engraving by Peter Carl Geissler‘Reward for How You Live’: A Poem by D.A. Cooper The Society June 21, 2024 Culture, Humor, Poetry 5 Comments . Reward for How You Live from Italo Calvino’s Italian folktale “Gesù e San Pietro in Friuli” One night, while traveling on a mountain road, two wanderers came upon a small abode. The vagrants, Jesus and Saint Peter, knocked. The house’s occupant then came, unlocked the door, and opened it a tiny crack. __“What do you want?” __Saint Peter answered back: “Hello, dear woman. We two need your grace, perhaps a bite to eat, a pleasant place to shelter us from the unfriendly night.” The woman looked at them by candlelight; she eyed them up and down, from head to toe and said, “You’re worthless tramps, you’ve got to go!” “For God’s sake, help us, ma’am!” Saint Peter said. She slammed the door, and Peter turned all red. He looked at Jesus, begging with his eyes, praying for vengeance with his silent cries. But Christ ignored him and began again __to walk. __They found another house, a twin to that one where they had been spurned. They knocked. The house’s occupant then came, unlocked the door, and opened it a tiny crack. __“Can I help you?” __And Peter answered back: “Hello, dear woman. We two need your grace, perhaps a bite to eat, a pleasant place to shelter us from the unfriendly night.” The woman opened wide her door, the light of her small fire lit up their faces. “Well, of course! Come in, come in and sit a spell, you must be freezing. Now, come in and rest. Of course, you’ll stay with me as honored guests. Besides, there’s nowhere else that you could go this time of night, the sun set hours ago. Why it’s pitch black out there! What little I can do for you, I’ll do. Now don’t be shy.” She moved her spinning wheel away. “Please, sit beside the fire and warm yourselves a bit. I bet you’re hungry, I’ll make you some food.” “That would be great. You have our gratitude, dear woman,” Peter said as they both sat beside the fire upon a woven mat. Ms. Catherine (which was the lady’s name) took some small twigs and fed them to the flame, and she began to cook a broth of greens she’d gathered from the woods, and tender beans, which Peter was so overjoyed to see. After they ate their soup and drank some tea, Ms. Catherine showed them up to a loft that she had lined with hay fresh, clean and soft. “Oh, what a blessed woman!” Peter said, exhausted and content. He laid his head __upon the hay and fell asleep. __At dawn, the Lord and Peter (with a final yawn) expressed their thanks to sweet Ms. Catherine. “Good woman,” Jesus said, “what you begin this morning, may you do it all day long without the need of rest. You will be strong and unimpeded by fatigue. I give this blessing as reward for how you live.” With that, the Lord and Peter took their leave. Ms. Catherine sat down, began to weave, for weaving was her trade, her daily work, the duty that, of all, she could not shirk. She grabbed her loom and set about her weaving, she wove and wove all day, not ever leaving her seat for rest or food or drink or other bodily needs. Not since the days her mother bounced her upon a knee had she been filled with so much energy, and she was thrilled! The shuttle flew across the loom, the weft was led through warps by hands both quick and deft, and as the day sped on, from morn to noon Ms. Catherine’s creations filled the room; each cloth she wove was thrown onto a mound that soon began to spread along the ground. By night, the cloths had covered up the floor and spilled right out the windows and the door until—though it’s not easy to believe— the woven mountain reached up to the eaves. That night, her neighbor Jacqueline (the same who’d chased away the Lord and Peter) came to visit Catherine. Ms. Jacqueline saw all the finished cloth that Catherine had made and shouted out in envious surprise, and then she made a noisy fuss, demanded that her friend should spill the beans: “You’ve made enough to clothe the Apennines!” So, Catherine told her about the drifters, that they were nice and certainly weren’t grifters. And when Ms. Jacqueline had understood that those two were the same ones who had stood before her door the night before, she swore __and cursed her luck. __“Do they have any more reason to pass back by us on this road?” “Oh yes, I heard them talking while I sewed last night just after they had finished eating. They’re going up the valley for a meeting, and then they plan to take the same way back.” “Well then, I hope you’ll send them to my shack. It would be nice if they’d cast such a spell on me, so I too could have lots to sell.” Ms. Catherine said, “Dear, I would be glad.” Of course, you know, she meant it for she had the kindest, gentlest heart in all the land. Ms. Jacqueline went home and couldn’t stand to wait a single day to get her boon, “I hope those