"Tintern Abbey" by Hamandista‘Decay’ and Other Poetry by Janice Canerdy The Society December 23, 2023 Beauty, Poetry 12 Comments . . Decay What causes a relationship to fail? Decay sets in when thoughtlessness persists, when selfishness extends beyond the pale, and chances to show love are blindly missed. . Vacated houses crumbling with decay once teemed with life and families with dreams. Now in the wind, these spindly structures sway, not willing to give up the ghost, it seems. . But Nature’s life-renewing power leans upon decay of plants. Like night and day, these opposites, decay and growth, are means that lead to all Earth’s glory on display. . __Each year Spring plants and flowers grace the Earth, __for God decreed that death results in birth. . . . . I Never Tire of October Fall’s tapestry of red and gold, as scheduled, always will unfold. Still, I am dazzled and surprised October holds me mesmerized. . The color riot on display of mums and pumpkins perched on hay is Autumn’s message dramatized. October holds me mesmerized. . An extra blanket for the bed, not t’s, but flannel shirts instead— the need for these can be surmised. October holds me mesmerized. . Cute costumed kids collect their treats. Their night of fun, the month completes, and once again I’ve realized October holds me mesmerized. . . . . Janice Canerdy is a retired high-school English teacher from Potts Camp, Mississippi. Her poems have appeared in numerous publications: anthologies by Quill Books, Mississippi Poetry Society, the National Federation of State Poetry Societies, Poetry Soup; journals and magazines: Society of Classical Poets Journal (and online), The Hypertexts, Halcyon Days, Light, Westward Quarterly, Lyric, Parody, Bitterroot, Lighten Up Online, Saturday Evening Post, Penwood Review, Better Than Starbucks, Poetry Quarterly, and LIVE (by Gospel Publishing House). She has had one book published: Expressions of Faith (Christian Faith Publishing, 2016). She is the President of the Mississippi Poetry Society, Inc. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 12 Responses Paul A. Freeman December 23, 2023 I love the simplicity with which you tackle the complexities of ‘Decay’, Janice and turn a somewhat depressing subject into one of joy and hope. As for I Never Tire of October, the refrain made this a jolly poem and again the deceptive simplicity was a joy to read. Thank you for your work. Reply Janice Canerdy December 23, 2023 Thank you so much, Paul! Reply Roy Eugene Peterson December 23, 2023 Your precious poems on “Decay” and October holding you mesmerized were a blessing to read. “Death results in birth” is a beautiful phrase and I loved the repetitive phrase, “October leaves me mesmerized!” Autumn colors can be spectacular, and you reminded us of that. Reply Janice Canerdy December 23, 2023 Thank you, Roy. SO glad you liked the poems. Reply Cynthia Erlandson December 23, 2023 I, also, loved both of these, Janice. There is a lot of wisdom in “Decay”, and the last line, especially, expresses a profundity. And, I never tire of October, either. It has long been my favorite month, and here you have made it sound musical. Reply Janice Canerdy December 23, 2023 Cynthia, your kind words have left me with a smile! Reply Allegra Silberstein December 23, 2023 I loved both of these poems but for me, “Decay” was amazing because of the turn at the end to nature’s wisdom. Reply Janice Canerdy December 23, 2023 Allegra, your kind words have made me smile! Reply Margaret Coats December 23, 2023 “Decay” is a somber sonnet, Janice. The social decay you speak of in the octave is serious and apparently irreparable–then you consult the order of nature for a better outlook. The lack of resolution is realistic, but mature faith and hope shine even without overcoming the acknowledged ills. I like it. “I Never Tire of October” is likewise stationary, as indicated by the refrain, but happier in the attractions of the four aspects (again natural and social) you list in the four stanzas. Enjoyed both! Reply David Whippman December 29, 2023 “I Never Tire of October” is a snappy little addition to the poetry about that month. I liked it a lot. Reply C.B. Anderson January 1, 2024 I love “Decay”, but if I had written it, the last line might have been something like: for God decrees that death begets rebirth. Reply Linda Owen February 2, 2024 Janice, I love reading your poems, and I also love the fact that you are my friend and an incredibly gifted leader in the Mississippi Poetry Society, Inc. Congratulations on your placement with SCP and on being the 2024 MPS Poet of the Year! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Paul A. Freeman December 23, 2023 I love the simplicity with which you tackle the complexities of ‘Decay’, Janice and turn a somewhat depressing subject into one of joy and hope. As for I Never Tire of October, the refrain made this a jolly poem and again the deceptive simplicity was a joy to read. Thank you for your work. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson December 23, 2023 Your precious poems on “Decay” and October holding you mesmerized were a blessing to read. “Death results in birth” is a beautiful phrase and I loved the repetitive phrase, “October leaves me mesmerized!” Autumn colors can be spectacular, and you reminded us of that. Reply
Cynthia Erlandson December 23, 2023 I, also, loved both of these, Janice. There is a lot of wisdom in “Decay”, and the last line, especially, expresses a profundity. And, I never tire of October, either. It has long been my favorite month, and here you have made it sound musical. Reply
Allegra Silberstein December 23, 2023 I loved both of these poems but for me, “Decay” was amazing because of the turn at the end to nature’s wisdom. Reply
Margaret Coats December 23, 2023 “Decay” is a somber sonnet, Janice. The social decay you speak of in the octave is serious and apparently irreparable–then you consult the order of nature for a better outlook. The lack of resolution is realistic, but mature faith and hope shine even without overcoming the acknowledged ills. I like it. “I Never Tire of October” is likewise stationary, as indicated by the refrain, but happier in the attractions of the four aspects (again natural and social) you list in the four stanzas. Enjoyed both! Reply
David Whippman December 29, 2023 “I Never Tire of October” is a snappy little addition to the poetry about that month. I liked it a lot. Reply
C.B. Anderson January 1, 2024 I love “Decay”, but if I had written it, the last line might have been something like: for God decrees that death begets rebirth. Reply
Linda Owen February 2, 2024 Janice, I love reading your poems, and I also love the fact that you are my friend and an incredibly gifted leader in the Mississippi Poetry Society, Inc. Congratulations on your placement with SCP and on being the 2024 MPS Poet of the Year! Reply