Photo of the Midday Rose south window at Notre Dame Cathedral‘The Glass Delusion of King Charles VI of France’ by Shaun C. Duncan The Society March 25, 2023 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 28 Comments . The Glass Delusion of King Charles VI of France ‘His malady grew worse every day until his mind was completely gone. Sometimes he thought he was made of glass and would not let himself be touched. He had iron rods put into his clothing and protected himself in all sorts of ways so that he might not fall and break.’ —Pope Pius II, writing of Charles VI Much like the blooming of the Midday Rose, The light reflected when your awe-struck eyes Dare gaze upon the beauty of my being Is not my own, but of Eternity Which shines right through me, changing me to glass; Imperfect, yes—my earthly stains add colour And twist its rays—but growing ever clearer, For more and more I see you do not see A man at all, but stare beyond my skin To something more than mortal flesh can be. But if coarse hands attempt to grasp at it Then I will surely shatter, for so fine A form is hardly of this fallen realm, Where traitors, accidents and pestilence All lie in wait at every turn to take The delicate and grind it into dust And one so pure as I must be condemned To this soft dungeon, never to come down; So wrap me carefully in reams of silk— Beware those heavy hands don’t crack my crown— And pay no mind to those dull, smirking men With all their manuscripts and measurements And arrogance of art, who promise that, With a swift kick, my rump would bruise not break. They would confuse all majesty with madness But, just as surely as the sun does bow In daily homage to the earth, the truths They proudly whore—as if God’s perfect mind Were bound by theory, treatises, and law— Are naught but straw, the dreaming of the blind. And yet I fear their drab, fantastic world Must come to pass, as I, at last, shall fracture Into a million tiny, gleaming shards, Each one unique in its own prettiness But lacking the perfection of the whole, And breaking, breaking into smaller splinters Whose pellucid points pierce those thieving hands Who’d claim my brittle grandeur for their own; For after me come waning generations Of small, grey-hearted men, cut from dull stone. So, as you look upon me now, behold The glory of a slowly setting sun But do not speak of miracles or madmen Until you’ve seen through your own skin, for though This world might be a many-coloured window Which veils a finer light we fools call darkness, Its sad delusions, wrought of dust and fire, Must be too real or light could not appear, And so, as clearest glass confounds the eye, I am like nothingness, yet I am here. . The Midday Rose: The southern, and largest, of the three rose windows of Notre Dame cathedral. The imagery in its 84 panels is drawn from the Last Judgement. . . Shaun C. Duncan is a picture framer and fine art printer who lives in Adelaide, South Australia. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 28 Responses Joseph S. Salemi March 25, 2023 This is a powerful dramatic monologue, made all the more compelling in that it is the voice of a madman. The poem is also impersonal — it is the feigned speech of a historical character, and not the whining confessional drivel that is typically the product of modernism and its offshoots. Do readers not see that this is more interesting, more exciting, and more lavish in its fictive capacity than writing about one’s personal problems and feelings? (Well, don’t answer that. The notion that poetry has to be personal and emotive seems to have infected nearly everyone today.) The last two lines present a striking simile that is tangible and psychologically profound at the same time: And so, as clearest glass confounds the eye, I am like nothingness, yet I am here. I hope Mr. Duncan will pen a companion piece about “The Dance of the Burning Ones,” another strange episode in the life of this unfortunate French king. Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you for this generous comment, Joseph. I’m not one for whining and I honestly couldn’t imagine anything more boring than writing about myself. I’d also question whether true confessional art is even possible – certainly most of what I’ve read comes across as dishonest posturing. The closing lines are adapted from the testimony of a 20th century sufferer of the glass delusion, which seemed to echo something of the theology of Dionysius the Areopagite which was, in turn, influential in the development of stained glass windows. I didn’t have a particular destination in mind when I started writing the piece, but given these associations (and the fact that Dionysius is often identified with St Denis, the patron saint of Paris) it seemed like the perfect way to close. I promise I will start writing a piece on “The Dance Of The Burning Ones” just as soon as I finish another I am currently working on. Reply Julian D. Woodruff March 27, 2023 Shaun, thank you for a very distinctive poem, about a figure and an affliction that were unknown to me. As conversant with such vivid chapters of history as you are, I hope to see your poetic treatment of others. Paul Buchheit March 25, 2023 Great story, Shaun, and expertly rendered! I had never heard of this “glass malady.” Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you, Paul. I hadn’t heard of it either until quite recently and I started writing the poem immediately upon learning of it! Reply Cheryl Corey March 25, 2023 One of the things I love about SCP is the variety of poetry. There’s always an opportunity to learn about the most unique subjects. This is one of those poems. It prompted me to do a little research about the unfortunate king and his history of mental illness. Very interesting, Shaun. I like the way that you incorporate glass-related imagery such as “pellucid points”, “brittle grandeur”, “gleaming shards”, and “many-coloured window.” Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you, Cheryl. If nothing else, I’d like my poems to at least be interesting, so hopefully the subject matter will distract from any technical shortcomings in my work! Reply DONALD PETER McCRORY March 26, 2023 HI SHAUN, A really readable rendition of a diffcult theme. Well done! I wonder if the famous novel, one of 12, entitled EL LICENCIADO VIDRIERA ( THE GRADUATE MADE OF GLASS) written by Miguel de CERVANTES ( 1547-1616) was inspired by the illness of King Charles VI? If you have not read the novel, included in his collection of texts translated as the Exemplary Novels, it may be worthwhile taking a look. Cervantes wrote much more than Don Quijote, vols 1 & 2. It is mentioned in my biography of Cervantes published by PETER OWN in London in 2002. Best wishes and look forward to your next poems. Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you, Donald. I haven’t read Cervantes’ novella yet (I wanted to wait until I’d finished writing my poem) but it’s often mentioned in commentary on glass delusions and I think it’s one of the earliest writings on the subject. I don’t know if it was inspired by Charles VI directly – while his remains the most famous case, apparently such delusions were fairly common among the upper classes from the high middle ages through to the dawning on the industrial revolution. I’d be kean to read your biography of Cervantes – if I can’t find a copy locally, I’ll grab the kindle version. Reply DONALD PETER McCRORY March 26, 2023 HI SHAUN Amazon etc surely has copies. P:OWEN sold the copyrights to an american company and so I have lost contact. I now am living in Spain. My biography was translated into Mandarin and Dutch and was very well received when first published. Other works of mine (novels for Y/A and for Mind-Body Spirit readers and award-winning poems you can fond on my website: http://www.donaldmccrory.co.uk. Keep up your good work and I wish you every success. Best, Donald Joseph S. Salemi March 26, 2023 The “glass delusion” seems to have been a fairly frequent mental problem in the 15th, 16th, and 17th centuries. Many persons began to imagine that they were made of glass, and could break easily. Not just Cervantes, but several other writers of the time mentioned the phenomenon. One psychologist suggests that it has to do with the arrival of a new technology, and how it is seized upon by the unconscious mind as a locus of fixation. Something similar happened in the late 19th and early 20th century, when electricity came into common use. Many people were terrified that electricity was “leaking” into their homes, and would poison or kill them. I suggest that it’s happening right now to millions of people, who have become deranged over the dangers of fossil fuels. Reply Julian D. Woodruff March 27, 2023 Another set of intriguing historical tidbits–thank you, Joseph. I was struck by the one on electricity, since I have critique partner who’s polishing a kids’ novel called Feeders, set in 1892 Rochester NY, and featuring beings that emerge from electrical outlets and growing … Reply Isabel Scheltens March 28, 2023 Could there be any connection to the phenomenon of people claiming to be sensitive to electromagnetic fields? Reply Joseph S. Salemi March 28, 2023 Some doctors think the condition is purely psychosomatic, since the reported symptoms of EMF exposure vary widely, and are much more common in certain nations (Scandinavia and Germany) than in other nations with just as much exposure to electromagnetic fields. It could very well be another instance of the “glass delusion.” Margaret Coats March 27, 2023 Shaun, this is a magnificent poem. As I first read it, I could not help but think of Shakespeare’s Richard II. In that play, the motif of “the king’s two bodies” is vitally important, as it is here, whether you explicitly intend it or not. One body is the king’s body of flesh, and the other is the realm he is consecrated to rule. Take a look at Richard’s speech, “Not all the water in the rough rude sea/Can wash the balm from an anointed king.” Richard was, nonetheless, deposed and murdered, with his realm going on to suffer all the evils of the Wars of the Roses. Similar things happened in Charles’s realm. He became king at age 12 in 1380, under the guardianship of four uncles, all of whom fought for dominance. He began personal rule in 1388, but his madness started in 1392, and continued intermittently until his death 20 years later. This entire time was one of great suffering for France, with the English in control of nearly half the country, and ceaseless battles among warring factions in the rest. No stability in that body politic, and very little in the way of governance at all! Patriotic royalist poet Christine de Pisan, who was present at court, interpreted the situation as follows in the first stanza of Ballade 95 in her “Hundred Ballades.” Oft should we, mindful of the grave damage, Weep for the woes of the kingdom of France, That was and is the realm and heritage Of Christians of greatest predominance, But God now subjects us to disturbance, By which our joy is rendered jeopardy, And for our vices one bears the penance, Our good king who suffers dire malady. Christine undoubtedly knew of the glass delusion, and she certainly knew the king sometimes had to be restrained from violent attacks on servants and members of his family. She wrote other poems that loyally conceal the worst of Charles’s condition. It is great to have yours which seems as sympathetic as hers, but beautifully explores the interior workings of the unfortunate king’s mind. Reply Monika Cooper March 29, 2023 That is a wonderful stanza from Christine de Pizan! Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 29, 2023 Thank you for this comment, Margaret. The motif of the two bodies was intentional but I hadn’t made the connection with Richard II. The second body in my poem was intended to be that of the old order or divine sovereignty itself and I thought it might be interesting to add a prophetic element to Charles’ madness. Thank you as well for the translation of Christine de Pisan’s poem. I knew Charles had been satirised later but I had no idea he had a sympathetic voice at court. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant March 27, 2023 Shaun, like others I hadn’t heard of the glass malady – how intriguing, and what a wonderful challenge for a poet. You have brought the subject to life with poetry that ignites the page and fires my imagination. To slip into the realm of the bizarre and address this madness with mellifluous and elevated language that appeals to the senses is quite an accomplishment. There are so many highlights… I love the subtle ambiguity employed in; “Beware those heavy hands don’t crack my crown”, and I especially like the internal rhymes and adept use of alliteration. My favorite example is, “… pellucid points pierce those thieving hands” – I love the word ‘pellucid’ and alongside the short, sharp ‘points’ and ‘pierce’ it has aural and visual appeal… your use of imagery is exquisite. This poem is an absolute privilege to read. Shaun, thank you! Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 29, 2023 Thank you, Susan. It was a fun subject to approach as a poet. I didn’t have anything I particularly wanted to express with the poem but it was a nice opportunity to riff on the metaphoric possibilities of glass for a few stanzas! It’s nice to use a bit of elevated language and write with someone else’s voice for a change too. Reply Monika Cooper March 29, 2023 This is complex and, I have to say, not easy to follow or read, at least for me. But I’m glad I read it. And I don’t think it is trying to be easy. There is a Hebrew blessing to say in the presence of an earthly king: Blessed art thou, O Lord our God, King of the universe, who hast given of Thy glory to flesh and blood. The king in this poem experiences his flesh and blood as glass and knows that glory beams through it. Even in madness, he knows who he is, in a way the mockers don’t and can’t. The mad kings in history and literature are icons for us, here an icon pieced of glass. The poem reflects on kingship at its most vulnerable, which is also paradoxically, the point where the most of God’s glory comes through. You look at one of the weakest links in the royal succession and see the sacramental strength still holding there, because the source of this institution is not merely human but Divine. Madness in a king is less harmful to the nation than abdication would be. The last line has a mystical resonance. Any human could speak it. Any human knowing the touch of Divine light knows how much like nothingness he is. Yet, by His grace alone, here. Reply Shaun C. Duncan March 29, 2023 Thank you for your kind remarks and for taking the time to read my poem. I deliberately aimed for a stream-of-consciousness feel, allowing the metaphorical possibilities of glass and light to guide things. I wasn’t necessarily trying to make things difficult, but too much clarity might’ve undercut the sense of mental instability. That said, your reading of the poem squares perfectly with my intent. My fictional Charles struggles to reconcile his role as the sovereign with his experience of himself as a human being, but comes to a prophetic understanding of the fragility of power, which becomes more dangerous as it devolves from monarchy to “democracy”, and sees that the philosophy that would dismiss his condition as mere madness will ultimately attempt to strip the world of all glory. The last line is a paraphrase of a statement made by a 20th century sufferer of the glass delusion which is strikingly similar to a simile originally found in Dionysius the Areopagite but repeated by many other Christian mystics and theologians including Aquinas and Saint John of the Cross. Reply Monika Cooper March 31, 2023 You may have read, or be interested in reading, In A Dark Wood Wandering by Hella Haasse, about Charles d’Orleans, with Charles VI as a character. It’s a novel of the Middle Ages with a meditative, almost esoteric, vision of that era in French history. Charles d’Orleans was, among his other roles, a poet. C.B. Anderson March 29, 2023 I wish that I, Shaun, knew how to write a poem as well ordered and as serious as this one of yours. The more I read such well-measured efforts, the less happy I am with my own shortcomings. This is what it comes down to: choose a subject and bring light to realms heretofore undiscovered. Reply Shaun C. Duncan April 