"The Coronation of the Virgin with Six Angels" by Agnolo GaddiA Heroic Crown of Sonnets in Honor of the Ever Virgin, by Karen Darantière The Society July 27, 2024 Beauty, Culture, Poetry 14 Comments . A Heroic Crown of Sonnets in Honor of the Ever Virgin . —1st Mystery: The Prophecy of Isaiah . The Timeless Song The timeless song of her virginity, Intoned by holy angels, signifies The consecration to the Trinity Of her who godly grandeur glorifies. As font of Christian being she was formed, As sheer immaculacy was designed, To be to heaven’s harmony conformed, A flawless form in God’s eternal mind. What music does the prophet’s ear perceive? Mark well these words on which all hearts should dwell: Behold, a holy Virgin shall conceive A Son whose name shall be Emmanuel. This finely measured verse which God creates Throughout all time Isaiah intonates. . The Echo Ever After Throughout all time Isaiah intonates, Of God’s belovèd Son, the virgin birth; The echo of his voice reverberates For all, across the ages of the earth. Just as the ancient prophecies foretell The Son of God she will in time conceive, So do they dimly intimate as well How she our souls’ conception will achieve. She kneads the substance of our souls unborn, Her likeness gently does on them impress, Until immortally our souls are born Unto a love that will not evanesce. Through Mary’s virginal maternity True Love descends from all eternity. . . —2nd Mystery: The Virginal Conception . The Divine Embrace True Love descends from all eternity To Mary who most willingly had vowed, Inspired by her surpassing sanctity, To be espoused to God, thus she avowed. Her vow of virginal integrity Had flowered forth from her initial grace, Now blooms as she accepts wholeheartedly To mother Christ and all the human race. The Angel Gabriel proclaims: Behold, The Holy Spirit shall envelop thee, The Father’s might thy being shall enfold, So thou in his divine embrace shalt be. In our salvation she participates; In time in her pure womb God incarnates. . The Bridal Chamber In time in her pure womb God incarnates, As Providence predestined her to be The Savior’s Mother who cooperates In his redemption of humanity. A Virgin she remains, for with her vow Her Motherhood bonds indissolubly, As godly virtue does her soul endow With this twin privilege ineffably. This twofold grace with spousal love unites: Her womb, as nuptial room, is beautified By God, whose love the Virgin Bride requites, So that her Bridegroom may therein abide. His human form the Virgin Bride will knead Within her matrix whence he will proceed. . . —3rd Mystery: The Virgin Birth . The Glowing Hearth Within her matrix whence he will proceed, His Heart is warmed as in a glowing hearth; And so he wills no labor pangs precede The miracle of his true virgin birth. Angelic strains of solemn hymnal glee Suggest the wondrous way he will come forth: The Holy One, once born in time of thee, Shall be declared the Son of God thenceforth. As Christ revealed her as inviolate Upon his birth, so likewise he preserved Her strength so that she could compassionate Beneath the Cross, invincibly conserved. Preserving her intact with reverence, The Son confirms her lofty eminence. . The Refining Fire The Son confirms her lofty eminence As virgin whose pure heart will incandesce A glowing golden warmth that we may sense If we her purity of faith profess. The Passion will reveal, through her firm stand, Imperishable purity: like gold In a refining fire, she will withstand The trial and, for our sake, all faith uphold. The Cross, so like an all-consuming flame Devoured the disciples who forsook Their Lord, while Mary, her whole Heart aflame, In purest sacrificial love partook. Her Heart, in unison with his, will bleed; His will is that, through her, we may be freed. . . —4th Mystery: Virginity After Birth . The Ark Asperged with Precious Blood His will is that, through her, we may be freed, And thus no ephemeral vow she made, To be but one with Christ, so she may plead To save all souls who far from God have strayed. Her vow as Virgin ever after birth Is wedded to her coredemptive pain As spouse whose sorrow has salvific worth, Whose sacrifice all graces will obtain. Her womb, the ark of our salvation, would, As holiest of holies, one day be Asperged with blood cascading from the wood, Returning to its source devotedly. God wills her vow to serve his providence Through grace she will perpetually dispense. . “wood”: the wood of the Cross. . The Womb Awash in Scarlet Through grace she will perpetually dispense, Her Bridegroom his salvation to us grants; That we may know eternal