"The Tax Collectors" by Reymerswaele ‘Good Intentions’: A Poem by Warren Bonham The Society March 11, 2024 Poetry, Satire 19 Comments . Good Intentions “One of the painful things about our time is that those who feel certainty are stupid, and those with any imagination and understanding are filled with doubt and indecision.” —Bertrand Russell The highway to our current hell was paved by those who all meant well. They sit on high, self-satisfied, and marvel at how hard they tried, declaring they did all they could to bring about what they thought good. They sit atop the highest peak, with pity for the unwashed weak, and sip their wine while they behold the faceless human clay they mold through theories thought in their think tanks, still puzzled when not one says “Thanks.” Despite their effort and intent, and all our money that they spent, we scratch and claw to make ends meet but more and more meet with defeat. We’re isolated and afraid, And vaguely sense we’ve been betrayed. The very ones who are most sure that they are selfless, wise, and pure, do not possess the common sense to see their own incompetence. But if we’ll look, the wise stand out, they are the ones who have self-doubt. They doubt their own ability to know what’s good for you and me. But even when they know what’s good, since they have sense, it’s understood that things may turn out bad of course, when good is done by using force. So, when someone with good intent inside our bloated government makes changes that have vast extent, with money that will be misspent, through force that could be violent, we know they’ll never make a dent. . . Warren Bonham is a private equity investor who lives in Southlake, Texas. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 19 Responses Joseph S. Salemi March 11, 2024 The epigraph by Russell at the start of this poem replicates what William Butler Yeats said in his poem “The Second Coming” — The best lack all conviction, while the worst Are full of passionate intensity. This is a strong and effective poem. It should be noted that in the last stanza the poet uses monorhyme to emphasize his point, as he makes closure. Reply Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Those lines from The Second Coming are spot-on. Thanks for drawing that parallel. Reply Brian A. Yapko March 11, 2024 Great poem, great message, Warren. Yes, the self-congratulating narcissistic social-engineering lovers of humanity on the left who are so drunk with faux compassion for those they infantilize that they’ll make us all the victims of their drunk driving. As you can see, I feel warmly on the subject. A great spotlight! Well done! Reply Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 I like the drunk-driving imagery. In this case, I think they’re drunk on their own power. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson March 11, 2024 Warren, I am particularly enamored with how you treated the subject of incompetence in high places and the attitudes of elites that they are the self-aggrandizing arbiters of fate and circumstance as the narcissists they are. They do not choose to understand but rather seek to force their own callous precepts on the innocent and unwary. Excellent work! Reply Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Thanks for the comments! I see no evidence that there is any sincere attempt to truly understand anything but there is a lot of evidence that callous precepts are being forced upon us. Reply Norma Pain March 11, 2024 “The road to Hell is paved with good intentions”. When it comes to the WEF, I question whether they have good intentions. Great poem and perfect rhyme and meter. Thank you Warren. Reply Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Great point about the WEF. It is very hard to see how forcing us to give up our property rights and eat bugs for nourishment can come from people with good intentions. Reply Cynthia Erlandson March 11, 2024 This is a truth we all know, very well expressed! “through theories thought in their think tanks” is really humorous, and the alliteration brings that out. “do not possess the common sense to see their own incompetence” is my other favorite line. Thanks, Warren! Reply Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Thank you! Unfortunately, these people make it easy to satirize them. Reply Mike Bryant March 11, 2024 Warren, this poem is very well written and hits all the right notes. Of course, it’s not just the WEF. Rasmussen polled people with family incomes exceeding $150,000 a year, living in large cities, many of whom hold degrees from elite universities, 35 to 55 years old. Here are the results: * 86% are white, and 73% are Democrats; Just under half (47%) favor Bernie Sanders-style socialism. * 47% also say there is “too much freedom” in America. * 71% have a favorable opinion of the legacy media. * 76% have a favorable opinion of college professors (The rest of the country? Just 17% hold