2, 2023 Thank you, CB, this is most kind. However, when I read your work I often feel my own is bloated and pretentious by comparison. Hopefully we can convert our mutual dissatisfaction into inspiration. Reply Margaret Coats April 2, 2023 Shaun, I have recently been exploring the technology of cryonics, by which some few hundreds of persons have already committed themselves to spend a few centuries after death “frozen” in a very low temperature state, thinking that perhaps their bodies or brains can be preserved and somehow live on. There is, of course, no guarantee and little practical likelihood of reanimation. Since the first person entered this state in 1967, it has been discovered that freezing cracks cell membranes in a destructive manner. Now, therefore, blood is drained and “antifreeze” chemicals introduced into the blood vessels to “vitrify” the recently deceased body. Turning the dead body into glass of a sort is today’s tenacious hope for immortality. Thus, there are now glass human bodies preserved in low temperature nitrogen. The individuals while living planned this, but unlike King Charles they are presently unconscious. Reply Shaun C. Duncan April 2, 2023 Wow, I’m familiar with cryonics but I didn’t realise they were replacing their blood with antifreeze. I know some, who maybe don’t have the cash to freeze their whole body, have opted to freeze only their head, most likely in the belief they’ll one day be able to upload the contents of their brain to one of Amazon’s servers. It’s all quite ludicrous but I find it funny how deeply superstitious the California technologists are when it comes to their faith in “progress.” Cryonics is really not all that different from the funerary practices of the ancient Egyptians. Reply Joseph S. Salemi April 7, 2023 A section of my epic “A Gallery of Ethopaths” deals with cryogenic freezing of the dead. I’m going to submit it to Evan Mantyk. As has been mentioned by several persons in discussion threads here at the SCP, a great deal of contemporary left-liberal fanaticism seems to be directed towards the unnatural altering, mutilation, or disfiguring of the human body, whether during life or afterwards in death. Recently in Germany (where else?) some artist or artists were involved in actually using preserved corpses as sculptural material. Place this beside the current craze for every sort of body alteration (piercings, tattooing, amputation, facial and mammary and buttock surgery, skin lifts and botoxing, and genital restructuring for trannies) and you see a world-wide miasma of demon-driven insanity. Cryogenic freezing is just an attempt to keep the process going even after death. For devout Christians, the world is incarnational. This means that everything, including our bodies, is suffused with varying degrees of holiness and blessedness. Our flesh is not only created by God, but He has also entered it in time, and sustains us with it via the Eucharist. What is going on right now, with the widespread degradation of the human body, is Hell’s savage campaign to stamp out any memory of incarnation, by debasing and uglifying our flesh. Reply Margaret Coats April 7, 2023 Wise comment and analysis, Joe. It will be interesting to see your work here, and to hear the discussion in response. Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Joseph S. Salemi March 25, 2023 This is a powerful dramatic monologue, made all the more compelling in that it is the voice of a madman. The poem is also impersonal — it is the feigned speech of a historical character, and not the whining confessional drivel that is typically the product of modernism and its offshoots. Do readers not see that this is more interesting, more exciting, and more lavish in its fictive capacity than writing about one’s personal problems and feelings? (Well, don’t answer that. The notion that poetry has to be personal and emotive seems to have infected nearly everyone today.) The last two lines present a striking simile that is tangible and psychologically profound at the same time: And so, as clearest glass confounds the eye, I am like nothingness, yet I am here. I hope Mr. Duncan will pen a companion piece about “The Dance of the Burning Ones,” another strange episode in the life of this unfortunate French king. Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you for this generous comment, Joseph. I’m not one for whining and I honestly couldn’t imagine anything more boring than writing about myself. I’d also question whether true confessional art is even possible – certainly most of what I’ve read comes across as dishonest posturing. The closing lines are adapted from the testimony of a 20th century sufferer of the glass delusion, which seemed to echo something of the theology of Dionysius the Areopagite which was, in turn, influential in the development of stained glass windows. I didn’t have a particular destination in mind when I started writing the piece, but given these associations (and the fact that Dionysius is often identified with St Denis, the patron saint of Paris) it seemed like the perfect way to close. I promise I will start writing a piece on “The Dance Of The Burning Ones” just as soon as I finish another I am currently working on. Reply
Julian D. Woodruff March 27, 2023 Shaun, thank you for a very distinctive poem, about a figure and an affliction that were unknown to me. As conversant with such vivid chapters of history as you are, I hope to see your poetic treatment of others.