innocence, I know not man her voice forever chants. The Virgin bearing Purity presents Him in the Temple as the Father willed; To join in his oblation she consents: Through martyrdom her vow will be fulfilled. Her womb, with precious blood the Lamb will shed, Will be awash, with scarlet overrun, The place of virgin nuptials bathed in red: In her the Spouse and Martyr are but one. His martyrdom her womb will thus enshrine, Her virgin love with sacrifice entwine. . . —5th Mystery: The Holy Faith in the Perpetual Virginity . From Virgin Womb to Virgin Tomb Her virgin love with sacrifice entwine From when within her chaste maternal womb Her Jesus dwells as in a sacred shrine, Till he reposes in the maiden tomb. No pangs of labor did she undergo In childbirth, nor hard labor to entomb Her lifeless Son, although her heart with woe In the sepulcher does her flesh inhume. See how she swathes his body in the bands; This shroud recalls to her the swaddling clothes Enveloping her Child; admire her priestly hands With gravity his shrouded corpse depose. She is forever wedded to his plight From cradle to the cross without respite. . From Blissful Tears to Bitter Tears From cradle to the cross without respite She mothers God, then man with no relief, To heal his soul of his soul’s sinful blight; And yet the birth was joy, no pain or grief. From bliss to bitterness the tears she wept Were turned, to birth our souls to dignity; Between these births all is unlike except For her perpetual virginity. Within our holy Nicene Creed a most Firm witness to this beauteous truth is borne: By the great power of the Holy Ghost Of Ever-Virgin Mary he was born. In her sheer gift of self to Love divine, From first to last her Heart and his align. . . —6th Mystery: The Ever Virgin in the Holy Liturgy . The Blazing Bush From first to last her Heart and his align To offer up the blood which we revere, According to the ancient tridentine Tradition, on the first day of the year. We feast the day thy Child was circumcised, While thy unvanquished virtue through a veil We contemplate with Moses, quite surprised To see the flames that burn to no avail. Just as we honor the first drop he bled When hardly had Our Savior flesh assumed, So we extoll her Virgin Heart, a red Hot blazing bush that never is consumed. Her Heart aflame with Love burns ever bright; To be but one with him is her delight. . “tridentine tradition”: the ancient Roman rite, that is, the traditional Latin Mass as it has existed for over a millennium and as codified by the Council of Trent (1545-1563). This stanza refers to the Feast Day celebrated on the first day of the year, on the 1st of January, according to the liturgical calendar of this venerable liturgical rite (and which differs from the new rite currently observed by the Catholic Church), and which is the Feast of the Circumcision of Jesus, celebrating the moment when, as an infant, he shed the very first drop of his Precious Blood. . The Immaculate Blood To be but one with him is her delight, Beneath the wound whence flows the precious blood, Cascading river of his grace: despite The pain, with joy her heart is all aflood. For her, the river flows from Jesus’ side And fills this august vessel to the brim With water, for the bitter tears she cried, With blood, for her own blood she gave to him. His blood, of everlasting life the gage, Received by souls exempt from mortal stain, Whose thirst this nectar can but assuage, Is hers: all sullied souls should thus abstain. To keep for us his blood forever warm, Her soul consents to being cruciform. . . —7th Mystery: The Virgin Form of Christian Souls . The Virgin Made Church Her soul consents to being cruciform So she may model us like pliant clay, Unto her image our own hearts conform Until we reach the everlasting day. Saint Francis’s salutation chimes afar Like ringing bells: Hail Lady, Holy Queen, All Holy Mother of our God: you are The virgin rendered Church, by God foreseen. Through her, the one true Holy Church is rich In virgin love of Christ, unshared and whole, So that she may with grace the world enrich By motherly begetting every soul. In Mary’s womb does Christ his Church preform, To shape our souls into her virgin form. . The Maternal Form To shape our souls into her virgin form, To her maternal Heart she draws us in, Wherein she renders our hearts uniform, To her own likeness ever more akin. Upon the Church, her eyes with mercy look; Her splendid incandescence still illumes The present gloom; we never are forsook So long as her pure gaze our own subsumes. Each of our hearts surrenders like a child So she may in