train at Morant's Curve, photo by Jakub Fryš‘The Iron Road’: A Poem by Martin Rizley The Society October 30, 2024 Beauty, Poetry 10 Comments . The Iron Road Flecked with the dust of snow, the iron rails Lie still and undisturbed beneath a sky Of cloudless blue where eagles freely fly, Their wings outspread to catch the wind like sails. They soar in circles high above a scene Of rocky crags and canyons where the sound Of roaring rapids rushing, wild, unbound, Resounds in ancient pine woods, dense and green. Through countless miles of pristine wilderness The iron road across the wide plain runs, By day, kissed by the light of blazing suns, By night, cloaked in the eve’s black velvet dress. Built by the brawn and courage of a host Of daring men who labored night and day To open wide the west and make a way For travelers to trek from coast to coast, These tracks that dwell in silence now, alone, Bear witness to a throng of beating hearts That met here—weathered veterans, young upstarts– To lay these rails with many a weary groan. They gave themselves as one in heart and soul And labored long and hard for many years With shovels, picks and hammers, sweat and tears, Their visionary eyes set on one goal: To open up the virgin lands before Them, stretching every fiber of their being, Their aching frame filled with the hope of seeing This royal ribbon stretched from shore to shore. And when at last the mammoth task was done, Their worn-out sinews, joints and bones could rest And know refreshment as their eyes were blessed To see the goal now reached, the victory won. These rails to their endurance testify. They speak without a word—but listen well! For in the distance, like a shriek from hell, A whistle blows, as chugging sounds draw nigh. Look there above the trees! You see its black Smoke rising from its belching, fire fed engine. You hear its puffs and feel the growing tension As now it comes, careening down the track! It thunders past, with unrelenting speed, Like some fierce steed that snorts, with nostrils flaring, Propelled by fire inside, through landscapes tearing, It flies with freedom nothing can impede. That fire was lit by blazing hearts that gave Their all to build that highway made of steel, Who labored on through years with ardent zeal And kept on moving forward to their grave. Though long deceased, their spirits did not die. They haunt you all along the railway’s length; In every hurtling train, you feel their strength, In every whistle shrill, you hear their cry! . . Martin Rizley grew up in Oklahoma and in Texas, and has served in pastoral ministry both in the United States and in Europe. He is currently serving as the pastor of a small evangelical church in the city of Málaga on the southern coast of Spain, where he lives with his wife and daughter. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 10 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson October 30, 2024 Martin, this is a poem worthy of the mighty men who felled the trees and hewed their way through rock to accomplish their great feat. What great imagery you wrote into your poem with perfect rhyme and rhythm that sang to my soul of a lasting legacy. Reply Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Thank you, Roy. I have always been fascinated by stories of the American west and its settling, and the building of the transcontinental railroad played a major role in that history. It was a mighty achievement that came at the cost of many lives. One day, when I saw a picture of a steam train crossing rugged terrain, I felt stirred to write this poem as a tribute to those who gave their lives to build that “iron road.” Reply Joseph S. Salemi October 30, 2024 Once I built a railroad, made it run — Made it race against time. Yes, I built that railroad — now it’s done. Brother, can you spare a dime? Sorry — the remembrance of this short lyric from the Depression years came to me as I read your poem. Reply Cynthia Erlandson October 30, 2024 Beautiful description, and a great tribute, Martin. Reply Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Thank you, Cynthia, for your feedback! Reply Margaret Coats October 30, 2024 Iron and fire! You reveal the spirits of the wilderness road, Martin. Their purposeful work together earns our admiration and gratitude. Reply Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Margaret, You have summarized in two words the theme of the poem– iron and fire. It is those two characteristics that make the steam train a fitting metaphor for the character of the men who built the transcontinental railroad. They themselves were men of iron and fire, which is why I describe them as still “haunting,” in a sense, the mighty work of construction they left behind, their presence felt in the power and dynamism of the trains that travel on that iron road. Reply Shamik Banerjee October 31, 2024 Rich with images and lucid in its form, this poem serves as a fine token of gratitude to every railway worker out there. Mr. Rizley, I am truly mesmerised by the topics you choose to write on and even more by the way you execute them. This piece offers an uninterrupted read and really pulls its readers in. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Reply Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Shamik, Your comments are always encouraging. Sometimes I am moved to write on a topic by a picture that I see on the internet that strikes me as poignant, mysterious or beautiful– one that stirs the imagination. That was the case with this poem. In a sense, therefore, it feels at times as if certain topics choose me, for I would not likely have written on them had I not received that visual stimulus. Reply Paul A. Freeman November 1, 2024 A great achievement indeed, and a lovely, flowing piece of poetry. But was the land ‘virgin’ if indigenous peoples already lived there? Thanks for the read. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson October 30, 2024 Martin, this is a poem worthy of the mighty men who felled the trees and hewed their way through rock to accomplish their great feat. What great imagery you wrote into your poem with perfect rhyme and rhythm that sang to my soul of a lasting legacy. Reply
Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Thank you, Roy. I have always been fascinated by stories of the American west and its settling, and the building of the transcontinental railroad played a major role in that history. It was a mighty achievement that came at the cost of many lives. One day, when I saw a picture of a steam train crossing rugged terrain, I felt stirred to write this poem as a tribute to those who gave their lives to build that “iron road.” Reply
Joseph S. Salemi October 30, 2024 Once I built a railroad, made it run — Made it race against time. Yes, I built that railroad — now it’s done. Brother, can you spare a dime? Sorry — the remembrance of this short lyric from the Depression years came to me as I read your poem. Reply
Margaret Coats October 30, 2024 Iron and fire! You reveal the spirits of the wilderness road, Martin. Their purposeful work together earns our admiration and gratitude. Reply
Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Margaret, You have summarized in two words the theme of the poem– iron and fire. It is those two characteristics that make the steam train a fitting metaphor for the character of the men who built the transcontinental railroad. They themselves were men of iron and fire, which is why I describe them as still “haunting,” in a sense, the mighty work of construction they left behind, their presence felt in the power and dynamism of the trains that travel on that iron road. Reply
Shamik Banerjee October 31, 2024 Rich with images and lucid in its form, this poem serves as a fine token of gratitude to every railway worker out there. Mr. Rizley, I am truly mesmerised by the topics you choose to write on and even more by the way you execute them. This piece offers an uninterrupted read and really pulls its readers in. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Reply
Martin Rizley October 31, 2024 Shamik, Your comments are always encouraging. Sometimes I am moved to write on a topic by a picture that I see on the internet that strikes me as poignant, mysterious or beautiful– one that stirs the imagination. That was the case with this poem. In a sense, therefore, it feels at times as if certain topics choose me, for I would not likely have written on them had I not received that visual stimulus. Reply
Paul A. Freeman November 1, 2024 A great achievement indeed, and a lovely, flowing piece of poetry. But was the land ‘virgin’ if indigenous peoples already lived there? Thanks for the read. Reply