"The Awakened Conscience" by Richard Redgrave‘Good Conscience’ by Ed Ahern The Society January 7, 2022 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 2 Comments . Good Conscience Under our cauls a sleepless giber lurks, A callous judge of all our selfish smirks Who slices through our veils of self delight To show us prancing for unholy cirques. Our ego tells us to ignore the frights Our conscience lays before us every night And every morning guilt is pushed aside As we redon a uniform of spite. The only penalty we must abide For holding fast to self-absorbing pride Is losing contact with the only friend Who never stoops to swaddling us in lies. . . Ed Ahern resumed writing after forty odd years in foreign intelligence and international sales. He’s had over three hundred stories and poems published so far, and six books. Ed works the other side of writing at Bewildering Stories, where he sits on the review board and manages a posse of nine review editors. See his work on Twitter, Facebook, or Instagram. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 2 Responses Allegra Silberstein January 7, 2022 Thank you for this poem of conscience…needed for this world! Reply C.B. Anderson January 8, 2022 The first line in the second stanza could have ended with “fright,” which amounts to the same thing as “frights” and avoids the breach of form in the quartet of end rhymes. In the very last line “lies” assonates but does not really rhyme with the other elements of the sequence. If you must break form, it’s better to hide it in the middle of a poem than to save it for the very end. But overall I thought this was a well-conceived moral lesson. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Allegra Silberstein January 7, 2022 Thank you for this poem of conscience…needed for this world! Reply
C.B. Anderson January 8, 2022 The first line in the second stanza could have ended with “fright,” which amounts to the same thing as “frights” and avoids the breach of form in the quartet of end rhymes. In the very last line “lies” assonates but does not really rhyme with the other elements of the sequence. If you must break form, it’s better to hide it in the middle of a poem than to save it for the very end. But overall I thought this was a well-conceived moral lesson. Reply