her virgin womb enfold Our difform souls, within this matrix mild Her mother’s love may each of us remold. Our souls may thus sing with affinity The timeless song of her virginity. . . —The Master Sonnet . The Ever-Virgin Coredemptress The timeless song of her virginity Throughout all time Isaiah intonates: True Love descends from all eternity, In time in her pure womb God incarnates. Within her matrix whence he will proceed, The Son confirms her lofty eminence; His will is that, through her, we may be freed Through grace she will perpetually dispense. Her virgin love with sacrifice entwine From cradle to the cross without respite; From first to last her Heart and his align: To be but one with him is her delight. Her soul consents to being cruciform To shape our souls into her virgin form. . . Poet’s Note This Heroic Crown in honor of the Ever Virgin is dedicated to Father Serafino M. Lanzetta, Marian Franciscan, with gratitude for his luminous reflections on the Semper Virgo. These sonnets were inspired by the Chaplet of Mary’s Perpetual Virginity, conceived by Father Lanzetta, which received the imprimatur of Stephen Robson, Bishop of Dunkeld. This newly devised chaplet honors the seven moments of Our Lady’s Perpetual Virginity. It can be found in the book Semper Virgo: Mary’s Virginity as the “Form” of Christian Life, Arouca Press, 2023. Anyone wishing to understand the theology undergirding these poetic meditations can be enlightened by reading this profoundly beautiful theological book. This series of fifteen sonnets comprises what is known as a sonnet redoublé or heroic crown, which is a complex form of crown of sonnets. A crown of sonnets is a sequence of sonnets concerned with a single theme, one aspect of the theme being delved into by each of the sonnets. Each succeeding sonnet is linked to the preceding sonnet by repeating the final line of the preceding sonnet as its first line. The first line of the first sonnet is repeated as the final line of the final sonnet, thereby bringing the sequence to a close, and linking all the sonnets together as in one complete crown. The advanced form of crown of sonnets, called a heroic crown, was conceived by the Siena Academy, which was formed in 1460, and to which the author of this verse wishes to pay homage. A heroic crown is comprised of fifteen sonnets, which are linked as described above, but in addition, the final binding sonnet is made up of all the first lines (or all the last lines) of the preceding fourteen, in order. This fifteenth sonnet, called the master sonnet, brings together all the sonnets as a final bouquet, showing clearly the indissoluble bond between them, according to both form and meaning. The heroic crown is a very demanding form with many formal constraints due to the intertwining of all the sonnets through the recurrence of the same lines from one sonnet to another, as well as through the complex rhyme scheme, which includes seven principal rhymes which echo throughout the whole composition. The composing of a heroic crown demands much forethought and is akin to the forming of the design scheme for all the stained-glass windows in a Gothic cathedral, conceived theologically and aesthetically as a well-ordered whole, as a microcosm representing on a smaller scale the macrocosm, prior to the craftsmen actually fabricating the stained-glass images. The nature of the sonnet is such that the meaning must be expressed concisely. The sonnet form combines a density of matter (i.e. of meaningful language), along with a brevity of form (i.e. of musical composition). Though each sonnet concerns one particular mystery, each one is linked not only in a formal sense, through the repetition of the same line of verse and the recurrence of rhymes throughout all the sonnets, but also according to the meaning of the mysteries which, while distinct, are intrinsically linked. The complexity of the rhyme scheme is not merely a kind of formal tour de force, for the reason that form and meaning are united, in that the form echoes the meaning and the meaning is enhanced by the form. The intrinsic bond between all the moments of Our Lady’s Perpetual Virginity is echoed by the regular recurrence of rhyming words. In addition to each single sonnet following the traditional Shakespearean rhyme scheme of ABABCDCDEFEFGG, so as to form a whole in itself, there is an intricate interweaving of rhymes throughout the whole series of sonnets, linking them all together as a whole. Each sonnet deals with a particular mystery, or a particular aspect of a mystery, but all the sonnets are woven together as one single tapestry