"Grand Canyon" by William Henry HolmesA Poem on ‘Nothing’ Poetry Challenge The Society September 24, 2023 Poetry, Poetry Challenge, Poetry Contests 90 Comments . Poets create marvels of linguistic delights about anything and everything… but what about nothing? Can your Muse capture the essence of nothing? This could be the hardest challenge your Muse has ever faced! I look forward to reading your take on the subject of “Nothing” in the comments section below. . In Praise of Nothing Nothing taunts my tranquil mind Or haunts the hymn I sing. Nothing kills the joy entwined In thrills the day may bring. Nothing robs my eyes of sun. Nothing foils my fling with fun. Nothing leaves my heart undone… That’s how I’ve come to find Nothing governs dreams within— Nothing’s everything. —Susan Jarvis Bryant . . Post your poem on “Nothing” in the comments section below. . NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 90 Responses Bruce Pearl September 24, 2023 Catullus V Come live with me, my sweet, and be my love, Weighing all the old men’s stern reproaches For what they really are – and that’s nothing. The sun sets, and yet, once more approaches Each day. For us, when the light dies: we’re done. The night in which we sleep is eternal. So, give me a thousand kisses, and then a hundred, And then a thousand more: the total so infernal That none may keep count or know what to think – And so perhaps safe from that jaundiced wink. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Bruce, thank you for being the first to embrace my challenge with a poem that intrigues and delights. I will admit to having to look up Catullus V – how perfect! Reply Bruce Pearl September 25, 2023 If the first line sounds familiar, Christopher Marlowe borrowed it for his, The Passionate Shepherd to his Love. fred schueler September 24, 2023 On 03-Oct.-19 10:08 a.m., Ed Norman wrote: > We had a good meeting last week, discussing Chapter 2 of Jim Holt’s book, Why Does The World Exist?, along with the usual diversions. On 03-Oct.-2019 10:30 a.m., Aleta Karstad wrote (from Kelowna): > Take notes for me, please. I’m very interested in what various people/cultures have said about Nothing. Also interested in concepts of Time * Why does the world Exist? it is a quirky twist to wonder if there’s here & there a thing that most have missed. > we will tackle Chapter 3, “A Brief History of Nothing” Is nothing anything? what song do no-things sing? black matter anthems fill the void – with energetic zing. > See you Oct. 10 at 7:30 PM in the upstairs room at the church. Does time go back or forth? do quanta have recourse to entropy or symmetry that fill us with remorse? Reply fred schueler September 25, 2023 this discussion led to a proliferation of memes on the theme of “Vote for Nobody! Nobody tells the truth! Nobody can balance the budget, Nobody can get Alberta off fossil fuels!” Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Fred, how utterly thought provoking and creative… philosophical food for thought that is an asset to this page. Thank you! Reply Phil S. Rogers September 24, 2023 Susan; Such an interesting little poem, nothing can be good, or nothing can be bad, depending on one’s view of life. You take the high road. Bravo! Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Phil, thank you! I look forward to reading your poem on ‘Nothing’… I hope there’s mention of a roadrunner in it somewhere… roadrunners have gone from nothing to everything via your ekphrastic challenge! Reply jd September 24, 2023 I think all three poems so far are very creative. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 I’m all for creativity jd – and I’m thrilled with the wonders on this page! Reply Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Now, nothing governs her, she claims, And that’s the point she makes. But I would claim the truth she maims And that the point she fakes. For none exists where this is so, As sadly all recall. And thus in what she says we know There’s nothing there at all. Reply Paul A. Freeman September 24, 2023 “I ‘aven’t done nuffin’,” ‘e said. “And nuffin’s like when you are dead. So meantime I’ll mull, on what’s in me skull – Alas, just a vacuous ‘ead.” I’m a five-minute philosopher. Reply Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 That many? Reply Paul Freeman September 24, 2023 Are you takin’ the Bruce Lee, guvnor? Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Only kidding. I thought it was six. Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 By the way, I really liked your Chaucer poem. You must have spent the same amount of time on that. Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Which is longer than it took Tom. Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Though that depends how fast you read. Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Forgive me. It’s 4 in the morning here and I’m talking to myself. Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Paul and Paul – your poems and your comments have given me a grin and I thank the both of for up and joining in! Paul Freeman September 27, 2023 All’s good. I’ve been out of wifi range for a couple of days. Which gave me time to write another ‘nothing’ poem. Gigi Ryan September 24, 2023 Mr. Roosevelt once said, It’s the worst to do, If decisions must be made And choice is facing you. Oddly, this is what my child Does every day at school. I ask, “What did you do today?” Every afternoon! And then when it is Saturday He has the nerve to want To spend the day pursuing this In his favorite haunt! Of course, the worst for me to do About it is to worry, Lest I accomplish what he does, With wasted mental scurry. Shakespeare said it long ago, It’s always proven true- About this useless exercise There is much ado. Reply Cynthia Erlandson September 25, 2023 These last two lines are brilliant! Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Gigi, thank you for joining in the ‘Nothing’ fun with your own unique take – I’m with Cynthia on those last two lines! Reply Mia September 24, 2023 Long ago, there lived a respected judge, A man extremely moral, wise and just, Who wishing to avoid all disputes Had the commandments and the oath Engraved in bold upon his desk of solid oak. Now for every case, all knew he did his best Impartially passing every gruelling test And when met with mad, vociferous ravings, Would often point to the indelible engraving, And patiently reply, ‘Look, here it is , Carved on this desk for every man to see.’ Presently it came to pass that a certain man, Who had amassed immense gold and land Appeared on trial before this famous judge, (The evidence of the man’s crimes filling reports) Meanwhile the fair judge had the same response, ‘Look here are the rules for every man to gaze upon.’ Still the accused remained unfazed and thereupon Deftly unzipped a suitcase full of cash And with panache piled banknotes like a rash Upon the desk and asked, whilst laughing, ‘Read the rules now, because I see nothing!’ Reply Mia September 25, 2023 Dear Susan, thank you for this challenge. Nothing compares to a good SCP challenge. However I have to confess that nothing is as bad as reading through one’s submission only to find it reads more and more like prose with each passing day. Well, almost nothing, as there have been worse in my case. Perhaps the following is a little better. Nothing that time won’t uncover. Nothing is as annoying as having nothing to wear when it isn’t as if the closet is bare. The clothes spill out of shelves and of drawers But goodness me they’ve all gone and shrunk in the wash. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Mia, it’s always lovely to hear from you and I am thrilled that you have risen to this challenge. You never fail to make me smile! Stephen Dickey September 24, 2023 Maybe here’s something: As long as there’s an everloving mind, There’s going to be some little something in it— Even if we forget it for a minute, Even though we may leave it far behind. Though trapped among the objects of our fussing, What an adventure it would be to stare Straight into the abyss we think is there,— Homing in on a feedback loop of nothing. Reply Mia September 25, 2023 I think this poem is definitely on a feedback loop of something as I have read it several times. There is definitely a little something in it that is interesting, intriguing and enjoyable . Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Stephen, what an awful lot to think about here… an amazing result when the challenge is on the subject of ‘Nothing’ – thank you for rising to it with a great take. Reply Robert Zimmerman September 24, 2023 Contemplating Nothing A vacuum wanders down the stairs. I told some folk, but no one cares. It creeps alone with mindless glee, yet no one seems aware but me. It staggers by without a thought. I contemplate it’s being—-not! It vanished and left ne’er clue. Just doing not naught, as vacuums do. Reflecting back up on the scene, my eyes were sharp—-my mind so keen. I sensed my heart had not a care, and soon surmised—-“There’s nothing there.” Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Robert, thank you for this thoughtful and creative look at Nothing through a poet’s eyes. I especially like the closing couplet. Reply Shamik Banerjee September 24, 2023 Dear Susan, thank you so much for this contemplative topic and your lovely take on it. Here is my sonnet on ‘Nothing’: Shunya When I breed roses, I’m a rosery, And when I nurse my child, I am a mother; When I take vows, I am a votary, And when my friend lacks ruth, I am his brother. Please keep the tweed and take away its wool, Please keep the pot and take away its clay, Or take away the fish but keep their school, Or take away the Sun but keep the day— You can’t, for every ‘thing’ man knows on earth, Is made of some description and a task Which loses its true nature to give birth To names and forms and wears the Selfhood’s Mask Which, when removed, will make the ‘I Am’ fall, And one will know he’s truly ‘nought’ at all. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Shamik, thank you for this mysterious and thought-provoking take on my challenge… I like it… a lot! Reply Shamik Banerjee September 28, 2023 Dear Susan, I am very pleased to know you liked my poem. The poem is based on the oriental philosophy of ‘Shunyata’ or ‘Nothingness’, which states that everything we know is a combination of a name, a form, and a description. In an earthen pot, for example, the actual reality is the clay. This very clay can be transformed into a doll and assigned a new name. Though forms and names are unfixed, the clay (the truth), in this case, is fixed. Similarly, a lady can be a mother, a wife, or a sister, but in every character she plays, the description of her role changes, as does her title. But she, as a person, remains the same. Similarly, for ‘a school of fish’, the title’school’ has no independent existence, and the fish are the reality. In spiritual terms, one enters ‘nothingness’ when he or she drops these three factors. When we let go of these, we stop identifying ourselves with things that are unfixed, such as names, roles, forms, etc., and have the realisation of being ‘nothing’. This state is also sometimes called enlightenment or nirvana. I really enjoyed writing on your prompt and your take on it is very beautiful. Thank you. Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Shamik, how utterly intriguing. Thank you very much for this information… it certainly adds to the challenge and will hopefully inspire others to join in with your words in mind. Wonderful! C.B. Anderson September 25, 2023 I only wandered in the flubbus As long as heaven was above us, But now I am enterogasted By just how long the torture lasted. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 C.B., in four intriguing lines you have managed to gift me two new words. Where you are concerned, nothing really is everything! Thank you! Reply Cheryl Corey September 25, 2023 The page is sparkling white I don’t know what to write Nothing, nada, nil Is flowing from my quill. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Cheryl, I beg to differ… and thank you for the smile of a result! Reply Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING LEFT By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) The day had come to take ___my test in Bible History. But there was nothing on my mind ___except my poetry. When I read the first question ___there was nothing on my mind. “When Sodom and Gomorrah fell, ___what was there left to find?” I remembered Lot and family ___had to flee away. I wrote only one word, “Nothing” ___was left upon that day. When I received my test grade, ___The teacher wrote, “That’s right! Nothing is the perfect answer, ___When Lot ran out of sight.” Reply Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING IS WHAT YOU GET By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Some say men are clueless. Some say they are blind. So, never ask a woman What she has on her mind. He might get an answer That he will regret. If she answers, “Nothing!” That is all you get. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Doing nothing is hard. ___You never know when you are done. Your brain’s stuck in neutral ___and you’re not having any fun. Nothing’s impossible, ___but I do it every day. Doing nothing is proactive, ___your cares may go away. “Nothing now bothers me,” ___the mother of three children swore. “I have had three children ___nothing scares me anymore. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING POETRY CHALLENGE By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Susan challenged us to write ___a poem about nothing. That is when I read her poem. ___It was really something. Nothing could look so easy, ___but, yet, it was so hard. How could I write of nothing, ___while garnering regard? Susan’s words were positive, ___since nothing her could stop. It seems nothing could stop Susan, ___but a traffic cop. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Roy, you never fail to surprise me with your passion, speed, and poetic verve… I am thrilled you’ve found this challenge worthy to rise to… three times, no less. Thank you! Reply James A. Tweedie September 25, 2023 Here’s one: Ex Nihilo A person can have “something”, that’s a fact. But no one can have “nothing,’ as it were. To speak of “nothing” speaks of what is lacked., But people do it often, that’s for sure. For, “nothing” is an oft neglected word That can mean “zero,” “nil,” or “empty void.” (The latter phrase redundant, quite absurd To use it makes grammarians annoyed.) And yet, “sweet nothings” whispered in one’s ear Can represent romance that leads to bliss. For in this case such “nothings” can endear, And lead, perhaps, to an impassioned kiss. The Bible says of nothing all was made And nothing is impossible with God. And nothing, without love, is what we’re paid. To get something for nothing would seem odd. If something without nothing isn’t real. It seems that nothing matters a great deal. