"The Love Missive" by Carl Herpfer‘I Have Loved You All Along’: A Poem by James Sale The Society August 17, 2023 Love Poems, Poetry 12 Comments . I Have Loved You All Along for Linda I have loved you all along; No matter what was error, Or what was done imperfectly Through weakness, worry, plainly wrong: I have loved you all along. I have loved you all along, As birds sing every day, Or suns arc tremendous skies; Like heroes, every action’s strong: I have loved you all along. I have loved you all along: There is a death coming, A river dividing flesh from flesh— Whatever—still—to you I belong. I have loved you all along. First published in Inside the Whale. . . James Sale has had over 50 books published, most recently, “Mapping Motivation for Top Performing Teams” (Routledge, 2021). He has been nominated by The Hong Kong Review for the 2022 Pushcart Prize for poetry, has won first prize in The Society of Classical Poets 2017 annual competition, and performed in New York in 2019. He is a regular contributor to The Epoch Times. His most recent poetry collection is “StairWell.” For more information about the author, and about his Dante project, visit https://englishcantos.home.blog. To subscribe to his brief, free and monthly poetry newsletter, contact him at [email protected] NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 12 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson August 17, 2023 That has the makings of a wonderful song. Such a precious tribute to one you obviously loved! Reply James Sale August 17, 2023 Your appreciation is always appreciated Roy – thanks. One small thing though: a question of tense! Love, not loved: don’t let Mrs Sale find you committing this error or she’ll have to exercise her awesome Tai Chi skills on you! Reply Michael Pietrack August 17, 2023 Linda is easy to love. You, on the other hand, are the likely culprit in stanza one. Kidding aside, very nice poem, and it reminds me of Proverbs 5:18. A wiser reminder on how to view our precious marriage mates. Reply James Sale August 18, 2023 Proverbs 5 is a great reminder: thank you. Reply Joseph S. Salemi August 17, 2023 This is a truly beautiful poem, with both simplicity and great depth of feeling. It touches upon death, but also conquers it. Reply James Sale August 18, 2023 Thanks Joe, really glad you like this poem so much. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant August 17, 2023 A love poem that transcends time… simply beautiful, James! Reply James Sale August 18, 2023 Beauty is what we both want in poetry, Susan: thank you.! Reply ABB August 17, 2023 A lovely tribute to your wife, James. I like how you dismiss the prospect of death with “whatever.” I found myself wondering to which river of the afterlife you are referring in the last stanza—Styx, or perhaps Eunoe, where knowledge of good deeds are strengthened as one enters heaven—before realizing I was probably reading too much into it and it’s just a simple metaphor, which would accord with the more straightforward nature of the poem. Reply Margaret Coats August 17, 2023 A good love song, James. It has just the length and amount of repetition for a popular piece, as Roy says. If you can manage some chords on a guitar or keyboard, I’m sure Linda would be charmed. But if I were the singer, I would say, “There is death a-coming.” You probably mean that one death carries flesh from flesh, which is true, but “a-coming” suits the rhythm as I read it, and goes along with your key word, “along.” Reply James Sale August 18, 2023 Thank you Margaret, but I think I will leave the song-writing to the song writers: who knows, one may want to take this poem on board. That would be fine. Regarding the metrical change you are suggesting, I see why you are saying it, but I would have to decline to make such a change. I love mimetic effects and this is an attempt at one. You may remember that the first line of Paradise Lost begins: Of man’s first disobedience and the fruit … In other words, the word ‘first’ has disobeyed the metrical pattern and a trochee rather than an iamb has occurred. Neat! So, to compare small things with great, my own line: There is a death coming, does not run smooth. It could, as you point out, run very smoothly iambic if we insert the word a-: There is a death a-coming. That is nice, BUT death isn’t, and so we start with the nice rising iambs till death comes, then abruptly – at death’s presence as a word – one falling trochee changes the mood. I think that is less smooth but far more powerful, but as always each reader must be his own judge. Thanks for such a thoughtful response. Reply James Sale August 18, 2023 Ah! Andrew – those rivers, those rivers! Carry me over the Jordan! Probably, a simple metaphor! Glad you liked the poem. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson August 17, 2023 That has the makings of a wonderful song. Such a precious tribute to one you obviously loved! Reply
James Sale August 17, 2023 Your appreciation is always appreciated Roy – thanks. One small thing though: a question of tense! Love, not loved: don’t let Mrs Sale find you committing this error or she’ll have to exercise her awesome Tai Chi skills on you! Reply
Michael Pietrack August 17, 2023 Linda is easy to love. You, on the other hand, are the likely culprit in stanza one. Kidding aside, very nice poem, and it reminds me of Proverbs 5:18. A wiser reminder on how to view our precious marriage mates. Reply
Joseph S. Salemi August 17, 2023 This is a truly beautiful poem, with both simplicity and great depth of feeling. It touches upon death, but also conquers it. Reply
ABB August 17, 2023 A lovely tribute to your wife, James. I like how you dismiss the prospect of death with “whatever.” I found myself wondering to which river of the afterlife you are referring in the last stanza—Styx, or perhaps Eunoe, where knowledge of good deeds are strengthened as one enters heaven—before realizing I was probably reading too much into it and it’s just a simple metaphor, which would accord with the more straightforward nature of the poem. Reply
Margaret Coats August 17, 2023 A good love song, James. It has just the length and amount of repetition for a popular piece, as Roy says. If you can manage some chords on a guitar or keyboard, I’m sure Linda would be charmed. But if I were the singer, I would say, “There is death a-coming.” You probably mean that one death carries flesh from flesh, which is true, but “a-coming” suits the rhythm as I read it, and goes along with your key word, “along.” Reply
James Sale August 18, 2023 Thank you Margaret, but I think I will leave the song-writing to the song writers: who knows, one may want to take this poem on board. That would be fine. Regarding the metrical change you are suggesting, I see why you are saying it, but I would have to decline to make such a change. I love mimetic effects and this is an attempt at one. You may remember that the first line of Paradise Lost begins: Of man’s first disobedience and the fruit … In other words, the word ‘first’ has disobeyed the metrical pattern and a trochee rather than an iamb has occurred. Neat! So, to compare small things with great, my own line: There is a death coming, does not run smooth. It could, as you point out, run very smoothly iambic if we insert the word a-: There is a death a-coming. That is nice, BUT death isn’t, and so we start with the nice rising iambs till death comes, then abruptly – at death’s presence as a word – one falling trochee changes the mood. I think that is less smooth but far more powerful, but as always each reader must be his own judge. Thanks for such a thoughtful response. Reply
James Sale August 18, 2023 Ah! Andrew – those rivers, those rivers! Carry me over the Jordan! Probably, a simple metaphor! Glad you liked the poem. Reply