Poetry by Robert Walton of King City, California The Society November 6, 2012 Poetry 1 Comment Dawn Drums They march again to war, Sniffling, shuffling, voices muffled, Through dawn’s uncertain door Youth and man, rich and poor, Through campfires’ smothered smokes They march again to war, From college, farm and store They carry loaded muskets Through dawn’s uncertain door Damp drums tapping, four by four, Meadow mists like ghosts ahead, They march again to war Black cannon mouths, fresh gore, Shattered limbs and death await Through dawn’s uncertain door Flags yet furled And bayonets sheathed, They march again to war Through dawn’s uncertain door Silent Drums The drums lie tilted, battered and still; Grass fires gutter where none are left to kill; Bitter smoke coils through leafless trees; A stunned horse quivers on bloody knees; A tin cup’s clank, a thump, a moan – Battle’s requiem in dissonant tones Drifts above those soon to be dead, Blue coated, gray, now innocent of dread. Bloodied fingers reach for a hand to hold And are touched instead by day’s last gold. A torn boy’s dying, upraised hand Marks Union’s price and freedom’s stand. Robert Walton’s short story “Dogwood Dream” won first place in New Millennium Writing’s 2011 short fiction contest and was subsequently published by “Steel Toe.” His novella “Vienna Station” won the Galaxy prize and was published as an e-book. It is available for Kindle on Amazon. Most recently, his short story “Like a thorny Child” won the Central Coast Writers spring writing contest. These poems are among the entries for the Society of Classical Poets’ 2012 Poetry Competition. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. One Response neal Whitman November 6, 2012 In 1888, after Dr. William Osler made a house call on Walt Whitman, he went to his Club and opened a volume of Leaves of Grass and closed it. “Whether the meat was too strong, or whether it was the style of cooking, ’twas not for my pampered palate, accustomed as I was to the likes of Shelley and Keats.” You see, he preferred what is served up here at the SCP and the likes of Robert Walton. In time, Osler broadened his ingestion. War does that. In 1917, his 21-year old son, Revere, was killed on the Somme. Late at night, this father reads Whitman’s Civil War poetry. The Good, Grey Poet nursed Union wounded in hospital tents and knew of suffering: I saw the corpses, myriads of them… but they suffer’d not… The living remain’d and suffer’d. Robert, your poems evoke in rhyme and meter, the world Walt Whitman reported in free verse. I stand at attention for Whitman, but also salute you for your pictorial poems that explode on the page. Reading your verse adds color to your strong strokes. Amicus poeticae, Neal Whitman Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
neal Whitman November 6, 2012 In 1888, after Dr. William Osler made a house call on Walt Whitman, he went to his Club and opened a volume of Leaves of Grass and closed it. “Whether the meat was too strong, or whether it was the style of cooking, ’twas not for my pampered palate, accustomed as I was to the likes of Shelley and Keats.” You see, he preferred what is served up here at the SCP and the likes of Robert Walton. In time, Osler broadened his ingestion. War does that. In 1917, his 21-year old son, Revere, was killed on the Somme. Late at night, this father reads Whitman’s Civil War poetry. The Good, Grey Poet nursed Union wounded in hospital tents and knew of suffering: I saw the corpses, myriads of them… but they suffer’d not… The living remain’d and suffer’d. Robert, your poems evoke in rhyme and meter, the world Walt Whitman reported in free verse. I stand at attention for Whitman, but also salute you for your pictorial poems that explode on the page. Reading your verse adds color to your strong strokes. Amicus poeticae, Neal Whitman Reply