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 James, this is a tour de force of nothing – it’s full to the brim with nothing and I love it! Thank you! Reply James A. Tweedie September 25, 2023 Ane one more: Seinfeld was a TV show About nothing. Yet we watched it anyway. Yadda yadda. Reruns are still aired today. Who is watching? I don’t care, or care to know. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING EVER HAPPENS By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Nothing stands for zero, ___a circle that’s an aught. Nothing is not something ___for that is not a naught. Nothing is a goose egg, ___if you are keeping score. Zip, zilch, nix, nil, nada, ___will not add anymore. What happens in Las Vegas ___they say will stay there. So, nothing ever happens. ___I think that is fair. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Great take, Roy! Reply Norma Elizabeth Okun September 25, 2023 Nothing Will Break Our Love Nothing to do about you and me. How we mean everything to each other How we meant what we pledged to each other On our wedding day May 18, 1986 To have nothing ever interfere with our love. Nothing can be welcomed that can break our love apart. Nothing is more important Then the love we have for each other Nothing will I ever believe but the Best you can deliver to me. Let nothing separate us, Let everything you meet and love beside me. Add to our loving each other. Nothing can take the place you have in my heart. Nothing will I ever allow to stop me from loving you. You mean everything to me. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Heartfelt words of love, Norma, that serve to prove nothing really is everything. Reply Norma Elizabeth Okun October 3, 2023 Thank you for your kind words. Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING IS MUCH BETTER By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Our Congress has become ___a corrupt institution. They need to pay attention ___To our Constitution. Sometimes I think that Congress ___should stop making new law. Nothing is much worse than ___the recent ones I saw. When Truman ran for President ___in nineteen forty-eight, He blamed the “Do nothing Congress,” ___for his “Fair Deal” fate. The liberal policies ___were stuck in their committees, Especially the ones that were earmarked ___for the cities. Remember that Mark Twain said ___(To paraphrase his lesson), “We are in greater danger ___when Congress is session.” In his quote he mentioned ___plus “our lives and our liberty,” And then he made sure to include ___everyone’s property. So nothing is much better ___as far as I am concerned. So many of their recent laws ___are ones that should be burned. Congress has done nothing ___to stop alien invasion. That is an issue they must take ___into their equation. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 There’s much to mull over here, Roy. Thank you! I think if the Government did nothing in the literal sense of the word, we would all be better off. Reply Julian D. Woodruff September 25, 2023 Susan, a great idea! You remind me of so many writings etc.–Dinesen’s “The Blank Page,” WP DuBois’s children’s story, “Lion,” Monty Python’s “Eric the Half a Bee” skit & more. You and our delightful poem have elicited a pile of poems treating nothing whimsically and substantially at the same time. I confess I took a figurative approach rather than a philosophical one. And it definitely has nothing to do with fun. I feel something like the bad fairy in “Sleeping Beauty.” Nothing: Good Gone Costly textbooks for most college courses. Pious sermons from dubious sources. Loathsome companies’ foul machinations. Politicians long, odious orations. Those who’d youngsters’ unknowingness rob through gross movements of some Beelzebob. Above: works of most everyone’s heroes? No, of bullpooping, bothersome zeroes. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Julian, thank you for your wonderful introduction. It afforded me a great trip down memory lane and led me to Dinesen’s “The Blank Page,” which I had never read… it’s wonderful and has spurred me on to continue with my latest project in front of a blank page. Thank you too for your figurative approach to my challenge. I love its message and its creativity… I especially like ‘Beelzebob’ and ‘bullpoop’… words that demand pride of place in the dictionary. Julian, thank you! Reply Mike Bryant September 25, 2023 Susan, what a glorious idea! As ususal, I am veering into the incomprehensible with this attempt at something different: Out of nought, one hand made everything. The micro that was made is full of life, The macro full of galaxies that sing And you and I between in joy and strife. Is nothing smaller than the smallest small? Is nothing larger than the endless all? Or could there be a deeper nothingEST, From which a second nothing once arose, Created by Almighty SomethingEST? I think that only God, our Father, knows. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Mike, I love this… veering into the incomprehensible is something you should do more often! 😉 Thank you for rising to my many challenges. Reply Mary Gardner September 25, 2023 What Nature abhors is a Vacuum, Not a Thing, but a veritable Lackuum. It will rush in to fill Any Space that is Nil, And attackuum with lots of Flackuum. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Mary, I love this smile of a creative poem – your admirable nod to nothing is a poetic triumph and I thank you for rising to the challenge with nothing in mind. Reply G. M. H. Thompson September 26, 2023 Desert . Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Thank you very much for your contribution, G.M.H. Thompson. See my comment on the content of your poem below: 😉 Reply G. M. H. Thompson September 26, 2023 I didn’t mean to put the one without the “.”– for some reason, it automatically posted it twice when I posted it once, but then through it telling me that it posted it twice & had automatically deleted the second posting, I thought I had to post it again, but I had to change something about it, which I didn’t really want to do. So, the one without the period should be removed, is what I’m trying to get to. Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Perhaps moderator Mike will sort it out… although, the Desert devoid of the embellishment of punctuation is my favorite of the two versions… where ‘Nothing’ is concerned less is always more. Thank you for your smile of a contribution. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 … actually, your response to the challenge is more than a smile. My brain is now travelling down untrodden avenues to realms of the unfathomable. G. M. H. Thompson September 26, 2023 Well, the main advantage of the one with the period is that it makes it clear that “Desert” is the title of the poem. It has a second advantage in giving the poem a sort of shape to it, while remaining very unobtrusive at the same time, like the picture of a desert. Also, a period suggests a grain of sand, so that’s another thing that’s nice (more than one period doesn’t look good, if anyone was wondering “Why not more than one period if it looks like a grain of sand & deserts have billions of grains of sand?”). A final note I might add about the period is that it suggests a black hole, which is perhaps the most nothing you can get, but also according to some theories the source of the big bang, which is an interesting paradoxical twist to think about on the subject. G. M. H. Thompson September 26, 2023 “Desert.” Reply BenB September 27, 2023 Now for a haiku that will leave nothing to the imagination… Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Clever, BenB! Reply Paul A. Freeman September 27, 2023 Nothing is the gentleness of snow, of silent flakes descending from the sky. Nothing is a forest-shrouded doe, its camouflage deceiving to the eye. Nothing is the bland, unseasoned fare that leaves your un-assaulted tastebuds dull. Nothing is the arid, desert air, without a briny tang on which to mull. Nothing is the polished table top your palm explores that yields no contoured face. Nothing is your journey’s mortal stop, that terminates a spell of earthly grace. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Paul, this is truly beautiful… I thank you for rising to the challenge so admirably. Reply Paul A. Freeman October 3, 2023 Thanks for your comment, Susan. It took a while to get there, and several rewrites. Debra Mascarenhas September 28, 2023 Nothing poem I took out my book and sat near a brook With a pen in my hand it took 5 minutes to think What I wanted to write Suddenly I saw my words run down the brook Oh the look the words gave me They laughed and giggled As they rolled down the brook I ran behind them and it took An hour to find all the words together Stuck in a jar at the end of the brook I put in my hand and pulled out a few words But they made no sense So I threw them back into the jar and into the flowing brook I ran back home Turned on my computer And the thought to write what thoughts had come to my mind But the thoughts were nothing But of the words that I threw back into the brook Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Thank you for this, Debra. You describe a dilemma I am all too familiar with as a poet… I am imagining those words as slippery eels escaping your grip and stoking despair. Reply Patrick Murtha October 5, 2023 Sad sighing haunted rooms And corridors long untouched By laughter, light, or brooms. I roamed the home. I clutched A hope to see the source Of so forlorn a sound. Some soul’s too late remorse? A shade whose body’d drowned? Each creaking step I stepped, In hall or down a stair; In every hall I crept— Nothing but me was there. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant October 5, 2023 Atmospheric, melancholic, and thoroughly engaging! Thank you for rising to the ‘Nothing’ challenge with a fine poem, Patrick. Reply Patrick October 6, 2023 Thank you. A friend just introduced me to this Society. I am intrigued and interested. Paul A. Freeman October 6, 2023 Welcome, Patrick. Patrick Murtha October 6, 2023 Thank you. Susan Jarvis Bryant October 12, 2023 Yes, a warm welcome indeed, Patrick. Monika Cooper October 6, 2023 Ascent in Fall For getting up the mount You take the open road. Turnoffs bend to waylay. Pass them by! Pass them by! Chasing wealth in leaf fall, I wandered far and wide. Tempting autumn fool’s gold Surrounds you. Let it lie! Forest veils hang tattered, The whisper of each tear One attachment breaking, One more wingbeat southing. Gong sounds, cymbal tinkles, Raise voices of despair. To know – and not to love!– is Nothing, nothing, nothing. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant October 12, 2023 Monika, this is a melodious marvel of a poem that rises to the challenge admirably. I love the pictures you paint especially in stanza 3… and I adore the closing couplet. Thank you for joining in! Reply Monika Cooper October 18, 2023 Thank you, Susan. The poem owes something to one of the Hobbit walking songs. The third stanza is my favorite too; I was afraid it laid me open to the charge of gratuitous mysteriousness but you get it! I’m glad and thank you also for another irresistible challenge. Susan Jarvis Bryant October 12, 2023 Ho-Hum He sinks in shifting sand – The man with fluid views. No leg on which to stand – She bows to mainstream schmooze. They’ve fallen for the brand Of nothing-left-to-choose. They dare not think They dare not say So, nothing bad will mar their day… And nothing good will sail their way. Reply Peter Duff October 17, 2023 Much Ado Art is anything you can get away with – Andy Warhol An empty frame the artist called “Invisible” The people queue, then stand and stare and smile And most can see (belatedly) it’s risible But still they look, and ponder for a while And hesitate to give an honest view Concerned the lacking is perhaps their own: “It’s witty and provocative and new She makes you think about what isn’t shown” They do not see till told where they should look Nor recognize until they’re told what’s seen: “It’s in the Tate, and therefore must be good I’ll check the Web and find out what it means” But nothing comes to nothing just the same When labelled and surrounded by a frame Reply Joshua C. Frank October 18, 2023 No One Likes It “No one likes your poem, it stinks!” They said. “Don’t open-mic it!” So I asked No One what he thinks; He read and said, “I like it.” Reply Bruce J PEARL October 19, 2023 LUCY IN THE SKY WITH DIAMONDS As Morpheus had said to a sleeping Neo, “No one can tell you what the Matrix is, You have to see it for yourself,” I switched To the red pill my freshman year at Buffalo And joined the midnight museum goers, Lined up outside the then locked A&P, To stare at the soup cans and soda bottles, The enwrapped 20th century models Some unsuspecting Van Gogh or Vermeer Had placed on crowded shelves to be revered – The same as Warhol would later immortalize To the chagrin of a bemused world. Reply lilli October 30, 2023 To write a poem about nothing itself is something to have a prompt written as to say capture the essence of nothing is still capturing the essence of something even nothing has a presence to sit here and watch time spin to sit here and write something about the essence of nothing just to what to win there is a certain beauty that comes with writing about nothing there is a certain beauty that comes with writing about something so who are you to decide that regardless of the way that the tide moves you choose the inspiration you choose the muse nothing is something and something is nothing To capture the beauty of anything regardless of if that is nothing is still something Reply Clara Green February 6, 2024 Nothing Poem I met shadowed brightness, frail and strong, Ugly as thorn bush, lovely as song, Cruel as the Winter’s wind, sweet as the Spring’s, Solid and liquid and air and all things, Burning and living, and dying and cold, Both loud and silent, both young and old, Life-giving, breath-taking, in all its effects, Elab’rately simple, Simply Complex. A Dream and a Nightmare, a Hope and a Fear, Immeasurably distant, unbearably near I did not understand it. I still do not, now. I knew what it was, yet I do not know how To explain or describe or portray it to you. You can question me, pry me, but nothing will do. Encourage me, force me, do all that you may, I can’t tell of the things of which words cannot say. -Clara, written at age 14 Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Bruce Pearl September 24, 2023 Catullus V Come live with me, my sweet, and be my love, Weighing all the old men’s stern reproaches For what they really are – and that’s nothing. The sun sets, and yet, once more approaches Each day. For us, when the light dies: we’re done. The night in which we sleep is eternal. So, give me a thousand kisses, and then a hundred, And then a thousand more: the total so infernal That none may keep count or know what to think – And so perhaps safe from that jaundiced wink. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Bruce, thank you for being the first to embrace my challenge with a poem that intrigues and delights. I will admit to having to look up Catullus V – how perfect! Reply
Bruce Pearl September 25, 2023 If the first line sounds familiar, Christopher Marlowe borrowed it for his, The Passionate Shepherd to his Love.