Paul Buchheit March 25, 2023 Great story, Shaun, and expertly rendered! I had never heard of this “glass malady.” Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you, Paul. I hadn’t heard of it either until quite recently and I started writing the poem immediately upon learning of it! Reply
Cheryl Corey March 25, 2023 One of the things I love about SCP is the variety of poetry. There’s always an opportunity to learn about the most unique subjects. This is one of those poems. It prompted me to do a little research about the unfortunate king and his history of mental illness. Very interesting, Shaun. I like the way that you incorporate glass-related imagery such as “pellucid points”, “brittle grandeur”, “gleaming shards”, and “many-coloured window.” Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you, Cheryl. If nothing else, I’d like my poems to at least be interesting, so hopefully the subject matter will distract from any technical shortcomings in my work! Reply
DONALD PETER McCRORY March 26, 2023 HI SHAUN, A really readable rendition of a diffcult theme. Well done! I wonder if the famous novel, one of 12, entitled EL LICENCIADO VIDRIERA ( THE GRADUATE MADE OF GLASS) written by Miguel de CERVANTES ( 1547-1616) was inspired by the illness of King Charles VI? If you have not read the novel, included in his collection of texts translated as the Exemplary Novels, it may be worthwhile taking a look. Cervantes wrote much more than Don Quijote, vols 1 & 2. It is mentioned in my biography of Cervantes published by PETER OWN in London in 2002. Best wishes and look forward to your next poems. Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 26, 2023 Thank you, Donald. I haven’t read Cervantes’ novella yet (I wanted to wait until I’d finished writing my poem) but it’s often mentioned in commentary on glass delusions and I think it’s one of the earliest writings on the subject. I don’t know if it was inspired by Charles VI directly – while his remains the most famous case, apparently such delusions were fairly common among the upper classes from the high middle ages through to the dawning on the industrial revolution. I’d be kean to read your biography of Cervantes – if I can’t find a copy locally, I’ll grab the kindle version. Reply
DONALD PETER McCRORY March 26, 2023 HI SHAUN Amazon etc surely has copies. P:OWEN sold the copyrights to an american company and so I have lost contact. I now am living in Spain. My biography was translated into Mandarin and Dutch and was very well received when first published. Other works of mine (novels for Y/A and for Mind-Body Spirit readers and award-winning poems you can fond on my website: http://www.donaldmccrory.co.uk. Keep up your good work and I wish you every success. Best, Donald
Joseph S. Salemi March 26, 2023 The “glass delusion” seems to have been a fairly frequent mental problem in the 15th, 16th, and 17th centuries. Many persons began to imagine that they were made of glass, and could break easily. Not just Cervantes, but several other writers of the time mentioned the phenomenon. One psychologist suggests that it has to do with the arrival of a new technology, and how it is seized upon by the unconscious mind as a locus of fixation. Something similar happened in the late 19th and early 20th century, when electricity came into common use. Many people were terrified that electricity was “leaking” into their homes, and would poison or kill them. I suggest that it’s happening right now to millions of people, who have become deranged over the dangers of fossil fuels. Reply
Julian D. Woodruff March 27, 2023 Another set of intriguing historical tidbits–thank you, Joseph. I was struck by the one on electricity, since I have critique partner who’s polishing a kids’ novel called Feeders, set in 1892 Rochester NY, and featuring beings that emerge from electrical outlets and growing … Reply
Isabel Scheltens March 28, 2023 Could there be any connection to the phenomenon of people claiming to be sensitive to electromagnetic fields? Reply
Joseph S. Salemi March 28, 2023 Some doctors think the condition is purely psychosomatic, since the reported symptoms of EMF exposure vary widely, and are much more common in certain nations (Scandinavia and Germany) than in other nations with just as much exposure to electromagnetic fields. It could very well be another instance of the “glass delusion.”
