Henry Knox (bookseller and first U.S. Secretary of War) by Stuart‘Henry Knox in His Bookstore’ from Andrew Benson Brown’s Mock Epic Poem The Society September 17, 2024 Epic, Poetry, Readings, Video 22 Comments . . Henry Knox in His Bookstore —from Legends of Liberty, Volume 3 The chiming of a doorway’s silver bells Announced the timing of a late arriving Patron to browse the stacks, divining smells Of freshly printed spruce and pine, reviving Dormant memories of thriving woods And fathers rhyming low by candlelight. Climbing a shelf to worm through dusty words, Square glasses squint, recovering their sight, Recapturing a youth that time suppressed. “Hey—SHH!” —Relax, it’s just a bookshop. Don’t get stressed. “Ha HAA!” A bellow weighing twenty stone Came rolling through the bookshelves on a ladder, A flying pile of jolly flesh and bone. “Hi, fiction please? —Dystopian.” Low laughter. Sailing to satire, Pope and Swift came pouring. “Excuse me—any romance?” To chick-lit He cruised and—”HO ho!” —Pamela came soaring. Ebullience only goes so far when wit Is absent. Business dealings prosper, though, When Falstaff’s body mind-melds with a Prospero. Big pigeon toes descended little rungs. Broad shoulders squeezed behind a little desk. A double chin, just as a turkey runs, Went jiggling side to side (not Romanesque, This form) and, bobbing towards the window, spied The street—then settled, still, as Henry Knox’s Eyes addressed Sharpe’s Military Guide. He eased against some overflowing boxes And turned the page: On Building Fortifications. Digging through leaves, he raised up knowledge’s foundations. Ring-a-ling. There, stepping through a mass Of ladies, where a twirling parasol Blocked sunlight streaming through the polished glass, Shading a face that dreamed of Paris all Day long, a flirting figure summoned peals Of laughter, then approached the plump supplier, Belly plopping on the desk with piles Of books and, tilting down, looked through his wire Bifocals, saying (as his presence sank in): “Donating these, from London. All unread.” —“Ben Franklin!” —“In the flesh.” (His tummy rippled gently.) —“What brings you up from Philly?” —“Business trek— For dentistry!” (His glasses gleamed intently.) Knox laughed. His tummy tossed and swelled. “One sec.” He disappeared, returning holding eight Big volumes. “No, no, no—ah this one!” (Hunter’s Elegant Treatise on the Teeth with Plates.) Knox wrote the bill. Ben paid. “Some lovely haunters Of romance,” (referencing that section’s dames). —“Yes, they attract good business.”—Ben left, taking names. Knox glanced out toward the street and tapped his nails. Just where was Lucy? Had she been discovered? He sifted through Ben’s books and added sales Tags, lowering the prices, though his cupboard And shelves alike were thinning—that blockade Was choking shipments. Hitching up a sleigh, He dragged the volumes, sorting as they swayed: Paradise Lost, with pictures (not Doré, But decent). Wycliffe’s Bible. Hardly trash. Hey—book on cannonry? He’d add it to his cache. Ring-a-ling. There, limping through the seams Of dresses, bumping bustles—“Sorry” (grin), A low-brimmed hat, shoegazing, lost in dreams, Stumbled into the desk. “Nathanael Greene!” —“I know my name.” (Yes, but it helps narration.) —“What brings you from the forge?” —“Desire, friend— For classic works!” —“Old biblical translation Arrived just now.” —“No, thinking I’d extend My tastes—a picture book about The Fall?” Knox lugged the illustrated Milton from his haul. Two plain black sleeves went skimming: “Cannons, built In Hell? Makes sense! The Serpent’s vile productions Poison our peace.” The hat of plain black felt Inclined towards Henry’s guilty pleasure: “Instructions On Field Artillery, by Baron Friedrich Wilhelm August Heinrich Ferdinand von Steuben—say that three times fast! Comedic Names, those Euros.” Henry, shifting: “And How’s business?” —“Under pressure. I’m a maker Of farm tools—nothing more.”—“Ha HA! —the model Quaker!” Nathanael wheezed away, weaving through skirts, Nosing a page. Ajiggle, Henry scanned Outside the window, craning, playing scout. A handkerchief that covered his left hand Got caught against a corner, coming loose. He tightened the brown fabric, seeing tones: Cascading auburn, hazel orbs—his lass Of plumpish plumage; ginger mind, high-flown; That brazen sass, a voice to which he’d hearken; The bronze and brass of nuptials, cheerful as a lark in— Ring-a-ling. Two redcoats entered, sniffing The ladies (leaving), snooping up laddertops, Opening novels (upside down) and whiffing Perfume from pages trickled with teardrops, Then peaking under covers leaking potty Words and destroying shelves that overstocked The metric system’s use in textbooks (naughty Nerds), then ravishing The Rape of the Lock, And— “Pardon, sirs—each volume costs three shillings.” Eyes slowly turned towards Henry Knox. “…Um, if you’re willing?” The soldiers stalked his desk. “Ya would’na be Carryin’ contraband in ‘ere, eh chum?” The small one stared up, picking at a flea While flaring rotten teeth and swollen gums. “Ha, hardly, gentlemen—but you’re in luck! Some books on dental care just—” —“Shut ya trap! Ya reckon that we’re daft?” The tall one plucked The book, On Field Artillery, and tapped It: “What is this?” —“Your branch of expertise, Perhaps?” The tall one tongued his broken piano keys And