fred schueler September 24, 2023 On 03-Oct.-19 10:08 a.m., Ed Norman wrote: > We had a good meeting last week, discussing Chapter 2 of Jim Holt’s book, Why Does The World Exist?, along with the usual diversions. On 03-Oct.-2019 10:30 a.m., Aleta Karstad wrote (from Kelowna): > Take notes for me, please. I’m very interested in what various people/cultures have said about Nothing. Also interested in concepts of Time * Why does the world Exist? it is a quirky twist to wonder if there’s here & there a thing that most have missed. > we will tackle Chapter 3, “A Brief History of Nothing” Is nothing anything? what song do no-things sing? black matter anthems fill the void – with energetic zing. > See you Oct. 10 at 7:30 PM in the upstairs room at the church. Does time go back or forth? do quanta have recourse to entropy or symmetry that fill us with remorse? Reply
fred schueler September 25, 2023 this discussion led to a proliferation of memes on the theme of “Vote for Nobody! Nobody tells the truth! Nobody can balance the budget, Nobody can get Alberta off fossil fuels!” Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Fred, how utterly thought provoking and creative… philosophical food for thought that is an asset to this page. Thank you! Reply
Phil S. Rogers September 24, 2023 Susan; Such an interesting little poem, nothing can be good, or nothing can be bad, depending on one’s view of life. You take the high road. Bravo! Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Phil, thank you! I look forward to reading your poem on ‘Nothing’… I hope there’s mention of a roadrunner in it somewhere… roadrunners have gone from nothing to everything via your ekphrastic challenge! Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 I’m all for creativity jd – and I’m thrilled with the wonders on this page! Reply
Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Now, nothing governs her, she claims, And that’s the point she makes. But I would claim the truth she maims And that the point she fakes. For none exists where this is so, As sadly all recall. And thus in what she says we know There’s nothing there at all. Reply
Paul A. Freeman September 24, 2023 “I ‘aven’t done nuffin’,” ‘e said. “And nuffin’s like when you are dead. So meantime I’ll mull, on what’s in me skull – Alas, just a vacuous ‘ead.” I’m a five-minute philosopher. Reply
Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 By the way, I really liked your Chaucer poem. You must have spent the same amount of time on that.
Paul Martin Freeman September 24, 2023 Forgive me. It’s 4 in the morning here and I’m talking to myself.
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Paul and Paul – your poems and your comments have given me a grin and I thank the both of for up and joining in!
Paul Freeman September 27, 2023 All’s good. I’ve been out of wifi range for a couple of days. Which gave me time to write another ‘nothing’ poem.
Gigi Ryan September 24, 2023 Mr. Roosevelt once said, It’s the worst to do, If decisions must be made And choice is facing you. Oddly, this is what my child Does every day at school. I ask, “What did you do today?” Every afternoon! And then when it is Saturday He has the nerve to want To spend the day pursuing this In his favorite haunt! Of course, the worst for me to do About it is to worry, Lest I accomplish what he does, With wasted mental scurry. Shakespeare said it long ago, It’s always proven true- About this useless exercise There is much ado. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Gigi, thank you for joining in the ‘Nothing’ fun with your own unique take – I’m with Cynthia on those last two lines! Reply
Mia September 24, 2023 Long ago, there lived a respected judge, A man extremely moral, wise and just, Who wishing to avoid all disputes Had the commandments and the oath Engraved in bold upon his desk of solid oak. Now for every case, all knew he did his best Impartially passing every gruelling test And when met with mad, vociferous ravings, Would often point to the indelible engraving, And patiently reply, ‘Look, here it is , Carved on this desk for every man to see.’ Presently it came to pass that a certain man, Who had amassed immense gold and land Appeared on trial before this famous judge, (The evidence of the man’s crimes filling reports) Meanwhile the fair judge had the same response, ‘Look here are the rules for every man to gaze upon.’ Still the accused remained unfazed and thereupon Deftly unzipped a suitcase full of cash And with panache piled banknotes like a rash Upon the desk and asked, whilst laughing, ‘Read the rules now, because I see nothing!’ Reply
Mia September 25, 2023 Dear Susan, thank you for this challenge. Nothing compares to a good SCP challenge. However I have to confess that nothing is as bad as reading through one’s submission only to find it reads more and more like prose with each passing day. Well, almost nothing, as there have been worse in my case. Perhaps the following is a little better. Nothing that time won’t uncover. Nothing is as annoying as having nothing to wear when it isn’t as if the closet is bare. The clothes spill out of shelves and of drawers But goodness me they’ve all gone and shrunk in the wash. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Mia, it’s always lovely to hear from you and I am thrilled that you have risen to this challenge. You never fail to make me smile!