that opinion). * 67% (two-thirds) say teachers and other educational professionals should decide what children are taught rather than parents. * 77% would “impose strict restrictions and rationing on the private use of gas, meat, and electricity.” * 72% would ban gas-powered vehicles. * 69% would ban gas stoves. * 58% would ban SUVs. * 55% would ban non-essential air travel. * 53% would ban private air conditioning. It looks like the fix is in. These people run many of our institutions and especially since the Covid Operation, the top 1%’s share of the wealth has increased while the middle class is disappearing. It seems like there is a strange coalition between the richest and the poorest of the poor against the disappearing middle. Democrats are now pushing the CCP Social Credit Score nightmare. Reply Warren Bonham March 12, 2024 Wow. Those survey results are worse than I would have expected. I don’t know how or when common sense disappeared, but we definitely have an overabundance of incompetence. Reply C.B. Anderson March 12, 2024 The good news here is that these stats apply to only the top 1%. The bad news is that these people wield a disproportionate share of power. Phil S. Rogers March 11, 2024 Right on Target. When ignorant people with good intentions follow people whose intentions are not good, and are too blind to see the truth. Great Poem! Reply Warren Bonham March 12, 2024 I’m not sure if you intentionally capitalized Target but that once fine retail institution is yet another example of good intentions run amok. Reply Margaret Coats March 12, 2024 Warre, this is excellent treatment of your topic of “good intentions,” because it is careful enough to bring up new perspectives in each stanza. We learn immediately that good intentions may produce bad results, but good intentions per se are not condemned. Rather, good intent is not enough without common sense AND the realistic wisdom to understand that the best plans may fail. No overarching reason for that, it just happens that way, and yours is a practical recognition. You do treat the errors of attempting to solve problems with money belonging to others, and with unjustly exercised power. When you re-cap issues in the summary stanza, I would conclude “We hope they never make a dent.” They probably will make some disfiguring dents they didn’t foresee, while not solving the problems they set out to tackle. Reply Warren Bonham March 12, 2024 That is a great analysis of the poem. Thanks for the careful read! I also prefer your wording for the last line. It does capture the idea better. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant March 12, 2024 Warren, your wise and adeptly crafted message is spot on in this age of know-it-all, my-way-or-highway scoffers steering society beyond the realms of sanity. Confucius was right when he said: “Real knowledge is to know the extent of one’s ignorance.” It’s a sorry shame that we live in a world chock full of experts. Warren, thank you for a delightful serving of eloquent commonsense. Reply Warren Bonham March 13, 2024 Thanks for the supportive comments! Now that I’m old and have accumulated a fair amount of knowledge in a limited number of areas, I continually get reminded of how little I know even in those areas. We have way too many self-titled experts and way too few real ones. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Joseph S. Salemi March 11, 2024 The epigraph by Russell at the start of this poem replicates what William Butler Yeats said in his poem “The Second Coming” — The best lack all conviction, while the worst Are full of passionate intensity. This is a strong and effective poem. It should be noted that in the last stanza the poet uses monorhyme to emphasize his point, as he makes closure. Reply
Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Those lines from The Second Coming are spot-on. Thanks for drawing that parallel. Reply
Brian A. Yapko March 11, 2024 Great poem, great message, Warren. Yes, the self-congratulating narcissistic social-engineering lovers of humanity on the left who are so drunk with faux compassion for those they infantilize that they’ll make us all the victims of their drunk driving. As you can see, I feel warmly on the subject. A great spotlight! Well done! Reply
Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 I like the drunk-driving imagery. In this case, I think they’re drunk on their own power. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson March 11, 2024 Warren, I am particularly enamored with how you treated the subject of incompetence in high places and the attitudes of elites that they are the self-aggrandizing arbiters of fate and circumstance as the narcissists they are. They do not choose to understand but rather seek to force their own callous precepts on the innocent and unwary. Excellent work! Reply
Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Thanks for the comments! I see no evidence that there is any sincere attempt to truly understand anything but there is a lot of evidence that callous precepts are being forced upon us. Reply
Norma Pain March 11, 2024 “The road to Hell is paved with good intentions”. When it comes to the WEF, I question whether they have good intentions. Great poem and perfect rhyme and meter. Thank you Warren. Reply
Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Great point about the WEF. It is very hard to see how forcing us to give up our property rights and eat bugs for nourishment can come from people with good intentions. Reply
Cynthia Erlandson March 11, 2024 This is a truth we all know, very well expressed! “through theories thought in their think tanks” is really humorous, and the alliteration brings that out. “do not possess the common sense to see their own incompetence” is my other favorite line. Thanks, Warren! Reply
Warren Bonham March 11, 2024 Thank you! Unfortunately, these people make it easy to satirize them. Reply
Mike Bryant March 11, 2024 Warren, this poem is very well written and hits all the right notes. Of course, it’s not just the WEF. Rasmussen polled people with family incomes exceeding $150,000 a year, living in large cities, many of whom hold degrees from elite universities, 35 to 55 years old. Here are the results: * 86% are white, and 73% are Democrats; Just under half (47%) favor Bernie Sanders-style socialism. * 47% also say there is “too much freedom” in America. * 71% have a favorable opinion of the legacy media. * 76% have a favorable opinion of college professors (The rest of the country? Just 17% hold that opinion). * 67% (two-thirds) say teachers and other educational professionals should decide what children are taught rather than parents. * 77% would “impose strict restrictions and rationing on the private use of gas, meat, and electricity.” * 72% would ban gas-powered vehicles. * 69% would ban gas stoves. * 58% would ban SUVs. * 55% would ban non-essential air travel. * 53% would ban private air conditioning. It looks like the fix is in. These people run many of our institutions and especially since the Covid Operation, the top 1%’s share of the wealth has increased while the middle class is disappearing. It seems like there is a strange coalition between the richest and the poorest of the poor against the disappearing middle. Democrats are now pushing the CCP Social Credit Score nightmare. Reply
Warren Bonham March 12, 2024 Wow. Those survey results are worse than I would have expected. I don’t know how or when common sense disappeared, but we definitely have an overabundance of incompetence. Reply
C.B. Anderson March 12, 2024 The good news here is that these stats apply to only the top 1%. The bad news is that these people wield a disproportionate share of power.
Phil S. Rogers March 11, 2024 Right on Target. When ignorant people with good intentions follow people whose intentions are not good, and are too blind to see the truth. Great Poem! Reply
Warren Bonham March 12, 2024 I’m not sure if you intentionally capitalized Target but that once fine retail institution is yet another example of good intentions run amok. Reply
Margaret Coats March 12, 2024 Warre, this is excellent treatment of your topic of “good intentions,” because it is careful enough to bring up new perspectives in each stanza. We learn immediately that good intentions may produce bad results, but good intentions per se are not condemned. Rather, good intent is not enough without common sense AND the realistic wisdom to understand that the best plans may fail. No overarching reason for that, it just happens that way, and yours is a practical recognition. You do treat the errors of attempting to solve problems with money belonging to others, and with unjustly exercised power. When you re-cap issues in the summary stanza, I would conclude “We hope they never make a dent.” They probably will make some disfiguring dents they didn’t foresee, while not solving the problems they set out to tackle. Reply
Warren Bonham March 12, 2024 That is a great analysis of the poem. Thanks for the careful read! I also prefer your wording for the last line. It does capture the idea better. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant March 12, 2024 Warren, your wise and adeptly crafted message is spot on in this age of know-it-all, my-way-or-highway scoffers steering society beyond the realms of sanity. Confucius was right when he said: “Real knowledge is to know the extent of one’s ignorance.” It’s a sorry shame that we live in a world chock full of experts. Warren, thank you for a delightful serving of eloquent commonsense. Reply
Warren Bonham March 13, 2024 Thanks for the supportive comments! Now that I’m old and have accumulated a fair amount of knowledge in a limited number of areas, I continually get reminded of how little I know even in those areas. We have way too many self-titled experts and way too few real ones. Reply