representing the mystery of the Ever Virgin. The rhyme scheme forms a beautifully woven fabric with a regularly repeated motif, so that this formal element of poetry echoes the meaning expressed by the words. The rhyme scheme echoes the harmony between form and meaning, or to put it another way, through the interweaving of rhymes, form and meaning embrace one another. The sense is further echoed through the regular, metrical rhythm, through the musical form through which the thought is expressed, as such is precisely the essence of poetry. It is therefore essential that the sonnets be read rhythmically, by marking the iambic “heartbeat” rhythm. In this way, the regular heartbeat rhythm of the iambs can be heard: ta-TUM, ta-TUM, ta-TUM, ta-TUM, ta-TUM. For each sonnet is indeed written in iambic pentameter, that is to say, with 5 feet per line, each foot comprised of an unstressed followed by a stressed syllable. This rhythm, which is the most common in English verse as it is the most natural to the English language, is said to resemble the beating of the human heart. When the verse is recited aloud, as well as when read silently to oneself, this rhythm should be marked, should be audible, in such a way that one should be able to hear the beating of the Immaculate Heart of the Ever Virgin. . . Karen Darantière is an American living in France who teaches English language and literature at a French high school in Paris. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 14 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson July 27, 2024 Wow! This is a stupendous display of the sonnet blessing the Word that is incarnate. You were wise to explain the tenets of the “Heroic Crown Sonnet,” so I could grasp the full intentions and meaning of the marvelous. Tracing scripture from Isaiah to the New Testament was skillfully and intellectually entwined with the consummate presentation of what I consider to be a perfect succession of supreme sonnets. This is a stunning series of sonnets deserving of my highest praise. Reply Karen Darantière July 27, 2024 Thank you, Roy! This poetic form is very beautiful. I only discovered it very recently. I had been longing for some time to compose a poem about this beautiful mystery, but it was only when this form was found that I was able to write about it. I hope this heroic crown of sonnets might inspire others to compose their own. It’s a challenge, but a rewarding one. Reply jd July 27, 2024 What a beautiful labor of love, Karen. Even in her humility, The Blessed Mother must find it gratifying. I have not finished giving it the attention it deserves. Thank you for it. The accompanying graphic is beautiful too, Evan. Thank you. Reply Karen Darantière July 27, 2024 Thank you, jd. The labor of love is all Our Lady’s. Reply Margaret Coats July 27, 2024 Deo gratias et Mariae, Karen! These are the richest lyrics I have ever seen, and the finest from Classical Poets. You offer a wonderful way to spend a portion of Saturday reading them in order to receive blessings poetry can convey. Thank you as well for the recommendation of Father Lanzetta’s book. Your “Poet’s Note” qualifies as a valuable essay explaining the form of a crown of sonnets. I see that we have had only two crowns before this at this site. Corey Browning’s in 2015 is a crown of three sonnets on King Louis XV of France. Evan Mantyk’s three refreshing “Tea Garden” sonnets are linked or chained, but not as a classic crown because the final line is not the same as the first. However, that final line gives a sort of “infinite perspective” in the image it creates. One other crown would most certainly interest you, if you can find the book, Sonnets for the Queen of Heaven, by Joseph Charles MacKenzie, published in 2021. MacKenzie used to publish at Classical Poets, but moved first to his own site (no longer in existence) and later to Facebook. The final seven sonnets in his book are a Crown for the Most Holy Virgin Mary, Our Lady of Remedies. The seven remedies are the seven sacraments, showing an overall concept similar to yours in this spectacular heroic crown, where there are seven mysteries within the title and doctrine of Perpetual Virginity. Both you and MacKenzie apply your contemplations to the redemption and sanctification of souls. Do you know when the Siena Academy came up with the idea of the heroic crown? You say it was formed in 1460, by which time there were plenty of sonnets in Italy, but if you know of an early crown or heroic crown in Italian (or in French), I would be interested to know title and author. Reply Karen Darantière July 28, 2024 Dear