Depiction of dancing around Maypole, by Pieter Brueghel the Younger‘May Day’ by Cheryl Corey The Society May 1, 2022 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 11 Comments . May Day Note: Maypoles were a feature of ancient Roman festivals to mark the renewal of Spring. The feast days of Saints Philip and James were celebrated by the Church of England in May. Having hewed a length of pine, __They drove it in the ground; Then word was spread throughout the town, __“Ye comers gather round. Now let us make a joyful song __And share with all good cheer; The stage is set, the men have brewed __Ten barrelsful of beer.” And so began the merriment, __Commencing with the drum, A cannon shot, a round of fire, __And instruments to strum. They took the streamers in their hands __And danced around the pole; They sang in praise of saints who died __To save the mortal soul. They feasted well, and all the day __Was full of heady mirth; To see the goddess Maia bring __The seasonal rebirth. . . Cheryl Corey is a Connecticut poet. She is also an author of short stories, a novella, and recently completed a novel. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. NOTE TO POETS: The Society considers this page, where your poetry resides, to be your residence as well, where you may invite family, friends, and others to visit. Feel free to treat this page as your home and remove anyone here who disrespects you. Simply send an email to email@example.com. Put “Remove Comment” in the subject line and list which comments you would like removed. The Society does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or comments and reserves the right to remove any comments to maintain the decorum of this website and the integrity of the Society. Please see our Comments Policy here. 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Reply Brian Yapko May 1, 2022 This is truly a charming poem, Cheryl, which I enjoyed reading. I can easily imagine it being set to music and sung around that maypole. You have skillfully blended pagan and Christian themes as an accurate reflection of the holiday’s origin. I do have a question of whether you meant “mortal” or “immortal” in the fourth quatrain? It might harm the meter, but I think “immortal” works better for a reference to the saints. But I confess I might be missing an aspect of your intent here. If so, mea culpa. Either way, well done! Reply Joseph S. Salemi May 1, 2022 I believe Ms. Corey is making an elision of /e/ and /i/ there, which in eighteenth-century texts might have been printed like this: th’mmortal soul (for “the immortal soul”) We don’t make such printed elisions of this sort today, since in most cases the vowel elisions are easily recognized by the reader as he scans the line. But this one is not immediately apparent. I was wondering about it too. Reply Cheryl Corey May 1, 2022 You know, Brian, you’re absolutely right! It’s a technical error on my part. It really should read “immortal” or, as Dr. Salemi points out, be written as an elison. I think that at times you can be so close to our own work that you don’t see your mistakes. It takes eagle-eyed readers like you and Dr. Salemi to point out the obvious. Just goes to show – you really do have to scrutinize every word, every line, and carefully think. Reply Jack Dashiell May 1, 2022 A happy poem of celebration, the energy of it and giving us an example of a former ritual. Reply C.B. Anderson May 1, 2022 What a joyous work, Cheryl! And what a teaching moment for those attentive to detail. Your poem makes me want to do what I’ve never done in my life: dance around a Maypole. Reply Margaret Coats May 2, 2022 Cheryl, what I notice in your sprightly little lyric is reference to vast worldwide vegetation celebrations. Certainly May Day is being celebrated somewhere. The Communists, as latecomers to the mix, are parading on May 1. Maypoles of phallic symbolism are being set up and danced around in primitive cultures that haven’t forgotten the orgy requisite to good harvests. You have Roman and German, ancient and modern, religious and secular touches in your five stanzas. The Roman Martyrology declares that May 1 is the birthday of the Apostles Philip and James the Less. This makes it one of three double birthdays of apostles in the year (the others being Peter and Paul on June 29, and Simon and Jude on October 28). A birthday is not just the feast day, but the actual day the apostle shed his blood to sanctify earth and enter heaven. Special privileges are attached to such days, even though the Catholic Church now celebrates Saint Joseph the Worker on May 1 (in order to counteract Communist revels), and has transferred the feast of Philip and James to May 11. Congratulations to you for taking notice of the traditional rituals of “seasonal rebirth.” Just do a search for May Day celebrations and you will find Maypoles! Maybe your poem will encourage more next year, but beware of the Puritans who still (rightly and wrongly) consider them abominations. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant May 6, 2022 I have been to many a May Day Fayre and reveled in the handkerchief waving, lithe leaps of the Morris Dancers round the maypole. There are strange goings on at these fayres… ferret racing being one of them. The obstacle courses for ferrets are serious business… not designed for the faint-hearted ferret. You have captured the essence of May Day beautifully and have me craving a trip back to my homeland with your fine words, Cheryl. Thank you! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. 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