Walk with me, though both of us
May wonder where we go.
Talk with me, explore, discuss
The things we may not know.
Sit with me, through anxious hours
Of waiting and of pain.
Stay with me, to share what’s ours
In sunshine and in rain.
Look at me and see beyond
What all the world can see.
Touch me, knowing I’ll respond
With warm felicity.
Love with me, when times are hard
And laughter wants to die.
Hold my heart with fond regard
More, as the years go by.
Walk and talk and sit and stay
And look and touch and love.
With me, make each passing day
Our blessing from above.
Amy Foreman hails from the southern Arizona desert, where she homesteads with her husband and seven children. She has enjoyed teaching both English and Music at the college level, but is now focused on home-schooling her children, gardening, farming, and writing. Her blog is theoccasionalcaesura.wordpress.com
Bravo!!!!
Thanks, Father Richard!
Lovely. Well done.
Appreciate it, David!
I join Father Libby and Mr. Hollywood in lauding this lyrical and direct wedding vow.
Thank you so much, William!
This is a touching poem which perfectly describes the challenges and joys of marriage. Well done Amy!
Thank you for those kind remarks, David.
Greetings Amy ma’am 🙂
Every time that I read your poems, I am delighted. The poem is a perfect example of promises made to one’s beloved.
The effect of ‘I Think I Like You Better Now’ still resonates in my mind.
Regards
Your comment made me smile, Satyananda. I am touched that you remember ‘I Think I Like You Better Now” . . . Thanks for brightening my day!
Very beautiful, very delightful – a true poem. Well done.
Thank you, James!