Stephen Dickey September 24, 2023 Maybe here’s something: As long as there’s an everloving mind, There’s going to be some little something in it— Even if we forget it for a minute, Even though we may leave it far behind. Though trapped among the objects of our fussing, What an adventure it would be to stare Straight into the abyss we think is there,— Homing in on a feedback loop of nothing. Reply
Mia September 25, 2023 I think this poem is definitely on a feedback loop of something as I have read it several times. There is definitely a little something in it that is interesting, intriguing and enjoyable . Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Stephen, what an awful lot to think about here… an amazing result when the challenge is on the subject of ‘Nothing’ – thank you for rising to it with a great take. Reply
Robert Zimmerman September 24, 2023 Contemplating Nothing A vacuum wanders down the stairs. I told some folk, but no one cares. It creeps alone with mindless glee, yet no one seems aware but me. It staggers by without a thought. I contemplate it’s being—-not! It vanished and left ne’er clue. Just doing not naught, as vacuums do. Reflecting back up on the scene, my eyes were sharp—-my mind so keen. I sensed my heart had not a care, and soon surmised—-“There’s nothing there.” Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Robert, thank you for this thoughtful and creative look at Nothing through a poet’s eyes. I especially like the closing couplet. Reply
Shamik Banerjee September 24, 2023 Dear Susan, thank you so much for this contemplative topic and your lovely take on it. Here is my sonnet on ‘Nothing’: Shunya When I breed roses, I’m a rosery, And when I nurse my child, I am a mother; When I take vows, I am a votary, And when my friend lacks ruth, I am his brother. Please keep the tweed and take away its wool, Please keep the pot and take away its clay, Or take away the fish but keep their school, Or take away the Sun but keep the day— You can’t, for every ‘thing’ man knows on earth, Is made of some description and a task Which loses its true nature to give birth To names and forms and wears the Selfhood’s Mask Which, when removed, will make the ‘I Am’ fall, And one will know he’s truly ‘nought’ at all. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Shamik, thank you for this mysterious and thought-provoking take on my challenge… I like it… a lot! Reply
Shamik Banerjee September 28, 2023 Dear Susan, I am very pleased to know you liked my poem. The poem is based on the oriental philosophy of ‘Shunyata’ or ‘Nothingness’, which states that everything we know is a combination of a name, a form, and a description. In an earthen pot, for example, the actual reality is the clay. This very clay can be transformed into a doll and assigned a new name. Though forms and names are unfixed, the clay (the truth), in this case, is fixed. Similarly, a lady can be a mother, a wife, or a sister, but in every character she plays, the description of her role changes, as does her title. But she, as a person, remains the same. Similarly, for ‘a school of fish’, the title’school’ has no independent existence, and the fish are the reality. In spiritual terms, one enters ‘nothingness’ when he or she drops these three factors. When we let go of these, we stop identifying ourselves with things that are unfixed, such as names, roles, forms, etc., and have the realisation of being ‘nothing’. This state is also sometimes called enlightenment or nirvana. I really enjoyed writing on your prompt and your take on it is very beautiful. Thank you.
Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Shamik, how utterly intriguing. Thank you very much for this information… it certainly adds to the challenge and will hopefully inspire others to join in with your words in mind. Wonderful!
C.B. Anderson September 25, 2023 I only wandered in the flubbus As long as heaven was above us, But now I am enterogasted By just how long the torture lasted. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 C.B., in four intriguing lines you have managed to gift me two new words. Where you are concerned, nothing really is everything! Thank you! Reply
Cheryl Corey September 25, 2023 The page is sparkling white I don’t know what to write Nothing, nada, nil Is flowing from my quill. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Cheryl, I beg to differ… and thank you for the smile of a result! Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING LEFT By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) The day had come to take ___my test in Bible History. But there was nothing on my mind ___except my poetry. When I read the first question ___there was nothing on my mind. “When Sodom and Gomorrah fell, ___what was there left to find?” I remembered Lot and family ___had to flee away. I wrote only one word, “Nothing” ___was left upon that day. When I received my test grade, ___The teacher wrote, “That’s right! Nothing is the perfect answer, ___When Lot ran out of sight.” Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING IS WHAT YOU GET By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Some say men are clueless. Some say they are blind. So, never ask a woman What she has on her mind. He might get an answer That he will regret. If she answers, “Nothing!” That is all you get. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Doing nothing is hard. ___You never know when you are done. Your brain’s stuck in neutral ___and you’re not having any fun. Nothing’s impossible, ___but I do it every day. Doing nothing is proactive, ___your cares may go away. “Nothing now bothers me,” ___the mother of three children swore. “I have had three children ___nothing scares me anymore. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING POETRY CHALLENGE By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Susan challenged us to write ___a poem about nothing. That is when I read her poem. ___It was really something. Nothing could look so easy, ___but, yet, it was so hard. How could I write of nothing, ___while garnering regard? Susan’s words were positive, ___since nothing her could stop. It seems nothing could stop Susan, ___but a traffic cop. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 25, 2023 Roy, you never fail to surprise me with your passion, speed, and poetic verve… I am thrilled you’ve found this challenge worthy to rise to… three times, no less. Thank you! Reply
James A. Tweedie September 25, 2023 Here’s one: Ex Nihilo A person can have “something”, that’s a fact. But no one can have “nothing,’ as it were. To speak of “nothing” speaks of what is lacked., But people do it often, that’s for sure. For, “nothing” is an oft neglected word That can mean “zero,” “nil,” or “empty void.” (The latter phrase redundant, quite absurd To use it makes grammarians annoyed.) And yet, “sweet nothings” whispered in one’s ear Can represent romance that leads to bliss. For in this case such “nothings” can endear, And lead, perhaps, to an impassioned kiss. The Bible says of nothing all was made And nothing is impossible with God. And nothing, without love, is what we’re paid. To get something for nothing would seem odd. If something without nothing isn’t real. It seems that nothing matters a great deal. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 James, this is a tour de force of nothing – it’s full to the brim with nothing and I love it! Thank you! Reply