worthless tramps get back here soon.” On the next night, there came a gentle knock. Ms. Catherine then came and turned the lock. She opened up the door a tiny crack. __“Can I help you?” __And Peter answered back: “Hello again, dear woman. We need grace, perhaps a bite to eat, a pleasant place to shelter us from the unfriendly night.” The woman opened wide her door, the light of her small fire lit up their faces. “Well, tonight my house is pretty full, to tell the truth. I’ve filled it up with cloth. I’ve got no room. But don’t you worry, sirs, I’ve thought of some place else that you can go. Just down next to the creek, out on the edge of town lives my dear friend Ms. Jacqueline. She’ll make __you right at home. __Peter began to shake his head, as he had not forgotten what Ms. Jacqueline had said. Then Jesus cut him off before he started to complain, said thanks again, and started down the lane. At the small house, there came a gentle knock. Ms. Jacqueline then came and turned the lock. She opened up the door a tiny crack. __“What do you want?” __Saint Peter answered back: “Hello again, dear woman. We need grace, perhaps a bite to eat, a pleasant place to shelter us from the unfriendly night.” The woman looked at them by candlelight; and slyly said, “Of course, fine gentlemen, come in. We’re poor folk in these parts, but when some pilgrim needs a hand, we do our best to help and trust that God will do the rest. I hope God blessed you on your trip. Please, sit next to the fire and warm yourselves a bit. I’ll have some dinner ready soon. The floor will have to be your bed tonight. I’m poor, __but glad to help.” __So, Christ and Peter spent the night upon the ground without lament. On the next morning, at the crack of dawn, the Lord and Peter (with a final yawn) said thanks again to mean Ms. Jacqueline. “Good woman,” Jesus said, “what you begin this morning, may you do it all day long without the need of rest. You will be strong and unimpeded by fatigue. I give this blessing as reward for how you live.” With that, the Lord and Peter went their way. Ms. Jacqueline then said, “Today’s the day!” Now I’ll show everyone what I can do, I’ll weave as much as Catherine times two!” But just before she sat down at her loom, she had a thought and walked out of the room. She headed to the outhouse to take care of business so she wouldn’t have to spare her weaving time to stop and do it later. Although she hadn’t ever had a greater desire to hurry up than she did now, __it seemed she couldn’t finish. __“Holy cow! It just keeps coming out! Of all the days! __I wonder what I ate?” __The sun’s bright rays began to oust the dark, then she could see. Her eyes went wide. “Oh no, it cannot be! __Oh please, not that!” __After an hour, she tried to get up off the pot, go back inside the house to start her weaving, but she had to run right back—her stomach felt so bad— and barely made it. She was forced to pass the day in this unpleasant way. Alas, Ms. Jacqueline had to give up her dream of churning out new fabric by the ream. As she sat there conducting her affairs, she lifted up her voice in humble prayer: “And now, O God,” she said, “I will give thanks if I don’t cause the creek to burst its banks.” And thus we see that how you treat your neighbors can sweeten or stink up your daily labors. . . D.A. Cooper is a poet from Houston, TX. He is an avid collector of degrees. Most recently he has received his MFA from the University of St. Thomas, Houston. His poetry has also appeared (or is soon to appear) in Dialogue Journal, Light, Lighten Up Online, L’Italo Americano, Irreantum, and Philosophy Now. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 5 Responses Paul Freeman June 21, 2024 Fabulous stuff Mr Cooper. I read it on my phone as a prose piece and it was faultless. Reply Roy Eugene Peterson June 21, 2024 That is an amazing story taken from verses of the Bible. The twist in the end is surprising, humorous, and a great message. Reply Mary Gardner June 21, 2024 The poem is crafted well, D.A. – but ugh! That ending! Reply Yael June 21, 2024 A great story and well told, this is fun to read. It reminds me of old German fairy tales, and the rhymed format makes it even more enjoyable, good job! Reply C.B. Anderson June 22, 2024 You get a pass for effort, but that’s all. 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Paul Freeman June 21, 2024 Fabulous stuff Mr Cooper. I read it on my phone as a prose piece and it was faultless. Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson June 21, 2024 That is an amazing story taken from verses of the Bible. The twist in the end is surprising, humorous, and a great message. Reply
Yael June 21, 2024 A great story and well told, this is fun to read. It reminds me of old German fairy tales, and the rhymed format makes it even more enjoyable, good job! Reply