"The goatherder's siesta" by Carlo Ademollo‘There Are Not Enough Hours in the Day’: A Poem by Geoffrey Smagacz The Society November 30, 2023 Beauty, Humor, Poetry 17 Comments . There Are Not Enough Hours in the Day There are not enough hours in the dayto take all of the naps I want to take.As soon as I have sprung up from the hayI think I’d rather dream than be awake—so long as they are of the pleasant sort,not one where I am trying to outracea serial killer chasing me for sport,and me without a gun or can of mace;or one where there’s a lion in the lodgewho knows exactly where to turn his rage—if skillfully its cuspids I can dodgeI’ll have to face a ruled, unwritten page.Such is the writer’s life, one understands,when he has too much free time on his hands. . . Geoffrey Smagacz writes from Mexico (mostly) and South Carolina. His poetry has been published in various literary magazines and e-zines, including 14 by 14, Dappled Things and the Society of Classical Poets. His latest murder mystery, Reportedly Murdered (Wipf and Stock, 2022), is now available through online venues. A collection of his fiction, published under the title of A Waste of Shame and Other Sad Tales of the Appalachian Foothills (Wiseblood Books, 2013), won the 2014 Independent Publisher gold medal for Best Mid-Atlantic Regional Fiction. www.geoffreysmagacz.com, @Ge0ffreyW on Twitter. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. CODEC Stories:Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) 17 Responses Paul A. Freeman November 30, 2023 What great fun. And a fantastic final couplet, to boot. Thanks for the read, Geoffrey. Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thank you! Reply Roy Eugene Peterson November 30, 2023 I love this poem with its vivid humor from possible dreams after taking a nap. Since I have retired to take naps and write, I can identify with what you wrote. Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thank you, Roy Eugene. Reply Margaret Coats November 30, 2023 I too like dreams of the pleasant sort, but I notice there are none in this poem. What a life when you can’t even enjoy naps because frightening imaginary chases keep you away from the ruled page! No rest for the weary? Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thanks, Margaret. These are classic “avoidance dreams.” Reply Allegra Silberstein November 30, 2023 Thanks for your poem that was a joy to read. Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thanks, Allegra! Reply Joshua C. Frank December 1, 2023 Interesting thought. Myself, I don’t care for dreams. If they’re pleasant, then waking up is always a disappointment; if not… well, that’s self-explanatory. Of course, if you’ve read my poetry, you know I don’t care much for the unreal anyway. Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thanks, Joshua. I make it up as I go along. Reply Cynthia Erlandson December 2, 2023 This is a really fun poem— than you, Geoffrey. Reply Cynthia Erlandson December 2, 2023 (Thank you.) Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thanks, Cynthia! Reply Jeff Eardley December 2, 2023 “Back of the net” as they say over here. I really enjoyed this Geoffrey. Thanks a bunch! Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thank you, Jeff! Reply C.B. Anderson December 5, 2023 A nice take on the interplay between wakefulness and sleep, Geoffrey, and a subject that could be expanded upon, whether in poetry or prose, almost endlessly. As a poet myself, I find the interplay of fact and fantasy to be in constant tension, a state of mind that often leads to good ends. Reply Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thanks, C.B.! Literature is rife with dreams, both sleeping and waking. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Captcha loading...In order to pass the CAPTCHA please enable JavaScript. Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Paul A. Freeman November 30, 2023 What great fun. And a fantastic final couplet, to boot. Thanks for the read, Geoffrey. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson November 30, 2023 I love this poem with its vivid humor from possible dreams after taking a nap. Since I have retired to take naps and write, I can identify with what you wrote. Reply
Margaret Coats November 30, 2023 I too like dreams of the pleasant sort, but I notice there are none in this poem. What a life when you can’t even enjoy naps because frightening imaginary chases keep you away from the ruled page! No rest for the weary? Reply
Joshua C. Frank December 1, 2023 Interesting thought. Myself, I don’t care for dreams. If they’re pleasant, then waking up is always a disappointment; if not… well, that’s self-explanatory. Of course, if you’ve read my poetry, you know I don’t care much for the unreal anyway. Reply
Jeff Eardley December 2, 2023 “Back of the net” as they say over here. I really enjoyed this Geoffrey. Thanks a bunch! Reply
C.B. Anderson December 5, 2023 A nice take on the interplay between wakefulness and sleep, Geoffrey, and a subject that could be expanded upon, whether in poetry or prose, almost endlessly. As a poet myself, I find the interplay of fact and fantasy to be in constant tension, a state of mind that often leads to good ends. Reply
Geoffrey Smagacz December 8, 2023 Thanks, C.B.! Literature is rife with dreams, both sleeping and waking. Reply