Dawn landscape by Willem de KlerkTwo Poems in the Style of Robert Frost, by Dusty Grein The Society October 9, 2023 Beauty, Poetry 15 Comments . Morning Witness To greet the dawn, I crossed a meadow green, still blanketed in jewels of morning dew. I sat upon a rock, still and serene, and watched the sky transform from black to blue. Even before the silhouettes of trees defined the border of the unborn sky, I heard the morning song of chickadees and listened as a loon bid night goodbye. The entrance of the sun brought colors forth in hues that brightened slow from dark to light; ‘twas not for me to judge this beauty’s worth, but merely to record the glorious sight, and then to make my way from whence I’d come, with miles to walk to find my way back home. . . Sunrise in the Pacific Northwest When I wander the dark, pre-dawn streets of this town, with its sawmills all quiet, past pastures and trees, I will often stop, hearing the beautiful sound of the unbroken silence, while its people all sleep. Then the feathered small heralds start painting the gray with the songs of sheer joy and sweet hope that they sing, all the nocturnal creatures will tuck themselves in, and hide, safe from the brightness the new day will bring. Next, the sun slowly creeps from its far away bed, and the dawn gently kisses the landscape below; like a lover, its beautiful tender caress, rouses forest and field in the soft morning glow. Crystal clarity grows with a purpose and strength, building anticipation. Each color released adds itself to the glorious moment of truth, when sunshine erupts over hills to the East. Soon the world is awash in full color and light. Morning glories unfurl, exposing their hues without shame to the sun and its life-giving rays, standing strong in each meadow, amidst sparkling dew. . . Dusty Grein is an author, poet, graphics designer, professional editor, and book publisher. Originally from Federal Way, Washington, he currently lives in the hills of central Oregon, where many of his 21 grandchildren occupy much of his free time. When he is not busy writing, editing, and producing books for others, he donates a great deal of his time and graphics talent. In honor of his first-born grandson Eddy, lost to SIDS at 13 weeks old, he creates free memorial images for bereaved families, with a special focus on infant and pregnancy loss. His blog, From Grandpa’s Heart… is followed by fans around the world. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 15 Responses Paddy Raghunathan October 9, 2023 Thanks Dusty for these sweet poems to begin the day. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thank you for the kind words, Paddy. Reply Phil L. Flott October 9, 2023 “Morning Witness” seems very Frostian. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thanks Phil. I have always loved Frost’s natural observations style. Reply Allegra Silberstein October 9, 2023 Two lovely poems to begin my day. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thank you, Allegra. I’m glad you enjoyed them. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson October 9, 2023 Dusty, both poems are beautiful on their own whether or not one sees the touch of Frost. Of course, “with miles to walk” is a paean to Frost. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thanks Roy. I write first and foremost for myself, and by challenging myself to follow Frost’s style, I think it has made my own work a little better. Reply Mark Stellinga October 9, 2023 Dusty, outstanding visuals and both with a refreshingly delightful themes. A nice way to start the week. 🙂 BTW – I see you do some publishing. If you’d be interested in tackling a VERY BIG book of strictly rhyme & meter, let me know. I’m at http://www.writerofbooks.com. I live in Iowa. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thanks, Mark. I would love to discuss the process of publishing with you, and will check out your site. As you can probably tell from the work, I live in the Pacific Northwest; I just moved from a tiny town in western Oregon, to a slightly bigger small town in western Washington. Reply Mark Stellinga October 10, 2023 Sounds good, Dusty, my emails are: [email protected] &, of course, [email protected]. It formats out at 8.5 x 11, with 465 sheets, in 14 font. It’s a whopper so it might be beyond your capacity??? We’ll see… 🙂 Paul A. Freeman October 9, 2023 Firstly, Dusty, what an awesome author’s biography. I’m surprised you can find the time to write. I love the simplicity of ‘Morning Witness’ and ‘Sunrise in the Pacific Northwest’, both of language and theme. It’s made all the more poignant since I recently found my stressed out self sitting quietly and forcing myself to relax for eight hours until after morning broke. Thanks for the reads. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thank you, Paul. As one of my favorite SCP voices, your comments mean a lot. I think that the simplicity in most of Frost’s observational work is one of the largest elements of their charm. His sharp eye, and expressive narrative hide the deeper context, and let the beauty of the scenery shine through. (by the way, finding time to write is ALWAYS a challenge, but for me, it’s a little like breathing, you can only hold off for so long). – D Reply Alena Casey October 10, 2023 Lovely poems about a lovely time of day. One of my favorite lines is “Then the feathered small heralds start painting the gray”. I like Frost a lot. About a year ago I had decided I wanted to read more Frost, and I found a book of his poems for 25cents at a library sale. That was a great day. Reply Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Alena, thank you so much. That is one of my own favorite lines in the work. I too, am a huge Frost fan, and have a previously published piece here, on some of my favorite lesser-known Frost poems. (https://classicalpoets.org/2017/11/24/ten-of-the-best-poems-by-robert-frost-that-youve-probably-never-read/) Great find on the book! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thanks Phil. I have always loved Frost’s natural observations style. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson October 9, 2023 Dusty, both poems are beautiful on their own whether or not one sees the touch of Frost. Of course, “with miles to walk” is a paean to Frost. Reply
Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thanks Roy. I write first and foremost for myself, and by challenging myself to follow Frost’s style, I think it has made my own work a little better. Reply
Mark Stellinga October 9, 2023 Dusty, outstanding visuals and both with a refreshingly delightful themes. A nice way to start the week. 🙂 BTW – I see you do some publishing. If you’d be interested in tackling a VERY BIG book of strictly rhyme & meter, let me know. I’m at http://www.writerofbooks.com. I live in Iowa. Reply
Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thanks, Mark. I would love to discuss the process of publishing with you, and will check out your site. As you can probably tell from the work, I live in the Pacific Northwest; I just moved from a tiny town in western Oregon, to a slightly bigger small town in western Washington. Reply
Mark Stellinga October 10, 2023 Sounds good, Dusty, my emails are: [email protected] &, of course, [email protected]. It formats out at 8.5 x 11, with 465 sheets, in 14 font. It’s a whopper so it might be beyond your capacity??? We’ll see… 🙂
Paul A. Freeman October 9, 2023 Firstly, Dusty, what an awesome author’s biography. I’m surprised you can find the time to write. I love the simplicity of ‘Morning Witness’ and ‘Sunrise in the Pacific Northwest’, both of language and theme. It’s made all the more poignant since I recently found my stressed out self sitting quietly and forcing myself to relax for eight hours until after morning broke. Thanks for the reads. Reply
Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Thank you, Paul. As one of my favorite SCP voices, your comments mean a lot. I think that the simplicity in most of Frost’s observational work is one of the largest elements of their charm. His sharp eye, and expressive narrative hide the deeper context, and let the beauty of the scenery shine through. (by the way, finding time to write is ALWAYS a challenge, but for me, it’s a little like breathing, you can only hold off for so long). – D Reply
Alena Casey October 10, 2023 Lovely poems about a lovely time of day. One of my favorite lines is “Then the feathered small heralds start painting the gray”. I like Frost a lot. About a year ago I had decided I wanted to read more Frost, and I found a book of his poems for 25cents at a library sale. That was a great day. Reply
Dusty Grein October 10, 2023 Alena, thank you so much. That is one of my own favorite lines in the work. I too, am a huge Frost fan, and have a previously published piece here, on some of my favorite lesser-known Frost poems. (https://classicalpoets.org/2017/11/24/ten-of-the-best-poems-by-robert-frost-that-youve-probably-never-read/) Great find on the book! Reply