Photograph by Dean Franklin‘Looking Down on Mt. Rushmore’ by John W.L. Toivonen The Society May 9, 2017 Culture, Poetry 2 Comments Jutting out of a mountain their stone faces peer out with their notice crucified in stone. Crafted to demand a nation’s reverence visitors would mediate and atone. But who can expect more than imperfection now that their sullied reputations bark from static news chatter and journals that sit higher up like grand judges of derision? The chattering ones say that they have failed us. Their faults make them unavailable witness to our parents hymns of perfection. They are reduced to a carved collection. I would ask that their ordered minds could bless our endeavors below in the streets, but do they die today like unworshipped gods? Is Lincoln just Psyche, is Washington Zeus? These stone faces hung in a stone wall should remind but inflict anachronism on the thoughtless who forget that these men were more than archived letters from voices pale. Today demographics seeks celebrity that must be new, and no verity can stand even if it was carved in stone. Those who would reflect must stand alone. Mr. Toivonen’s work has appeared in Roanoke Review, Paterson Literary Review, and Midwest Poetry Review. His most recent book of poetry, Song After a Long Campaign, was published by Great Roots Press in 2015. He is an attorney who specializes in criminal defense and lives in Lansing, Michigan. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 2 Responses Chris Tabaka May 12, 2017 Quite an original subject matter, and done very well indeed! Reply Wilbur Dee Case May 17, 2017 Mr. Toivonen, I agree with the sentiment, and much of your poem’s presentation. The poem itself reminds me of Mount Rushmore: solid, original (echoing Mr. Tabaka), unfinished, and remarkable. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Wilbur Dee Case May 17, 2017 Mr. Toivonen, I agree with the sentiment, and much of your poem’s presentation. The poem itself reminds me of Mount Rushmore: solid, original (echoing Mr. Tabaka), unfinished, and remarkable. Reply