A Poem in Honor of the 13 U.S. Servicemen Who Died in Afghanistan, by Bruce Dale Wise The Society September 2, 2021 Culture, Poetry 20 Comments . With Coffins at the Dover Air Force Base: 29 August 2021 On Sunday, Biden traveled to the Dover Air Force Base to pay respect for thirteen service members who were slain. But grieving parents of the dead were not consoled by him— he kept on looking at his watch—and not so much at them. One thought his empathy but hollow, disrespectful stares. He chatted more about his own dead son than he did theirs. They were owed more than they received; they still are owed a debt… of gratitude, oh, those brave souls, we should not soon forget. Go, stranger, tell your people these unfortunate ones tried: obedient to shallow leaders, still they went, and died. David L. Espinoza, 20; Rylee J. McCollum, 20; Dylan R. Merola, 20; Kareem M. Nikoui, 20; Jared M. Schmitz, 22; Hunter Lopez, 22; Umberto A. Sanchez, 22; Max W. Soviak, 22; Nicole L. Gee, 23; Ryan C. Knauss, 23; Daegan W. Page, 23; Johanny Rosariopichardo, 25; Darin T. Hoover, 31. . . Bruce Dale Wise is a poet currently residing in Texas. NOTE: The Society considers this page, where your poetry resides, to be your residence as well, where you may invite family, friends, and others to visit. Feel free to treat this page as your home and remove anyone here who disrespects you. Simply send an email to email@example.com. Put “Remove Comment” in the subject line and list which comments you would like removed. The Society does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or comments and reserves the right to remove any comments to maintain the decorum of this website and the integrity of the Society. Please see our Comments Policy here. 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Reply BDW September 3, 2021 When young, I dreamed of England’s deep green sleeves, and Robin Hood. Not now. Yet glad to hear a voice found near Peak District’s wood. Reply Jeff Eardley September 4, 2021 To search for proof of Robin Hood, if e’er you have a mind. The thigh-bone of bold Little John, in Hathersage you’ll find. BDW September 12, 2021 One of my favourite television series of the late 1950s was “The Adventures of Robin Hood” with Richard Greene, et alia. In 2020, during the Chinese covid shut-down, I appreciated riding my bicycle along the many tree-filled streets of my particular part of the Metroplex, exploring streets I rarely go down, including Nottingham, Sherwood, Robin, Locksley, Maid Marion, Alan-a-Dale, Friar Tuck, etc. Margaret Coats September 2, 2021 “The thanks of a grateful nation” are presented with the flag at every military funeral, usually by a low-ranking soldier, sailor, or airman. Now at thirteen funerals someone will need to make reparation for a putative commander in chief who could not focus on duty even for a few minutes. Thanks for doing your part, Bruce. Reply BDW September 5, 2021 as per “Wired Clues” Abe, Of the many haikus entered in the haiku contest, the one that most deeply touched me was that by Patricia A. Marsh. midnight fog hovers in the gap between mountains where old lovers dream Of the various haiku charichords that follow me around, “Wired Clues” Abe is the poet who has been most influenced by the Modernist New Rising haiku, for example, writers such as Saito Sanki (1900-1962); though, since first writing haiku at the age of 15, without exception, all my haiku (5-7-5 syllables), and tanka (5-7-5-7-7 syllables) have conformed to those structures. I realize such structures were anathema to many of the Modernist New Rising Haiku writers (and, to a certain degree, don’t even make sense in English). As Mr. Toshiki Kawagoe noted, even today some groups practice “haiku with no seasonal reference”, which is a rarity for me. Ms. Coats has done a fine job in judging the hundreds of haiku that passed through her reading eyes—not an easy task—since so many of them contained superb qualities within. As to the haiku she chose of mine, that Mr. Pietrack appreciated, it was written in the voice of “Wired Clues” Abe, a decidedly NewMillennialist; and of the three haiku the one least influenced by previous writers…other than loosely, a boy in a backyard swimming pool as opposed to a frog in a pond. Reply Margaret Coats September 10, 2021 Bruce, just noticed your reply to me here. There were indeed many fine haiku in the competition. With regard to the “Modernist New Rising Haiku” style, I am glad to say that in Japan, traditional haiku are still in a strong position, and many people including professionally recognized poets write them. Much of what is called “free verse” there might be considered formal here; it is simply longer than the older Japanese forms. However, haiku in English have mostly gone to modernist modes–and in English that means shorter lines. The excuse is that since Japanese count long vowels as two syllables, we don’t need as many syllables as they use for haiku with the same amount of meaning. However, I have seen many an English “haiku” with no apparent meaning at all. That takes strenuous cultivation of nonsense. As for the number of syllables making sense, I don’t think there’s any real reason in either language to adopt 5-7-5. It’s simply a longstanding convention, except for the undeniable proportionality. But when “authorities” start telling writers not to use adjectives and to avoid metaphor, this is far away from haiku tradition. It is modernist cant. I have seen one place where the English poem must have NO seasonal reference; in fact, writers are told to use kigo lists to scrub any inadvertent season word from their poems! If you want real freedom, use the form rather than adhere to a tyrant. Reply Joe Tessitore September 3, 2021 Thank you, Bruce. I was especially moved by their ages. Thank you for posting them. Reply BDW September 7, 2021 O, yes, the ages of these dead are quite significant; and so much more; a little poem, like this, just can’t get it. Reply Cynthia Erlandson September 4, 2021 Very moving, Bruce. Thank you. Reply BDW September 7, 2021 On 26 August 2021, ISIS-K attacked Kabul Airport, killing at least 182 people, including 13 US servicemen, the most US servicemen killed since 5 August 2011, during the Obama-Biden residency, when 38 died, in the worst single loss of the Afghan War (2001-2021). Although the World will little note, nor long remember this, it matters…for so many reasons—and most of all, for these dead and their families. Reply Kathy Bahr September 4, 2021 Thank you, for their last breath drew, ties our strength. Reply BDW September 7, 2021 Their last breath drawn ties us to them, their strength, our weakness too. The World is…embroiled in war. Kathy, bar the door. Thank you. Reply Patricia Redfern September 6, 2021 These fabulous “13” get their names mentioned rarely. Even on TV. What is with humanity? Well, at least you did it…many thanks… God bless you! Reply BDW September 8, 2021 Ms. Redfern is correct about these thirteen “names mentioned rarely”. Because it doesn’t fit the wretched narratives of corporate media’s smear merchants, like Comcast’s NBC, Disney’s ABC, TimeWarner’s CNN, National Amusement’s CBS, and Amazon’s WaPo, the story is being side-lined. It is even downplayed in the so-called “newspaper of record”, the NY Times, a laughable epithet. Reply BDW September 9, 2021 The key allusion, found in the final couplet, is from the classical Greek poet Simonides (c. 556- 468 BC). Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.