"Sailing Ships in the Sound" by Vilhelm KyhnThe ‘Muse’: A Poem by Leland James The Society June 7, 2023 Beauty, Poetry 11 Comments . The “Muse” A sailboat, small, unvarnished wood, her sail a swath, a patch, of red fastened by type-9 yo-yo string to a pencil mast and a stick of boom; a sailboat, small, unvarnished wood atop a bookcase, moored abreast an amphora vase wanting Greek wine, sprouting a wilting bouquet instead, a spray of yesterday’s anemone— the “Muse” awakened, coming about full-sail departing the bookcase bay, close to the wind, alive in the lines, craft aslant making its way: the “Muse,” into the main, Gangway! past the tin-can clatter of everyday. . . Leland James is the author of five poetry collections, four children’s books in verse, and a book on creative writing and poetry craft. He has published over three hundred poems worldwide including The Lyric, Rattle, London Magazine, The South Carolina Review, The Spoon River Poetry Review, New Millennium Writings, The American Poetry Review, The Haiku Quarterly, The American Cowboy, and The Ekphrastic Review. He was the winner of the Aesthetica Creative Writing Award and has won or received honors in many other competitions, both in the USA and Europe. Leland has been featured in American Life in Poetry and was recently nominated for a Pushcart Prize. www.lelandjamespoet.com & https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/leland-james NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 11 Responses Satyananda Sarangi June 8, 2023 Greetings, Sir! This is sheer brilliance. The melody, the imagery and the flow! This is top-notch. Reply David Hollywood June 8, 2023 Lovely imagery in a calm, yet expectant style. Reply Paul Freeman June 8, 2023 Wow! I found this amazingly vivid, Leland, as if your whole study / den / library were brought into view, focussing on the ship before your creative imagination set sail. Is this just a model boat you made, or a ship in a bottle being unleashed? My fave line amongst many fine lines …. ‘the “Muse” awakened, coming about…’ The uniqueness of this poem also helps raise it to great heights, I felt. The greatest praise I can give is that I wish I’d written it myself. I was going to say this poem deserves a better title, then realised ‘The Muse’ is the name of the ship. Doh! Thanks for a fantastic read. Reply Margaret Coats June 8, 2023 An unusual concept, to consider a sailboat that turns out to be a miniature built from simple materials. I would call the first stanza the “craft” part of the development. In the second stanza appear symbols of culture (bookcase, amphora, wine, flowers, and the name “Muse”), a fuller preparation for what is to come. The third stanza describes the motion of creative activity. How many poetic adventures involve a ship–and here is another, sailing past the “tin-can clatter of everyday.” Nice work, Leland. Reply Alexander Lazarus Wolff June 8, 2023 This is remarkable writing and incredibly refreshing to read. Your technical dexterity polishes every word. I was especially pleased to read your poem “The Sanitarium Window” too. Reply Monika Cooper June 9, 2023 This poem has great charm. Reply Leland James June 10, 2023 Thanks to all for kind words. Glad you liked poem. Reply Bunny June 10, 2023 Dear Leland James, I really like your poem. I can see the sailboat very clearly in my mind. Thank you as always for your wonderful work! Bunny Reply Lion June 10, 2023 Dear Leland James, The poem is wonderful. The sailboat is amazing. Love the poem. Reply C.B. Anderson June 10, 2023 This poem is adrift, without a narrative, but the succession of images (many nautical) drop anchor in time to instruct the aspiring poet that the port has been reached, though there will always be shifting seascapes. You always test me, Leland. Reply jd June 12, 2023 A lovely poem. Thank you for the pleasure of reading it (twice and maybe more). Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Satyananda Sarangi June 8, 2023 Greetings, Sir! This is sheer brilliance. The melody, the imagery and the flow! This is top-notch. Reply
Paul Freeman June 8, 2023 Wow! I found this amazingly vivid, Leland, as if your whole study / den / library were brought into view, focussing on the ship before your creative imagination set sail. Is this just a model boat you made, or a ship in a bottle being unleashed? My fave line amongst many fine lines …. ‘the “Muse” awakened, coming about…’ The uniqueness of this poem also helps raise it to great heights, I felt. The greatest praise I can give is that I wish I’d written it myself. I was going to say this poem deserves a better title, then realised ‘The Muse’ is the name of the ship. Doh! Thanks for a fantastic read. Reply
Margaret Coats June 8, 2023 An unusual concept, to consider a sailboat that turns out to be a miniature built from simple materials. I would call the first stanza the “craft” part of the development. In the second stanza appear symbols of culture (bookcase, amphora, wine, flowers, and the name “Muse”), a fuller preparation for what is to come. The third stanza describes the motion of creative activity. How many poetic adventures involve a ship–and here is another, sailing past the “tin-can clatter of everyday.” Nice work, Leland. Reply
Alexander Lazarus Wolff June 8, 2023 This is remarkable writing and incredibly refreshing to read. Your technical dexterity polishes every word. I was especially pleased to read your poem “The Sanitarium Window” too. Reply
Bunny June 10, 2023 Dear Leland James, I really like your poem. I can see the sailboat very clearly in my mind. Thank you as always for your wonderful work! Bunny Reply
Lion June 10, 2023 Dear Leland James, The poem is wonderful. The sailboat is amazing. Love the poem. Reply
C.B. Anderson June 10, 2023 This poem is adrift, without a narrative, but the succession of images (many nautical) drop anchor in time to instruct the aspiring poet that the port has been reached, though there will always be shifting seascapes. You always test me, Leland. Reply
jd June 12, 2023 A lovely poem. Thank you for the pleasure of reading it (twice and maybe more). Reply