"The Veteran in a New Field" by Winslow Homer‘Life on the Farm’ and Other Poetry by Aleta Kiefer The Society January 27, 2023 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 10 Comments . Life on the Farm Daddy’s gone. Is he sleeping? For only the shell remains. I hear the cries of cicadas. I listen to their pain. Momma, why are you weeping? Did Daddy push you away? Her tears rob the cicadas, And we live in silence today. Pain is the crop we are reaping. Someone help us, I pray. No one hears but cicadas, And, yes, it’s an ordinary day. . . Two It’s good to have something to hate Said the blind man to the fly. Stay still! I’ll seal your fate— And squash those million eyes. The fly was in no mood For losing on that day. He skedaddled out of the room. But hate finds a way. Left to his own devices The blind man hated on. Finally he killed the fly And dumped him on the lawn. It was so easy, the blind man laughed, __You were a stupid prey. But the fly looked down from his perch in the clouds __To live another day. . . A Toss Up Two dice lay on the kitchen floor, Beckoned for a mental score Of all the lives that I might lead, A contemplative reverie. Lost in staring thought I see All the people I might be, Reflecting through a weary mind, Forever after left behind. Two dice lay on the kitchen floor; I turned and walked on out the door. However can you form a life Haunted by the ghosts of might. . . Aleta Kiefer is a mother and grandmother who lives in Washington, Missouri. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 10 Responses sally cook January 27, 2023 Dear Aleta – . I admire the wisdom of your thoughts but am distressed by your meter.. I had a mama. She would have told me to pay more attention to my meter. I hope you will do the same. I look forward to seeing more of your poems. I would not have written this if I did not think you are an unusual voice. Reply Aleta Kiefer January 29, 2023 Thank you for your comment. Noted. Reply C.B. Anderson January 27, 2023 Sally is right, Aleta. Practice meter in its most rigid format until it becomes second-nature, and then learn which metrical substitutions are permissible (i.e., which enhance rather than obfuscate the meter of choice). Doing so is not restrictive; rather, it is emancipating. Reply Aleta Kiefer January 29, 2023 Noted Reply Alena Casey January 28, 2023 “Life on the Farm” is beautiful, Aleta, with haunting and effective repetition. Reply Aleta January 29, 2023 Alena, You are gracious and I am thankful. Reply Paul Freeman January 28, 2023 I particularly enjoyed ‘Life on the Farm’, Aleta, with the freedom of its loose meter, though I perhaps would have ended with ‘It’s an ordinary day.’, leaving out ‘And, yes…’ Thanks for the reads, Aleta. Reply Aleta January 29, 2023 Thank you Paul. Your comment is appreciated. Reply Pippa Kay January 29, 2023 I enjoyed your poems – the subject matter is interesting. Particularly liked the Life on the Farm and the line Pain is the crop we are reaping. Reply Aleta February 5, 2023 Pippa- Thank you. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
sally cook January 27, 2023 Dear Aleta – . I admire the wisdom of your thoughts but am distressed by your meter.. I had a mama. She would have told me to pay more attention to my meter. I hope you will do the same. I look forward to seeing more of your poems. I would not have written this if I did not think you are an unusual voice. Reply
C.B. Anderson January 27, 2023 Sally is right, Aleta. Practice meter in its most rigid format until it becomes second-nature, and then learn which metrical substitutions are permissible (i.e., which enhance rather than obfuscate the meter of choice). Doing so is not restrictive; rather, it is emancipating. Reply
Alena Casey January 28, 2023 “Life on the Farm” is beautiful, Aleta, with haunting and effective repetition. Reply
Paul Freeman January 28, 2023 I particularly enjoyed ‘Life on the Farm’, Aleta, with the freedom of its loose meter, though I perhaps would have ended with ‘It’s an ordinary day.’, leaving out ‘And, yes…’ Thanks for the reads, Aleta. Reply
Pippa Kay January 29, 2023 I enjoyed your poems – the subject matter is interesting. Particularly liked the Life on the Farm and the line Pain is the crop we are reaping. Reply