banged his flat sonata: “What’s on yur Left ‘and?” He yanked the kerchief off. Two nubs, Three fingers. “‘Ow’d this ‘appen?” —“Hunting, sir. The London Bookshop caters to all clubs.” Knox cracked his china-whites: “Ha—” —“HEY! Just what’s So funny?” Said the small one, whipping out A pistol. Knox threw up his arms. “No buts About it—‘e’s a rebel, ‘e is.” —“There’s no doubt,” The tall one nodded with the small one: “Treas’nous!” “Surely, you wouldn’t jail a bookworm?” —“If it please us.” Knox stared into their mouths, two jagged chasms. They dragged him in the street and threw him down. The small one kicked him. Henry had a spasm: The tall one lit a torch and said, “I don’ Be taking joy in this—jus’ doin’ me job,” Then broke a window, tossing it inside. Knox rose up to his knees and choked a sob As his life savings burned away, his pride And passion up in smoke. “That’s blazin’—crikey!” A crumpled cloud reflected Henry’s paper psyche. Like when Hypatia, torn from off the wheels Of her chariot by zealots in a mob, Was flayed alive, left rotting as the wills Of killers turned to arson, then, to rob Majestic Alexandria of lore, Destroying its library, drawing scrawls Of darkness when they lightened weighty stores Of ancient knowledge housed in precious scrolls, And for a thousand years men wandered, cold And hungry, ignorant of all they’d lost of old, So Henry Knox lay vacant, naked, peeled Of purpose. “Get up!” kicked the small one. “Go— Yur off to Boston Gaol!” They tugged and wheeled The slumping form around, struggling to tow His tonnage forward. Then from a back alley, Nathanael Greene ran limping, throwing fists (More like a tennis match than boxing, really). Arms swung in wide and wild, his backhand fast And furious—till the tall one knocked his block off. Nathan fell backwards, seeing stars. “Don’t let ‘im walk off.” —“Anothuh inmate—won’ be space to stand!” Nathan was wheezing. —“Think this one’s asthmatic!” The soldiers, pulling, paused. Their tangled strands Of hair began to frizzle, charged with static. The streetlamps, not refilled on oil, lit up— Though owls, still nesting, weren’t yet trading hoots. A crackle through the cobblestones spit up Blue sparks that zapped the soldiers’ rubber boots. The pressure in their chests was tightening when Their blinkers, awed, were stricken blind by Lightning Ben. He pulled his journal, jotting, to brainstorm Ideas: E – m – c? No. Max AC? Nah—hasn’t been discovered. Nimbus form? (Eying the sky.) Blue ether. “Blast it.” Tree For a rod? No—barren. Fingering the breeze, Ben saw a pair of youngsters flying kites. “Excuse me boys, I need to borrow these.” The redcoats wiped their eyes, still seeing lights. The small one stabilized the tall one: “Hey, whoa.” Seizing their bayonets, they charged the portly halo. Ben yanked the kite strings up and down: “Come on.” He rubbed them fast, two sticks between his palms. A spark! …Extinguished. “Bah!” His patience gone, He closed his peepers, meditating. Calm. The soldiers neared their target, aiming blades (The tall one at his chest; the small, his groin). The scorching earth was graced with spots of shade. Clouds gathered, high. A peal of thunder joined A flash—the soldiers blinked. Ben stepped aside And, winding strings to weapons, ribboned hearts were tied. White lightning zigzagged from the heavens, plunging, Striking the kites and riding smooth along The strings to heat the bayonets (still lunging). The troopers, deafened by the thunder’s gong— Two loopy plebs, two valentines for Britain (Too yearning-yarned)—received the bolt. So blessed By love of king and country, they were smitten With searing bouts of cardiac arrest. The tall one held the small one in his clutches, Their skeletons—charred black—exchanging tender touches. A raindrop fell on Henry. He came to. Nathanael shook his head and rubbed a knuckle: “I’ve never struck a man.” —“We all need new Experiences!” Ben lent a hand and chuckled. —“What happened to those soldiers?” —“A mishap,” Said Franklin. “Caught a thunderstorm. All clear Now [thumbing corpses taking a catnap]. Come on, grab Henry. Let’s get out of here.” Knox, sifting embers, found a piece of home: On Field Artillery. His last remaining tome. The setting sun reflected sparkling wells In Knox’s dewy eyes—a crystal ball Casting the past in flames with crimson spells— Then dusked his face in falling ash. The sprawl Of strollers lined the streets with basketfuls As neighbors filled the air with bells, bells, bells, Announcing closing time for bears and bulls Of commerce. Like a book that never sells, Knox shelved away his heart, where sorrow dwells, Repealing tolling—faintly knolling—mourning bells. . . Andrew Benson Brown has had poems and reviews published in a few journals. His epic-in-progress, Legends of Liberty, will chronicle the major events of the American Revolution if he lives to complete it. Though he writes history articles for American Essence magazine, he lists his primary occupation on official forms as ‘poet.’ He is, in other words, a vagabond. