"Creation of Light" by John Martin‘The Word’: A Poem by Jeffrey Essmann The Society October 23, 2023 Beauty, Culture, Poetry, Terza Rima 8 Comments . The Word “Let there be light,” He said and light there was. The seething chaos split to day and night And space and time were brightly set abuzz. From atom unto Adam, highest heights To deepest depths His mystery did unfold Although we still don’t understand it quite: Among all living things we were of old With language by His might alone preferred So that by human tongues it might be told That long before the light the darkness stirred There language was, there only was the Word. . . Jeffrey Essmann is an essayist and poet living in New York. His poetry has appeared in numerous magazines and literary journals, among them Agape Review, America Magazine, Dappled Things, the St. Austin Review, U.S. Catholic, Grand Little Things, Heart of Flesh Literary Journal, and various venues of the Benedictine monastery with which he is an oblate. He is editor of the Catholic Poetry Room page on the Integrated Catholic Life website. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 8 Responses Phil L. Flott October 23, 2023 How can we describe the Word simply by words? I appreciate Mr. Essmann’s effort. Reply Maura Harrison October 23, 2023 I appreciate ‘From atom unto Adam.” A clever and dlughtful phrase. Reply Bruce J PEARL October 23, 2023 The Word: according to the wife of Bath It isn’t true. The tree Wasn’t forbidden, the serpent Satan, Nor Eve the female betrayer of man. Rather, she was a Prometheus Who, in order that we might be freed thus From a world of angelic ignorance – That we as living, breathing creatures might dance The dance of life and so by experience Know good and evil – plucked that fruit hence. And, eschewing even Jehovah’s warning, Risked death to see human wisdom dawning. For which God then, even unto today, That calumny might sacrifice repay, Ordered us subject to the will of man – Though they both ate – I just don’t understand. No, the root of evil, ever since then, Is that women are ruled by witless men. Reply Shamik Banerjee October 23, 2023 Such a lucid and beautiful way to describe The Word in just a few lines. I love the creative rhyme scheme. Thank you for this poem, Mr. Essmann. Reply Cynthia Erlandson October 23, 2023 Wow — this is lovely, and says so much in a few lines — as the Word says so much by being The Word. I, too, loved the use of atom/Adam. Also, was/abuzz is wonderful, as is your elucidating explanation of the gift of language being given only to humans. “There language was, there only was the Word.” is just fabulous! Reply Jeffrey Essmann October 23, 2023 Thanks so much, everybody. Mr. Banerjee, I take no credit for the rhyme scheme. It’s terza rima, Dante’s invention. I like its “braiding” (aba, bcb, cdc, etc.), and was initially going to do a terza rima sonnet (aba, bcb, cdc, ded ee), but found that I’d said all I wanted to say in eleven lines, so it’s a terza rima eleven-line-something-or-other. Whatever it is, again, I’m very grateful that it somehow spoke to you all. Reply Shamik Banerjee October 23, 2023 Mr. Essmann, I appreciate you enlightening me on the poetic form. I’m learning a lot from this wonderful space. Thank you again for this beautiful poem. God bless. Reply Margaret Coats October 23, 2023 Jeffrey, your line “Although we still don’t understand it quite” sets us up for economy of form, by which I mean shortening what looks like it will be a terza rima sonnet. That and the stirring in the darkness of the final couplet beautifully suit the subject of The Word. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Phil L. Flott October 23, 2023 How can we describe the Word simply by words? I appreciate Mr. Essmann’s effort. Reply
Maura Harrison October 23, 2023 I appreciate ‘From atom unto Adam.” A clever and dlughtful phrase. Reply
Bruce J PEARL October 23, 2023 The Word: according to the wife of Bath It isn’t true. The tree Wasn’t forbidden, the serpent Satan, Nor Eve the female betrayer of man. Rather, she was a Prometheus Who, in order that we might be freed thus From a world of angelic ignorance – That we as living, breathing creatures might dance The dance of life and so by experience Know good and evil – plucked that fruit hence. And, eschewing even Jehovah’s warning, Risked death to see human wisdom dawning. For which God then, even unto today, That calumny might sacrifice repay, Ordered us subject to the will of man – Though they both ate – I just don’t understand. No, the root of evil, ever since then, Is that women are ruled by witless men. Reply
Shamik Banerjee October 23, 2023 Such a lucid and beautiful way to describe The Word in just a few lines. I love the creative rhyme scheme. Thank you for this poem, Mr. Essmann. Reply
Cynthia Erlandson October 23, 2023 Wow — this is lovely, and says so much in a few lines — as the Word says so much by being The Word. I, too, loved the use of atom/Adam. Also, was/abuzz is wonderful, as is your elucidating explanation of the gift of language being given only to humans. “There language was, there only was the Word.” is just fabulous! Reply
Jeffrey Essmann October 23, 2023 Thanks so much, everybody. Mr. Banerjee, I take no credit for the rhyme scheme. It’s terza rima, Dante’s invention. I like its “braiding” (aba, bcb, cdc, etc.), and was initially going to do a terza rima sonnet (aba, bcb, cdc, ded ee), but found that I’d said all I wanted to say in eleven lines, so it’s a terza rima eleven-line-something-or-other. Whatever it is, again, I’m very grateful that it somehow spoke to you all. Reply
Shamik Banerjee October 23, 2023 Mr. Essmann, I appreciate you enlightening me on the poetic form. I’m learning a lot from this wonderful space. Thank you again for this beautiful poem. God bless. Reply
Margaret Coats October 23, 2023 Jeffrey, your line “Although we still don’t understand it quite” sets us up for economy of form, by which I mean shortening what looks like it will be a terza rima sonnet. That and the stirring in the darkness of the final couplet beautifully suit the subject of The Word. Reply