Margaret, Thank you! And, as you say, Deo gratias et Mariae! I am happy that you noted the reference to Father Serafino Lanzetta’s book, Semper Virgo. All the beauty of the meditations comes from what I learned from this beautiful book. Thank you so much for informing me of the other crown of sonnets and the book by Joseph MacKenzie, which I will try to acquire. Concerning the Siena Academy, all that I know about it is a passing reference in a book, which might mention a heroic crown in Italian, I can check when I go back home at the end of the summer and will let you know if I find any title or author. By the way, I love the poetry that you post, and feel very much spiritual sympathy and accord, so your appreciation for this composition means so very much and I am very grateful to you. The timing of the publication is quite providential. Being from Paris (though thankfully far away at the moment), I was particularly revolted by the spectacle of decadence and depravity which France offered the world during the opening ceremonies of the Olympic Games, so I offer this heroic crown in reparation. Thank you again and I look forward to your next publication. Reply Julian D. Woodruff July 28, 2024 Ms. Darantiere, this is a stunning achievement in a very exacting medium, all to be reread often, with many startling ideas new to me (e.g., on the burning bush). You have a bold, arresting way with verbs that seems to put aside certain bothersome constraints in modern practice. I just wanted to make sure: in the 1st sonnet, did you mean “who” (nom.), with the obj. following, or “whom” (obj.), with the subj. following? Reply Karen Darantière July 28, 2024 Dear Julian, Thank you! In answer to your question, I mean “who” (nom.): the meaning in prose is this: … the consecration to the Trinity of Mary who glorifies God’s grandeur. I am pleased to hear you found some ideas “startling”: they are relatively new to me as well, the fruit of meditating on the theological reflections of the book I recommend. The more one delves into the beauty of the divine mysteries, the more “startled” one becomes! Reply Kevin Farnham July 29, 2024 This is a remarkable construction. I say this from the point of view of one engaged in a decades-long effort to produce an all encompassing modern sonnet sequence. I have thoroughly studied the sonnet form. Finding perfection in balancing conflicting objectives of rhythm, rhyme and meaning is difficult in composing any modern formal poetry, due to how the English language has changed over the centuries and how people speak today. I am reminded both of Samuel Daniel and George Herbert in technique and content. Reply Karen Darantière July 29, 2024 Thank you, Kevin. I am very grateful for your feedback. I composed these sonnets during Lent of this year, after having discovered this beautiful form. All I can say in response to your gracious comment is this: “Every best gift, and every perfect gift, is from above, coming down from the Father of lights.” (James 1:17) All is grace. Reply C.B. Anderson July 29, 2024 This sequence is a remarkable achievement, but I don’t believe a word of it. Reply Karen Darantière July 29, 2024 Thank you for the kind compliment and the honesty! We all feel some sympathy with thoughts which we nonetheless do not espouse, if we find some beauty in them, even if we think they sound like “lies breathed through silver” as C. S. Lewis called myths. In any case, there is much sympathy between us regarding the beauty of this poetic form of the heroic crown, which is already saying a great deal. Form matters and we love the form. Reply Daniel Kemper August 3, 2024 Among the many highly admirable aspects of this redouble (a term for it that I have not heard in a while, though I prefer it), are the frequent fresh rhymes. Here are a few of my fav’s. impress/evanesce forth/thenceforth providence/dispense –the “ense” of providence is nicely lofted by the meter circumcised/surprised There is an overall tightness, as in crafted-ness, which is quite pleasing as well. The many details that you attend to, which could be left out of view is yet another pleasing aspect of what had to have been a labor of love. Not a Catholic myself, I find enormous value in it, nonetheless. A brother-in-arms for decades now (ex-Ranger) is Catholic and has himself witnessed two miracles. I value Protestantism, but few see how much was lost in its formation. Back to the poem, or rather the essay, I think I would have described them as Elizabethan Sonnets, and had a little fun linking Mary to the Virgin Queen. Just a thought. Overall, very, very impressive. Brava! Reply