Recalling Christmas in the past:
the time I mixed my drink—
a cocktail, “Everything we have”…
I puked at lunch. I think
you ate your meal, despite the stink!

Another time, our puppy dog
tore gifts beneath the tree.
A nasty whiff: we didn’t spot
the poop till half past three.
He also did a stream of pee.

The gifts that didn’t make the grade:
the gear that never fits
(cheap underwear, elasticless),
and broken stuff in bits—
our Christmases without the glitz.

The years have flown and now you’re gone.
I pat your empty chair,
and face another Christmas now,
just wishing you were there—
a time to smile and not despair.

 

 

Jack Horne lives in Plymouth, England and works for the local theatre. Writing is his main interest.


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4 Responses

  1. Steve

    Well done, Jack. I lost my father last year so the last stanza was especially moving. A wonderful reminder that even when we’ve lost someone, we can still treasure the memories of past Christmases spent together.

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  2. Monty

    Regardless of whether the subject-matter is personal to you, or just an idea you conceived for a poem . . it’s a nice piece of work, Jack. The ‘memories’ (puking, puppy, etc) enable the reader at once to feel the sentiment of the piece . . which then allows the last stanza to have the maximum effect.

    I also like the form of the piece. I wouldn’t say it’s unusual; but it’s certainly not one I see often. Well-written; clear diction; strong rhymes . . a jolly good effort. Well played.

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  3. Dave Whippman

    Clever poem that segues from comedy to sadness in the last stanza. Well done.

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  4. Dave Whippman

    Clever piece that segues from comedy to sadness in the last stanza. Well done.

    Reply

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