"Klosterruine Eldena" by Caspar David Friedrich‘I Know Them Well’: A Villanelle by Mike Ruskovich The Society December 27, 2023 Culture, Poetry, Villanelle 8 Comments . I Know Them Well Don’t preach to me of heaven and of hell expecting me to tremble and to cower. They’re here on Earth, and yes, I know them well. I do not need to hear your church bell knell from high atop some dominating tower. Don’t preach to me of heaven and of hell; I do not need your sermons or your bell. I have the stream, the tree, the stone, the flower. They’re here on Earth, and yes, I know them well. And I have painful stories I won’t tell of hopes I’ve watched reality devour. Don’t preach to me of heaven and of hell, of hunger only God’s good grace can quell. The wind holds grace, as does the mountain shower. They’re here on Earth, and yes, I know them well. I don’t believe your tale of how Man fell, for Eden’s here each minute of each hour. Don’t preach to me of heaven and of hell. They’re here on Earth, and yes, I know them well. . . Mike Ruskovich lives in Grangeville, Idaho. He taught high school English for thirty-six years. He and his wife have four children. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 8 Responses Allegra Silberstein December 27, 2023 Your villanelle is profound and beautifully written. Thank you…Allegra Reply Paul A. Freeman December 27, 2023 I know the feeling, Mike. Well articulated. Reply Cynthia Erlandson December 27, 2023 This is an excellent villanelle. Among many great lines, “… hopes I’ve watched reality devour” really hits deeply. Keep writing! Reply Joshua C. Frank December 27, 2023 Interesting poem. It sounds as if the speaker has decided that he’s not a Christian because he (I always assume the speaker is the same sex as the poet until proven otherwise) believes nature to be sufficient for all things, good and bad. Indeed, even we Christians can identify with “hopes I’ve watched reality devour.” However, given this, I’m not sure why he thinks “Eden’s here each minute of each hour,” since there was no suffering of any kind in Eden until Eve and then Adam ate the forbidden fruit. Still, the poem is interesting and well done. Reply Drilon Bajrami December 27, 2023 Very powerful poem, Mike, that made me feel slightly uncomfortable — I love all literature which makes me feel that way. Maybe it’s because I can relate so well, as I’m sure we all can: suffering is a universal human thing. It also reminds me of the Shakespeare quote: “Hell is empty and all the devils are here.” Great poem! Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant December 28, 2023 I am a huge fan of the villanelle, and you have done the form every justice in this thought-provoking poem. I am drawn to the lines, “Don’t preach to me of heaven and of hell,/ of hunger only God’s good grace can quell.” Too many are playing God on Earth these days, and (for me) these lines speak volumes on those pretenders who claim they are able to cure all. You make an excellent point in a nihilistic age of spiritual dearth… powerfully and beautifully. Thank you. Reply Sarah Stoltzfus Allen December 29, 2023 I have just started writing villanelles, and I have to say that I am enjoying it. I appreciate this one very much. I can relate with just about every line. Well done. Reply Talbot January 4, 2024 A very lovely meditation for those who, without the Faith, find solace (and perhaps grace) elsewhere. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Allegra Silberstein December 27, 2023 Your villanelle is profound and beautifully written. Thank you…Allegra Reply
Cynthia Erlandson December 27, 2023 This is an excellent villanelle. Among many great lines, “… hopes I’ve watched reality devour” really hits deeply. Keep writing! Reply
Joshua C. Frank December 27, 2023 Interesting poem. It sounds as if the speaker has decided that he’s not a Christian because he (I always assume the speaker is the same sex as the poet until proven otherwise) believes nature to be sufficient for all things, good and bad. Indeed, even we Christians can identify with “hopes I’ve watched reality devour.” However, given this, I’m not sure why he thinks “Eden’s here each minute of each hour,” since there was no suffering of any kind in Eden until Eve and then Adam ate the forbidden fruit. Still, the poem is interesting and well done. Reply
Drilon Bajrami December 27, 2023 Very powerful poem, Mike, that made me feel slightly uncomfortable — I love all literature which makes me feel that way. Maybe it’s because I can relate so well, as I’m sure we all can: suffering is a universal human thing. It also reminds me of the Shakespeare quote: “Hell is empty and all the devils are here.” Great poem! Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant December 28, 2023 I am a huge fan of the villanelle, and you have done the form every justice in this thought-provoking poem. I am drawn to the lines, “Don’t preach to me of heaven and of hell,/ of hunger only God’s good grace can quell.” Too many are playing God on Earth these days, and (for me) these lines speak volumes on those pretenders who claim they are able to cure all. You make an excellent point in a nihilistic age of spiritual dearth… powerfully and beautifully. Thank you. Reply
Sarah Stoltzfus Allen December 29, 2023 I have just started writing villanelles, and I have to say that I am enjoying it. I appreciate this one very much. I can relate with just about every line. Well done. Reply
Talbot January 4, 2024 A very lovely meditation for those who, without the Faith, find solace (and perhaps grace) elsewhere. Reply