand-strong community was spurred to rise above the savage bushland blitz. They traded gold and ivory, these tribes of Bantus with the rich Swahili Coast, yet not one antique document describes their kingdom nor the wealth it used to boast. A fragment of a Chinese pot, a coin, Arabian, remained within the ground that colonisers dug through to purloin whatever ancient artefacts they found. A flabby despot, or a warrior king? Who sat upon this unremembered throne? Imagination, only, now can bring to life the myth of Houses Made of Stone. . . Paul A. Freeman is the author of Rumours of Ophir, a crime novel which was taught in Zimbabwean high schools and has been translated into German. In addition to having two novels, a children’s book and an 18,000-word narrative poem (Robin Hood and Friar Tuck: Zombie Killers!) commercially published, Paul is the author of hundreds of published short stories, poems and articles. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 14 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson July 9, 2024 Lost civilizations and cultures are fascinating to contemplate. Your descriptive poem brings this one to life despite the fact so little is known. I almost have the sense you incorporated all there is to reveal about this one. From the picture I am taken with how well the wall was constructed. Thank you for such insights that pique my interest. Reply Paul A. Freeman July 9, 2024 You’re welcome, Roy. The day I visited Great Zimbabwe, myself and the person I was with were the only visitors. Reply Mary Gardner July 9, 2024 Informative and marvelous. Reply Paul A. Freeman July 9, 2024 Thank you, Mary. Reply Phil S. Rogers July 9, 2024 Interesting, informative, well written, and something I knew absolutely nothing about. Thank you! Reply Paul A. Freeman July 9, 2024 I remember how amazed I was when I found out about the place too, Phil. Reply Shamik Banerjee July 10, 2024 Thank you so much for presenting us with this informative piece, Mr. Freeman. Your detailed description prompted me to google Zimbabwe ruins, and I was astonished to find out that it was abandoned in the 15th century. It’s utterly sad that no formal historical account corroborates the wealth they possessed and were purloined of whatever remains they had. Reply Paul Freeman July 10, 2024 Thanks for reading Shamik. It is indeed strange that such a once thriving civilisation should have left so little behind. Reply Margaret Coats July 10, 2024 Paul, your poem brings up wondering questions about that long-deserted state. It was capable of building a large enclosure of solid blocks of stone, with enough engineering savoir faire to keep walls standing for centuries. Yet you imply the people were not literate, and thus we would have to call them pre-historic. They were able to decorate the top of very high walls, yet seem to have produced no other art still existent at this site. Iron Age means they used iron tools; do we know they had gold and ivory because of records from coastal regions they traded with? Ten thousand population is about the same as the small town where I was born. That can probably be calculated from long-term field use and the likely amount of food produced. You say the land is tired now; that could account for disappearance of population. But then plague or war or drought are possible explanations. Realistic mystery! Reply Paul Freeman July 10, 2024 The people of Great Zimbabwe did trade gold and ivory with East African traders and some tantalising coins and pottery, Margaret. They also carved soapstone bird statues which are on the flag. Alas, little else is known. Reply Brian A. Yapko July 10, 2024 I very much enjoyed this evocative piece, Paul, about a mysterious civilization which has disappeared and left only cryptic clues. Thank you for this! Reply Paul Freeman July 10, 2024 Thanks, Brian. What’s so fascinating about Great Zimbabwe is its uniqueness. Reply James A. Tweedie July 12, 2024 Paul, I had read of this ancient stone anomaly years ago but forgotten that it was the origin of the country’s current name and its noteworthy yet subtle presence on the national flag. Your poem is wistful to the point of nostalgia for a time when Africa was in the mix as a notable, yet vanished, seat of some form of cultural sophistication along with being a center of regional/world trade. A well-told account of your visit to the site and you ruminations on what you saw, learned, and felt about the visit afterwards. Reply Paul Freeman July 13, 2024 Thanks for reading and commenting, James. It really is a hidden gem. 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Roy Eugene Peterson July 9, 2024 Lost civilizations and cultures are fascinating to contemplate. Your descriptive poem brings this one to life despite the fact so little is known. I almost have the sense you incorporated all there is to reveal about this one. From the picture I am taken with how well the wall was constructed. Thank you for such insights that pique my interest. Reply
Paul A. Freeman July 9, 2024 You’re welcome, Roy. The day I visited Great Zimbabwe, myself and the person I was with were the only visitors. Reply
Phil S. Rogers July 9, 2024 Interesting, informative, well written, and something I knew absolutely nothing about. Thank you! Reply
Paul A. Freeman July 9, 2024 I remember how amazed I was when I found out about the place too, Phil. Reply
Shamik Banerjee July 10, 2024 Thank you so much for presenting us with this informative piece, Mr. Freeman. Your detailed description prompted me to google Zimbabwe ruins, and I was astonished to find out that it was abandoned in the 15th century. It’s utterly sad that no formal historical account corroborates the wealth they possessed and were purloined of whatever remains they had. Reply
Paul Freeman July 10, 2024 Thanks for reading Shamik. It is indeed strange that such a once thriving civilisation should have left so little behind. Reply
Margaret Coats July 10, 2024 Paul, your poem brings up wondering questions about that long-deserted state. It was capable of building a large enclosure of solid blocks of stone, with enough engineering savoir faire to keep walls standing for centuries. Yet you imply the people were not literate, and thus we would have to call them pre-historic. They were able to decorate the top of very high walls, yet seem to have produced no other art still existent at this site. Iron Age means they used iron tools; do we know they had gold and ivory because of records from coastal regions they traded with? Ten thousand population is about the same as the small town where I was born. That can probably be calculated from long-term field use and the likely amount of food produced. You say the land is tired now; that could account for disappearance of population. But then plague or war or drought are possible explanations. Realistic mystery! Reply
Paul Freeman July 10, 2024 The people of Great Zimbabwe did trade gold and ivory with East African traders and some tantalising coins and pottery, Margaret. They also carved soapstone bird statues which are on the flag. Alas, little else is known. Reply
Brian A. Yapko July 10, 2024 I very much enjoyed this evocative piece, Paul, about a mysterious civilization which has disappeared and left only cryptic clues. Thank you for this! Reply
Paul Freeman July 10, 2024 Thanks, Brian. What’s so fascinating about Great Zimbabwe is its uniqueness. Reply
James A. Tweedie July 12, 2024 Paul, I had read of this ancient stone anomaly years ago but forgotten that it was the origin of the country’s current name and its noteworthy yet subtle presence on the national flag. Your poem is wistful to the point of nostalgia for a time when Africa was in the mix as a notable, yet vanished, seat of some form of cultural sophistication along with being a center of regional/world trade. A well-told account of your visit to the site and you ruminations on what you saw, learned, and felt about the visit afterwards. Reply
Paul Freeman July 13, 2024 Thanks for reading and commenting, James. It really is a hidden gem. Reply