James A. Tweedie September 25, 2023 Ane one more: Seinfeld was a TV show About nothing. Yet we watched it anyway. Yadda yadda. Reruns are still aired today. Who is watching? I don’t care, or care to know. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING EVER HAPPENS By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Nothing stands for zero, ___a circle that’s an aught. Nothing is not something ___for that is not a naught. Nothing is a goose egg, ___if you are keeping score. Zip, zilch, nix, nil, nada, ___will not add anymore. What happens in Las Vegas ___they say will stay there. So, nothing ever happens. ___I think that is fair. Reply
Norma Elizabeth Okun September 25, 2023 Nothing Will Break Our Love Nothing to do about you and me. How we mean everything to each other How we meant what we pledged to each other On our wedding day May 18, 1986 To have nothing ever interfere with our love. Nothing can be welcomed that can break our love apart. Nothing is more important Then the love we have for each other Nothing will I ever believe but the Best you can deliver to me. Let nothing separate us, Let everything you meet and love beside me. Add to our loving each other. Nothing can take the place you have in my heart. Nothing will I ever allow to stop me from loving you. You mean everything to me. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Heartfelt words of love, Norma, that serve to prove nothing really is everything. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson September 25, 2023 NOTHING IS MUCH BETTER By Roy E. Peterson (September 25, 2023) Our Congress has become ___a corrupt institution. They need to pay attention ___To our Constitution. Sometimes I think that Congress ___should stop making new law. Nothing is much worse than ___the recent ones I saw. When Truman ran for President ___in nineteen forty-eight, He blamed the “Do nothing Congress,” ___for his “Fair Deal” fate. The liberal policies ___were stuck in their committees, Especially the ones that were earmarked ___for the cities. Remember that Mark Twain said ___(To paraphrase his lesson), “We are in greater danger ___when Congress is session.” In his quote he mentioned ___plus “our lives and our liberty,” And then he made sure to include ___everyone’s property. So nothing is much better ___as far as I am concerned. So many of their recent laws ___are ones that should be burned. Congress has done nothing ___to stop alien invasion. That is an issue they must take ___into their equation. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 There’s much to mull over here, Roy. Thank you! I think if the Government did nothing in the literal sense of the word, we would all be better off. Reply
Julian D. Woodruff September 25, 2023 Susan, a great idea! You remind me of so many writings etc.–Dinesen’s “The Blank Page,” WP DuBois’s children’s story, “Lion,” Monty Python’s “Eric the Half a Bee” skit & more. You and our delightful poem have elicited a pile of poems treating nothing whimsically and substantially at the same time. I confess I took a figurative approach rather than a philosophical one. And it definitely has nothing to do with fun. I feel something like the bad fairy in “Sleeping Beauty.” Nothing: Good Gone Costly textbooks for most college courses. Pious sermons from dubious sources. Loathsome companies’ foul machinations. Politicians long, odious orations. Those who’d youngsters’ unknowingness rob through gross movements of some Beelzebob. Above: works of most everyone’s heroes? No, of bullpooping, bothersome zeroes. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Julian, thank you for your wonderful introduction. It afforded me a great trip down memory lane and led me to Dinesen’s “The Blank Page,” which I had never read… it’s wonderful and has spurred me on to continue with my latest project in front of a blank page. Thank you too for your figurative approach to my challenge. I love its message and its creativity… I especially like ‘Beelzebob’ and ‘bullpoop’… words that demand pride of place in the dictionary. Julian, thank you! Reply
Mike Bryant September 25, 2023 Susan, what a glorious idea! As ususal, I am veering into the incomprehensible with this attempt at something different: Out of nought, one hand made everything. The micro that was made is full of life, The macro full of galaxies that sing And you and I between in joy and strife. Is nothing smaller than the smallest small? Is nothing larger than the endless all? Or could there be a deeper nothingEST, From which a second nothing once arose, Created by Almighty SomethingEST? I think that only God, our Father, knows. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Mike, I love this… veering into the incomprehensible is something you should do more often! 😉 Thank you for rising to my many challenges. Reply
Mary Gardner September 25, 2023 What Nature abhors is a Vacuum, Not a Thing, but a veritable Lackuum. It will rush in to fill Any Space that is Nil, And attackuum with lots of Flackuum. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Mary, I love this smile of a creative poem – your admirable nod to nothing is a poetic triumph and I thank you for rising to the challenge with nothing in mind. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Thank you very much for your contribution, G.M.H. Thompson. See my comment on the content of your poem below: 😉 Reply
G. M. H. Thompson September 26, 2023 I didn’t mean to put the one without the “.”– for some reason, it automatically posted it twice when I posted it once, but then through it telling me that it posted it twice & had automatically deleted the second posting, I thought I had to post it again, but I had to change something about it, which I didn’t really want to do. So, the one without the period should be removed, is what I’m trying to get to.
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 Perhaps moderator Mike will sort it out… although, the Desert devoid of the embellishment of punctuation is my favorite of the two versions… where ‘Nothing’ is concerned less is always more. Thank you for your smile of a contribution. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant September 26, 2023 … actually, your response to the challenge is more than a smile. My brain is now travelling down untrodden avenues to realms of the unfathomable.
G. M. H. Thompson September 26, 2023 Well, the main advantage of the one with the period is that it makes it clear that “Desert” is the title of the poem. It has a second advantage in giving the poem a sort of shape to it, while remaining very unobtrusive at the same time, like the picture of a desert. Also, a period suggests a grain of sand, so that’s another thing that’s nice (more than one period doesn’t look good, if anyone was wondering “Why not more than one period if it looks like a grain of sand & deserts have billions of grains of sand?”). A final note I might add about the period is that it suggests a black hole, which is perhaps the most nothing you can get, but also according to some theories the source of the big bang, which is an interesting paradoxical twist to think about on the subject.
