"California Spring" by Albert Bierstadt‘Up Beat’ by Damian Robin The Society May 24, 2021 Beauty, Poetry 7 Comments . I met the Sun this Maytime morning, it stunned the outside wall. Across the day I watched it yawning, make dangling shadows crawl. No curtain clouds closed down its shining. Its single brilliance beamed. All day I caught the hot sun ironing the mayhems I had dreamed. It pressed their wailings down to nothing, made apprehension clear. It ate away, with sunset mothing, my now redundant fear. Though dread in darkness had begun, We don’t have shadows without sun. . . Damian Robin is a writer and editor living in the United Kingdom. NOTE: The Society considers this page, where your poetry resides, to be your residence as well, where you may invite family, friends, and others to visit. Feel free to treat this page as your home and remove anyone here who disrespects you. Simply send an email to email@example.com. Put “Remove Comment” in the subject line and list which comments you would like removed. The Society does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or comments and reserves the right to remove any comments to maintain the decorum of this website and the integrity of the Society. Please see our Comments Policy here. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email this to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) 7 Responses Tonia Kalouria May 24, 2021 Good reminder in these troubled times! Love the end couplet. Reply paul buchheit May 24, 2021 Well-constructed sonnet, Damian. I enjoyed the ing-ing rhyming patterns. Reply Paul Freeman May 24, 2021 ‘sunset mothing’ – inspired! Thanks for a pretty amazing piece of poetry. Reply Margaret Coats May 24, 2021 A spirited May song, Damian, with the cheer we miss when this little lyric subgenre, so vibrantly characteristic of English literature, gets lost. Thanks for mayking an excellent example! Reply Cynthia Erlandson May 25, 2021 Lovely! This strikes me as quite reminiscent of Emily Dickinson, with its tetrameter-trimeter pattern; the somewhat mysterious imagery (“ironing the mayhems” — a great phrase!); and the interesting slant rhymes like morning/yawning; shining/ironing; nothing/mothing. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant May 26, 2021 Damian, this mellifluous marvel of a poem, with its sunny wonder and timely reminder in the message of the closing couplet, really does lift the spirits. The sun you describe reminds me of the fierce beams we have here in Texas, and, having lived here for ten years, I am every grateful for its presence all year round. Whenever I’m a bit low, I swathe myself in backyard sunshine and I’m soon feeling much better. Wonderful stuff! Thank you! Reply James Sale May 28, 2021 Well done Damian, I like the clipped and compressed quality of this poem; it’s also lyrical, so the combination is powerful. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.