Margaret Coats March 27, 2023 Shaun, this is a magnificent poem. As I first read it, I could not help but think of Shakespeare’s Richard II. In that play, the motif of “the king’s two bodies” is vitally important, as it is here, whether you explicitly intend it or not. One body is the king’s body of flesh, and the other is the realm he is consecrated to rule. Take a look at Richard’s speech, “Not all the water in the rough rude sea/Can wash the balm from an anointed king.” Richard was, nonetheless, deposed and murdered, with his realm going on to suffer all the evils of the Wars of the Roses. Similar things happened in Charles’s realm. He became king at age 12 in 1380, under the guardianship of four uncles, all of whom fought for dominance. He began personal rule in 1388, but his madness started in 1392, and continued intermittently until his death 20 years later. This entire time was one of great suffering for France, with the English in control of nearly half the country, and ceaseless battles among warring factions in the rest. No stability in that body politic, and very little in the way of governance at all! Patriotic royalist poet Christine de Pisan, who was present at court, interpreted the situation as follows in the first stanza of Ballade 95 in her “Hundred Ballades.” Oft should we, mindful of the grave damage, Weep for the woes of the kingdom of France, That was and is the realm and heritage Of Christians of greatest predominance, But God now subjects us to disturbance, By which our joy is rendered jeopardy, And for our vices one bears the penance, Our good king who suffers dire malady. Christine undoubtedly knew of the glass delusion, and she certainly knew the king sometimes had to be restrained from violent attacks on servants and members of his family. She wrote other poems that loyally conceal the worst of Charles’s condition. It is great to have yours which seems as sympathetic as hers, but beautifully explores the interior workings of the unfortunate king’s mind. Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 29, 2023 Thank you for this comment, Margaret. The motif of the two bodies was intentional but I hadn’t made the connection with Richard II. The second body in my poem was intended to be that of the old order or divine sovereignty itself and I thought it might be interesting to add a prophetic element to Charles’ madness. Thank you as well for the translation of Christine de Pisan’s poem. I knew Charles had been satirised later but I had no idea he had a sympathetic voice at court. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant March 27, 2023 Shaun, like others I hadn’t heard of the glass malady – how intriguing, and what a wonderful challenge for a poet. You have brought the subject to life with poetry that ignites the page and fires my imagination. To slip into the realm of the bizarre and address this madness with mellifluous and elevated language that appeals to the senses is quite an accomplishment. There are so many highlights… I love the subtle ambiguity employed in; “Beware those heavy hands don’t crack my crown”, and I especially like the internal rhymes and adept use of alliteration. My favorite example is, “… pellucid points pierce those thieving hands” – I love the word ‘pellucid’ and alongside the short, sharp ‘points’ and ‘pierce’ it has aural and visual appeal… your use of imagery is exquisite. This poem is an absolute privilege to read. Shaun, thank you! Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 29, 2023 Thank you, Susan. It was a fun subject to approach as a poet. I didn’t have anything I particularly wanted to express with the poem but it was a nice opportunity to riff on the metaphoric possibilities of glass for a few stanzas! It’s nice to use a bit of elevated language and write with someone else’s voice for a change too. Reply
Monika Cooper March 29, 2023 This is complex and, I have to say, not easy to follow or read, at least for me. But I’m glad I read it. And I don’t think it is trying to be easy. There is a Hebrew blessing to say in the presence of an earthly king: Blessed art thou, O Lord our God, King of the universe, who hast given of Thy glory to flesh and blood. The king in this poem experiences his flesh and blood as glass and knows that glory beams through it. Even in madness, he knows who he is, in a way the mockers don’t and can’t. The mad kings in history and literature are icons for us, here an icon pieced of glass. The poem reflects on kingship at its most vulnerable, which is also paradoxically, the point where the most of God’s glory comes through. You look at one of the weakest links in the royal succession and see the sacramental strength still holding there, because the source of this institution is not merely human but Divine. Madness in a king is less harmful to the nation than abdication would be. The last line has a mystical resonance. Any human could speak it. Any human knowing the touch of Divine light knows how much like nothingness he is. Yet, by His grace alone, here. Reply
Shaun C. Duncan March 29, 2023 Thank you for your kind remarks and for taking the time to read my poem. I deliberately aimed for a stream-of-consciousness feel, allowing the metaphorical possibilities of glass and light to guide things. I wasn’t necessarily trying to make things difficult, but too much clarity might’ve undercut the sense of mental instability. That said, your reading of the poem squares perfectly with my intent. My fictional Charles struggles to reconcile his role as the sovereign with his experience of himself as a human being, but comes to a prophetic understanding of the fragility of power, which becomes more dangerous as it devolves from monarchy to “democracy”, and sees that the philosophy that would dismiss his condition as mere madness will ultimately attempt to strip the world of all glory. The last line is a paraphrase of a statement made by a 20th century sufferer of the glass delusion which is strikingly similar to a simile originally found in Dionysius the Areopagite but repeated by many other Christian mystics and theologians including Aquinas and Saint John of the Cross. Reply
Monika Cooper March 31, 2023 You may have read, or be interested in reading, In A Dark Wood Wandering by Hella Haasse, about Charles d’Orleans, with Charles VI as a character. It’s a novel of the Middle Ages with a meditative, almost esoteric, vision of that era in French history. Charles d’Orleans was, among his other roles, a poet.