Karen Darantière August 3, 2024 Dear Daniel, Thank you for the advice at the end of your very kind comments. I very much value this, as well as any other which might be given. I tend to neglect the historical aspect of things. The little essay at the end is just a rough sketch. What struck me when discovering this poetic form is how perfectly suited it was to express the theological thought conveyed by the series of mysteries. I see form and matter in poetry as being indissolubly wedded, hence the necessity of their being in harmony with one another. And I consider “free verse” as being expressive in and of itself of a kind of “heresy of formlessness”, so that it could never be conducive to expressing anything truly beautiful and true. Thank you again and blessings to you and yours. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson July 27, 2024 Wow! This is a stupendous display of the sonnet blessing the Word that is incarnate. You were wise to explain the tenets of the “Heroic Crown Sonnet,” so I could grasp the full intentions and meaning of the marvelous. Tracing scripture from Isaiah to the New Testament was skillfully and intellectually entwined with the consummate presentation of what I consider to be a perfect succession of supreme sonnets. This is a stunning series of sonnets deserving of my highest praise. Reply
Karen Darantière July 27, 2024 Thank you, Roy! This poetic form is very beautiful. I only discovered it very recently. I had been longing for some time to compose a poem about this beautiful mystery, but it was only when this form was found that I was able to write about it. I hope this heroic crown of sonnets might inspire others to compose their own. It’s a challenge, but a rewarding one. Reply
jd July 27, 2024 What a beautiful labor of love, Karen. Even in her humility, The Blessed Mother must find it gratifying. I have not finished giving it the attention it deserves. Thank you for it. The accompanying graphic is beautiful too, Evan. Thank you. Reply
Margaret Coats July 27, 2024 Deo gratias et Mariae, Karen! These are the richest lyrics I have ever seen, and the finest from Classical Poets. You offer a wonderful way to spend a portion of Saturday reading them in order to receive blessings poetry can convey. Thank you as well for the recommendation of Father Lanzetta’s book. Your “Poet’s Note” qualifies as a valuable essay explaining the form of a crown of sonnets. I see that we have had only two crowns before this at this site. Corey Browning’s in 2015 is a crown of three sonnets on King Louis XV of France. Evan Mantyk’s three refreshing “Tea Garden” sonnets are linked or chained, but not as a classic crown because the final line is not the same as the first. However, that final line gives a sort of “infinite perspective” in the image it creates. One other crown would most certainly interest you, if you can find the book, Sonnets for the Queen of Heaven, by Joseph Charles MacKenzie, published in 2021. MacKenzie used to publish at Classical Poets, but moved first to his own site (no longer in existence) and later to Facebook. The final seven sonnets in his book are a Crown for the Most Holy Virgin Mary, Our Lady of Remedies. The seven remedies are the seven sacraments, showing an overall concept similar to yours in this spectacular heroic crown, where there are seven mysteries within the title and doctrine of Perpetual Virginity. Both you and MacKenzie apply your contemplations to the redemption and sanctification of souls. Do you know when the Siena Academy came up with the idea of the heroic crown? You say it was formed in 1460, by which time there were plenty of sonnets in Italy, but if you know of an early crown or heroic crown in Italian (or in French), I would be interested to know title and author. Reply
Karen Darantière July 28, 2024 Dear Margaret, Thank you! And, as you say, Deo gratias et Mariae! I am happy that you noted the reference to Father Serafino Lanzetta’s book, Semper Virgo. All the beauty of the meditations comes from what I learned from this beautiful book. Thank you so much for informing me of the other crown of sonnets and the book by Joseph MacKenzie, which I will try to acquire. Concerning the Siena Academy, all that I know about it is a passing reference in a book, which might mention a heroic crown in Italian, I can check when I go back home at the end of the summer and will let you know if I find any title or author. By the way, I love the poetry that you post, and feel very much spiritual sympathy and accord, so your appreciation for this composition means so very much and I am very grateful to you. The timing of the publication is quite providential. Being from Paris (though thankfully far away at the moment), I was particularly revolted by the spectacle of decadence and depravity which France offered the world during the opening ceremonies of the Olympic Games, so I offer this heroic crown in reparation. Thank you again and I look forward to your next publication. Reply
