"Wanderer above the Sea of Fog" by Caspar David Friedrich‘The Poet’s Soul with Artful Pen’ and Other Poetry by Roy E. Peterson The Society November 25, 2018 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 13 Comments The Poet’s Soul with Artful Pen Few will read with understanding What the poet is intending. Nouns and verbs are still concealing Concepts with a double meaning. Adjectives, and adverbs too, Are used in ways that men find new. A word familiar with strange ending Pirouettes on what’s portending. Misty gleams immortal time The poet captures in a rhyme. Feign an artifice to hide What the poet feels inside. Durst the poet play with fate Or touch the latch of heaven’s gate? A proposition juxtapose Between an anvil and a rose? Be ever vigilant, my soul, For it takes two to make a whole. The poet’s soul with artful pen Bestows his riddles upon men. The Sordid Socialists and Cultish Communists The sordid socialists and cultish communists Are really both the same. They come with greedy fists Yet give you all the blame. They blame the rich for working, For their industry. They blame the rich while shirking Their humanity. They redistribute wealth Till everyone is poor. They tax as if our health Needs taxes more and more. The pimps of socialism Buy whores they can control. Their short-term mechanism Is handing out a dole. They hate that things have merit, Great inventions reign. They want to know your profit, Privacy disdain. The sordid socialists And cultish communists Have focused feral eyes On top of their hitlists: America’s the prize. The Commie Will Hijack a Word The commie will hijack a word As new vocabulary. So if you think “How nice” when heard, I warn you to be wary. “Democracy” was thus misused By Lenin as a cover, So any sort of power abuse Is harder to discover. Some years ago a synonym For happiness was “gay.” The word hijacked was turned into The word it is today. Antifas say that they hate fascists— Yet, dressed in a new suit, You wouldn’t guess that they’re the fascists, And communists to boot! The leftists cloak a meaning In ways that make hearts move. A rainbow is redeeming, So who would disapprove? Once Lenin said his tyrant party, Which beat the “Mensheviks,” Would now be called “majority.” The meaning: “Bolsheviks.” Roy E. Peterson is a writer and former U.S. military army intelligence officer who currently resides in Texas. NOTE: The Society considers this page, where your poetry resides, to be your residence as well, where you may invite family, friends, and others to visit. Feel free to treat this page as your home and remove anyone here who disrespects you. Simply send an email to firstname.lastname@example.org. Put “Remove Comment” in the subject line and list which comments you would like removed. The Society does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or comments and reserves the right to remove any comments to maintain the decorum of this website and the integrity of the Society. Please see our Comments Policy here. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email this to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) 13 Responses Joe Tessitore November 25, 2018 Good work all around and, for me, one outstanding couplet: A proposition juxtapose between an anvil and a rose Reply Roy E. Peterson May 25, 2019 I appreciate your comment, Joe. Reply Monty November 25, 2018 Regarding ‘The Poet’s Soul . . ‘, Roy: has the word ‘misty’ got another meaning on your side of the pond? In line 12: if you’re using it as a name for someone/something, then it’d make sense to me; but if you’re using it as obscure/cloudy, then I can’t grasp the line ‘Misty gleams immortal time’. In line 15: I just turned down the volume on my music for a few seconds; to listen to the word ‘juxtapose’ screaming out for a ‘d’? Reply Joe Tessitore November 25, 2018 I think the tense of “juxtapose” is carried over from the preceding couplet, which is in the present tense. It’ll be interesting to get the poet’s take on it. Reply Joe Tessitore November 25, 2018 and after “heaven’s gate” perhaps a semi-colon instead of a question mark? Monty November 25, 2018 . . . but the previous couplet ends in a question-mark; thus the preceding line is the start of a new question . . having it’s own tense. As an example: if one paraphrased that question, it could read: ‘A proposition sandwiched between an anvil and a rose? Different word: same meaning. But note it was sandwichED (past tense). In the sense of the poem, this would read as: ‘A proposition sandwich between an anvil and a rose’? Monty November 25, 2018 My last reply was in response to your penultimate comment. Reply Joseph Tessitore November 25, 2018 I thought he was going for a series of questions (the “anvil/rose being his penultimate?). I’m not sure, but it doesn’t sound to me like the anvil/rose couplet can stand alone as a sentence. Reply Monty November 25, 2018 ‘Anvil rose’ was his last question; ‘heaven’s gate’ was his penultimate. And no, even if one added the missing ‘d’, it still don’t stand up as a sentence. It reads: ‘A proposition juxtaposed’ (as in, it’s the proposition which is being juxtaposed) . . but a ‘proposition’ is only ONE thing. A juxtaposition requires TWO things . . to juxtapose one thing with another. For example, a ‘proposition’ and a supposition can be juxtaposed; but a proposition can’t be juxtaposed with itself! Maybe the author’s intention was for the ‘anvil’ and the ‘rose’ to be juxtaposed with each other. If that was the case, it’d make more sense if it read: ‘A juxtaposition proposed with an anvil against a rose?’ That way, the author’s question would be asking (proposing) the potential merits of juxtaposing the anvil and the rose. Like ya said: let’s see if the author can elaborate . . Mark Stone November 25, 2018 Lieutenant Colonel Peterson, Hello. My comments relate to the first poem. 1. I recommend that the poem have a consistent meter. Lines 1-5 are in trochaic meter, and this set me up to expect that for the rest of the poem. However, the rest of the poem is a mishmash of iambic and trochaic lines. 2. I don’t understand certain parts of the poem, such as S3L1&2. Also, S2L3&4 sounds beautiful, but I have no idea what it means. 3. When words like “a” or “an” or “the” are left out, typically to keep the meter intact, it sounds like unnatural speech to me and I don’t care for it. Examples would be: “with strange ending” and “with artful pen.” 4. I agree with Monty that “juxtapose” needs a “d” at the ending, i.e.: A proposition juxtaposed Between an anvil and a rose? 5. The last line reads as follows: Bestows his riddles upon men. Assuming that this line is in iambic meter, the stress falls on the first syllable of “upon.” The problem is that when we say “upon,” we normally put the stress on the second syllable. One fix is to use “on” instead of “upon.” Here are a couple options: Bestows his riddles on all men. Bestows his riddles on mankind. 6. I do very much like this sentence: Durst the poet play with fate Or touch the latch of heaven’s gate? 7. This poem is within a stone’s throw of being a strong poem, in my opinion. Thank you for sharing it with us. Reply Monty November 26, 2018 Regarding the first poem, Mark: I see that you’ve highlighted certain lines/sentences which you “don’t understand”. As you made no mention of line 9, I must assume that you’ve understood it. Would you care to share your understanding of that line? Reply Steven Shaffer November 26, 2018 I really like “The Sordid Socialists and Cultish Communists”. In my opinion, these couplets are right up there with the best of Pope: The pimps of socialism Buy whores they can control. Their short-term mechanism Is handing out a dole. Reply Alexander November 27, 2018 Excellent lead poem; arresting title and image. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.