C.B. Anderson March 29, 2023 I wish that I, Shaun, knew how to write a poem as well ordered and as serious as this one of yours. The more I read such well-measured efforts, the less happy I am with my own shortcomings. This is what it comes down to: choose a subject and bring light to realms heretofore undiscovered. Reply
Shaun C. Duncan April 2, 2023 Thank you, CB, this is most kind. However, when I read your work I often feel my own is bloated and pretentious by comparison. Hopefully we can convert our mutual dissatisfaction into inspiration. Reply
Margaret Coats April 2, 2023 Shaun, I have recently been exploring the technology of cryonics, by which some few hundreds of persons have already committed themselves to spend a few centuries after death “frozen” in a very low temperature state, thinking that perhaps their bodies or brains can be preserved and somehow live on. There is, of course, no guarantee and little practical likelihood of reanimation. Since the first person entered this state in 1967, it has been discovered that freezing cracks cell membranes in a destructive manner. Now, therefore, blood is drained and “antifreeze” chemicals introduced into the blood vessels to “vitrify” the recently deceased body. Turning the dead body into glass of a sort is today’s tenacious hope for immortality. Thus, there are now glass human bodies preserved in low temperature nitrogen. The individuals while living planned this, but unlike King Charles they are presently unconscious. Reply
Shaun C. Duncan April 2, 2023 Wow, I’m familiar with cryonics but I didn’t realise they were replacing their blood with antifreeze. I know some, who maybe don’t have the cash to freeze their whole body, have opted to freeze only their head, most likely in the belief they’ll one day be able to upload the contents of their brain to one of Amazon’s servers. It’s all quite ludicrous but I find it funny how deeply superstitious the California technologists are when it comes to their faith in “progress.” Cryonics is really not all that different from the funerary practices of the ancient Egyptians. Reply
Joseph S. Salemi April 7, 2023 A section of my epic “A Gallery of Ethopaths” deals with cryogenic freezing of the dead. I’m going to submit it to Evan Mantyk. As has been mentioned by several persons in discussion threads here at the SCP, a great deal of contemporary left-liberal fanaticism seems to be directed towards the unnatural altering, mutilation, or disfiguring of the human body, whether during life or afterwards in death. Recently in Germany (where else?) some artist or artists were involved in actually using preserved corpses as sculptural material. Place this beside the current craze for every sort of body alteration (piercings, tattooing, amputation, facial and mammary and buttock surgery, skin lifts and botoxing, and genital restructuring for trannies) and you see a world-wide miasma of demon-driven insanity. Cryogenic freezing is just an attempt to keep the process going even after death. For devout Christians, the world is incarnational. This means that everything, including our bodies, is suffused with varying degrees of holiness and blessedness. Our flesh is not only created by God, but He has also entered it in time, and sustains us with it via the Eucharist. What is going on right now, with the widespread degradation of the human body, is Hell’s savage campaign to stamp out any memory of incarnation, by debasing and uglifying our flesh. Reply
Margaret Coats April 7, 2023 Wise comment and analysis, Joe. It will be interesting to see your work here, and to hear the discussion in response.