Julian D. Woodruff July 28, 2024 Ms. Darantiere, this is a stunning achievement in a very exacting medium, all to be reread often, with many startling ideas new to me (e.g., on the burning bush). You have a bold, arresting way with verbs that seems to put aside certain bothersome constraints in modern practice. I just wanted to make sure: in the 1st sonnet, did you mean “who” (nom.), with the obj. following, or “whom” (obj.), with the subj. following? Reply
Karen Darantière July 28, 2024 Dear Julian, Thank you! In answer to your question, I mean “who” (nom.): the meaning in prose is this: … the consecration to the Trinity of Mary who glorifies God’s grandeur. I am pleased to hear you found some ideas “startling”: they are relatively new to me as well, the fruit of meditating on the theological reflections of the book I recommend. The more one delves into the beauty of the divine mysteries, the more “startled” one becomes! Reply
Kevin Farnham July 29, 2024 This is a remarkable construction. I say this from the point of view of one engaged in a decades-long effort to produce an all encompassing modern sonnet sequence. I have thoroughly studied the sonnet form. Finding perfection in balancing conflicting objectives of rhythm, rhyme and meaning is difficult in composing any modern formal poetry, due to how the English language has changed over the centuries and how people speak today. I am reminded both of Samuel Daniel and George Herbert in technique and content. Reply
Karen Darantière July 29, 2024 Thank you, Kevin. I am very grateful for your feedback. I composed these sonnets during Lent of this year, after having discovered this beautiful form. All I can say in response to your gracious comment is this: “Every best gift, and every perfect gift, is from above, coming down from the Father of lights.” (James 1:17) All is grace. Reply
C.B. Anderson July 29, 2024 This sequence is a remarkable achievement, but I don’t believe a word of it. Reply
Karen Darantière July 29, 2024 Thank you for the kind compliment and the honesty! We all feel some sympathy with thoughts which we nonetheless do not espouse, if we find some beauty in them, even if we think they sound like “lies breathed through silver” as C. S. Lewis called myths. In any case, there is much sympathy between us regarding the beauty of this poetic form of the heroic crown, which is already saying a great deal. Form matters and we love the form. Reply
Daniel Kemper August 3, 2024 Among the many highly admirable aspects of this redouble (a term for it that I have not heard in a while, though I prefer it), are the frequent fresh rhymes. Here are a few of my fav’s. impress/evanesce forth/thenceforth providence/dispense –the “ense” of providence is nicely lofted by the meter circumcised/surprised There is an overall tightness, as in crafted-ness, which is quite pleasing as well. The many details that you attend to, which could be left out of view is yet another pleasing aspect of what had to have been a labor of love. Not a Catholic myself, I find enormous value in it, nonetheless. A brother-in-arms for decades now (ex-Ranger) is Catholic and has himself witnessed two miracles. I value Protestantism, but few see how much was lost in its formation. Back to the poem, or rather the essay, I think I would have described them as Elizabethan Sonnets, and had a little fun linking Mary to the Virgin Queen. Just a thought. Overall, very, very impressive. Brava! Reply
Karen Darantière August 3, 2024 Dear Daniel, Thank you for the advice at the end of your very kind comments. I very much value this, as well as any other which might be given. I tend to neglect the historical aspect of things. The little essay at the end is just a rough sketch. What struck me when discovering this poetic form is how perfectly suited it was to express the theological thought conveyed by the series of mysteries. I see form and matter in poetry as being indissolubly wedded, hence the necessity of their being in harmony with one another. And I consider “free verse” as being expressive in and of itself of a kind of “heresy of formlessness”, so that it could never be conducive to expressing anything truly beautiful and true. Thank you again and blessings to you and yours. Reply