Paul A. Freeman September 27, 2023 Nothing is the gentleness of snow, of silent flakes descending from the sky. Nothing is a forest-shrouded doe, its camouflage deceiving to the eye. Nothing is the bland, unseasoned fare that leaves your un-assaulted tastebuds dull. Nothing is the arid, desert air, without a briny tang on which to mull. Nothing is the polished table top your palm explores that yields no contoured face. Nothing is your journey’s mortal stop, that terminates a spell of earthly grace. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Paul, this is truly beautiful… I thank you for rising to the challenge so admirably. Reply
Paul A. Freeman October 3, 2023 Thanks for your comment, Susan. It took a while to get there, and several rewrites.
Debra Mascarenhas September 28, 2023 Nothing poem I took out my book and sat near a brook With a pen in my hand it took 5 minutes to think What I wanted to write Suddenly I saw my words run down the brook Oh the look the words gave me They laughed and giggled As they rolled down the brook I ran behind them and it took An hour to find all the words together Stuck in a jar at the end of the brook I put in my hand and pulled out a few words But they made no sense So I threw them back into the jar and into the flowing brook I ran back home Turned on my computer And the thought to write what thoughts had come to my mind But the thoughts were nothing But of the words that I threw back into the brook Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant October 3, 2023 Thank you for this, Debra. You describe a dilemma I am all too familiar with as a poet… I am imagining those words as slippery eels escaping your grip and stoking despair. Reply
Patrick Murtha October 5, 2023 Sad sighing haunted rooms And corridors long untouched By laughter, light, or brooms. I roamed the home. I clutched A hope to see the source Of so forlorn a sound. Some soul’s too late remorse? A shade whose body’d drowned? Each creaking step I stepped, In hall or down a stair; In every hall I crept— Nothing but me was there. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant October 5, 2023 Atmospheric, melancholic, and thoroughly engaging! Thank you for rising to the ‘Nothing’ challenge with a fine poem, Patrick. Reply
Patrick October 6, 2023 Thank you. A friend just introduced me to this Society. I am intrigued and interested.
Monika Cooper October 6, 2023 Ascent in Fall For getting up the mount You take the open road. Turnoffs bend to waylay. Pass them by! Pass them by! Chasing wealth in leaf fall, I wandered far and wide. Tempting autumn fool’s gold Surrounds you. Let it lie! Forest veils hang tattered, The whisper of each tear One attachment breaking, One more wingbeat southing. Gong sounds, cymbal tinkles, Raise voices of despair. To know – and not to love!– is Nothing, nothing, nothing. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant October 12, 2023 Monika, this is a melodious marvel of a poem that rises to the challenge admirably. I love the pictures you paint especially in stanza 3… and I adore the closing couplet. Thank you for joining in! Reply
Monika Cooper October 18, 2023 Thank you, Susan. The poem owes something to one of the Hobbit walking songs. The third stanza is my favorite too; I was afraid it laid me open to the charge of gratuitous mysteriousness but you get it! I’m glad and thank you also for another irresistible challenge.
Susan Jarvis Bryant October 12, 2023 Ho-Hum He sinks in shifting sand – The man with fluid views. No leg on which to stand – She bows to mainstream schmooze. They’ve fallen for the brand Of nothing-left-to-choose. They dare not think They dare not say So, nothing bad will mar their day… And nothing good will sail their way. Reply
Peter Duff October 17, 2023 Much Ado Art is anything you can get away with – Andy Warhol An empty frame the artist called “Invisible” The people queue, then stand and stare and smile And most can see (belatedly) it’s risible But still they look, and ponder for a while And hesitate to give an honest view Concerned the lacking is perhaps their own: “It’s witty and provocative and new She makes you think about what isn’t shown” They do not see till told where they should look Nor recognize until they’re told what’s seen: “It’s in the Tate, and therefore must be good I’ll check the Web and find out what it means” But nothing comes to nothing just the same When labelled and surrounded by a frame Reply
Joshua C. Frank October 18, 2023 No One Likes It “No one likes your poem, it stinks!” They said. “Don’t open-mic it!” So I asked No One what he thinks; He read and said, “I like it.” Reply
Bruce J PEARL October 19, 2023 LUCY IN THE SKY WITH DIAMONDS As Morpheus had said to a sleeping Neo, “No one can tell you what the Matrix is, You have to see it for yourself,” I switched To the red pill my freshman year at Buffalo And joined the midnight museum goers, Lined up outside the then locked A&P, To stare at the soup cans and soda bottles, The enwrapped 20th century models Some unsuspecting Van Gogh or Vermeer Had placed on crowded shelves to be revered – The same as Warhol would later immortalize To the chagrin of a bemused world. Reply
lilli October 30, 2023 To write a poem about nothing itself is something to have a prompt written as to say capture the essence of nothing is still capturing the essence of something even nothing has a presence to sit here and watch time spin to sit here and write something about the essence of nothing just to what to win there is a certain beauty that comes with writing about nothing there is a certain beauty that comes with writing about something so who are you to decide that regardless of the way that the tide moves you choose the inspiration you choose the muse nothing is something and something is nothing To capture the beauty of anything regardless of if that is nothing is still something Reply
Clara Green February 6, 2024 Nothing Poem I met shadowed brightness, frail and strong, Ugly as thorn bush, lovely as song, Cruel as the Winter’s wind, sweet as the Spring’s, Solid and liquid and air and all things, Burning and living, and dying and cold, Both loud and silent, both young and old, Life-giving, breath-taking, in all its effects, Elab’rately simple, Simply Complex. A Dream and a Nightmare, a Hope and a Fear, Immeasurably distant, unbearably near I did not understand it. I still do not, now. I knew what it was, yet I do not know how To explain or describe or portray it to you. You can question me, pry me, but nothing will do. Encourage me, force me, do all that you may, I can’t tell of the things of which words cannot say. -Clara, written at age 14 Reply