"Autumn Moon over Atago Hill" by Keisai EisenPoems for the Mid-Autumn Festival 2020, by Daniel Magdalen The Society September 30, 2020 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 8 Comments The Mid-Autumn Festival, also known as the Moon Festival and corresponding to the Harvest Moon in the West, falls this year on October 1. Lanterns in the Autumn Dark Mid-Autumn’s guests head homeward, in the night, Beneath the sphere that mirrors daytime’s glow. In silver hues of air, distinct shapes grow And fill their eyes, which map what route is right… Amid surroundings of vast thought, their bright, Round lanterns carry back lost sunbeams’ flow, Rekindled from the joy to help all know Lives’ purpose, weight and place, revealed in light. The group treads through the fallen leaves. It seems Each shape, each hue’s unclear, but they adapt And show the moonbeams’ angle that can guide Our learning of what’s true and what’s mere dreams. As they recall the path that daylight mapped, The moon retraces scenes the dark would hide. Learning from a Grapevine While looking out the window, I observe A world of teachings for the inner self. A vine now seems attention to deserve— There’s food for thought on Nature’s every shelf. Its greenness gives a sense of youth of mind; Embracing sunlight, value it receives As when it sips the rain—with any kind Of weather it can bear, the vine perceives Each change and challenge as a chance to grow. When caught by winds, it bends but still hangs on: It’s never rigid but it won’t let go Of its support that’s there for each new dawn. Come Autumn, leaf by leaf it dies. A string Of life inside yet waits… rebirth in Spring. Daniel Magdalen is a doctoral student in the Faculty of Letters at the University of Bucharest, in Romania. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. 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Reply Daniel Magdalen October 3, 2020 Finding deeper meaning and expressing ideas in a more impactful manner is a suggestion I very much appreciate. Thank you. Besides the common words and, to some extent, the imagery, there are ideas which in essence are simple but quite rarely found in people’s thinking and perspective on things, and these were the core og what I aspired to convey. The second poem, for instance, mainly shares the insight that one may find meaning in every aspect of one’s surroundings, when adopting a mindful and constructive view on things. Reminders of relevant virtues, failings and so on can thus be seen quite everywhere and begin to be addressed or worked on. This perspective I consider worth sharing, as it helps develop mental associations, the noticing of logical relationships between seemingly unrelated things but meaningful when integrated into a coherent view of the world. This is an example of a point I wanted to meke with the poems. I think ideas are important, especially fruitful ones, and efficiently and artfully communicating them is something I aspire to do. It would be interesting to see an example of a way that you, as an experienced poet, consider fit to make an idea more impactful through poetry. Reply James A. Tweedie October 1, 2020 Daniel, thank you for these two thoughtful, descriptive poems, reflections on your observations of culture and nature with a well-placed life-application in the closing sestet/stanza. Each poem in its turn is quiet, gentle and soft—like the light from an autumn moon festival lantern. Reply Daniel Magdalen October 3, 2020 Thank you for your kind and insightful words. I appreciate your observations concerning the meanings these poems convey. Reply Margaret Coats October 1, 2020 The “Lanterns” poem uses a highly appropriate and effective conceit. When “bright, round lanterns carry back lost sunbeams’ flow,” we realize that these lanterns are eyes. Real, candle-lit lanterns do not get their light from lost sunbeams; only eyes glow with memories of yesterday’s sun. This is real artistry. In the sestet, you extend it, by showing that eyes also shine with the softer light of moonbeams. The moral points you make are suited to the season, and to the situation of people returning from moon viewing. “Grapevine” is entirely a moral poem based on nature. This is a kind of poem abundant in classical cultures, though then as now, some readers are impatient with the genre. But we don’t have enough of it as well done as this! Happy moon-viewing, Daniel! Reply Daniel Magdalen October 3, 2020 I appreciate your kind words and your deep, insightful observations. Thank you! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.