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 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The narration and video added to the enjoyment of this very clever piece. The thing I like best about the LOL series is how consistently good it is. It would be an ambitious undertaking to do your whole book like this. I think you should wait for AI to make cartoons out of words. That will probably be here next week… Reply ABB September 18, 2024 Thanks MP. Yes, I would like to video-ify the whole series eventually but it’s enormously time consuming. Think I just need to write it first mostly. Plus Open AI is supposed to release their video maker technology next year and that will make things a lot easier. Reply Michael Pietrack September 17, 2024 Also, I think all of our discussions and that video we watched about Wycliffe paid off. Not in the way I hoped, but nonetheless, it was good for something! Reply ABB September 18, 2024 who knows, you may rub off on me yet in ways you don’t realize. Reply Stephen M. Dickey September 17, 2024 Andrew, a couple of weeks ago I decided to reread volume 1 while simultaneously reading volume 2. Then this week gives me a triple dose. Since if possible I would rather listen to poetry (preferably recited by the author) than read it, your recording is right up my alley. First, each stanza has some little enjoyable hook in it, and second, the whole thing is consistently very entertaining. I find Franklin’s character to be a big part of the latter. If Pushkin wrote a novel in verse, you may be writing what seems like the first graphic novel in verse. Reply ABB September 18, 2024 Thanks Stephen, sounds like you’re taking on quite the project there. Your graphic novel comment gives me some good ideas about formatting. Blake was the first multimedia poet, but then he was also a great artist, unlike me. I won’t use AI to write poetry, but visualizing things is different. Reply James Sale September 18, 2024 I firmly insist that ABB is a mock-epic poet in the tradition of Lord Byron; others may disagree – but I have to say that in this wonderful extract the point and the stanza which begins, ‘Like when Hypatia, torn from off the wheels’, truly does achieve an epic effect. There are again so many brilliant things to note in this short extract that someday, someone is going to write a book on the whole of LoL. The ingenious rhyming persists: ‘sank in/Franklin’. The marvellous aphoristic quality shows no sign of abating: ‘Ebullience only goes so far when wit / Is absent’. And the narrative thrust and characterisations are simply superb: I did enjoy the electrocution of the two redcoats as disloyal as it may sound to my own country. We have had the highly successful pop group, ABBA, and perhaps now we should consider setting an alternative group: ABBAS, which of course stands for: the Andrew Benson Brown Appreciation Society … Reply ABB September 19, 2024 ABBAS—ha! I will leave you to head that one up, James. As president, you’ll get to wear a special hat and can come up with a secret sign by which entering members can identify themselves. Wonder what the average Brit would think of this, probably wouldn’t like it. Kind of like when the Mel Gibson movie ‘The Patriot’ came out and it got a lot of negative reviews on the other side of the Atlantic for the way it portrayed the Tarleton-inspired villain. Reply Joseph S. Salemi September 18, 2024 Once I started reading this, I couldn’t stop. The amazing picture of an 18th-century bookshop, the “ring-a-ling” as various customers enter, the different books for sale, the vicious and ignorant Redcoats, the allusions to the murder of Hypatia and the burning of the Alexandrian library, the almost surreal actions of Ben Franklin (the electricity guru), the survival of one book on “Field Artillery” that Knox picks up, with the unspoken suggestion of the major logistics feat he will later on accomplish in transporting artillery pieces to Boston… it all fits together seamlessly, as if in a dream. What an ambitious and imaginative piece of work! Reply ABB September 19, 2024 Thanks for the appreciative words, Joe. Going to take years to finish this thing, so hopefully I won’t fall victim to a freak accident. Reply Brian A. Yapko September 18, 2024 Andrew, this is a delight from start to finish — as is all of Legends of Liberty. You won my heart when you described Knox as a blend of Falstaff and Prospero. And having read both Pamela and Shamela your reference to Pamela particularly tickled me. As it happens, I just started volume II and recently finished Lightning Ben, so I feel fortunate to have the background and context of Ben Franklin as an electricity/lightning-bolt-wielding superhero. Your excerpt here is, of course, wildly entertaining as we would expect given your unique mash-up of serious and comic peppered with anachronisms and literary allusions. Because you use anachronisms freely, I’m not in the least troubled by an early date for metric measures or the arrival of pianos in America any more than I am about referencing E=mc2. You’ve created a universe in which such minutiae are best accepted as part of the fun. And poetry must not be overburdened by the accuracy police. I’ve written too much historical stuff of my own which, no doubt, would give a serious historian apoplexy. But I’m most struck by the sadly ironic horror of two redcoats torching a bookshop in which all of the contents represent British patrimony. It’s as if they were destroying their own heritage in their desire to assert power over the colonial “traitor.” I know Knox was a bookseller, but is there a historical incident on which this is based? Either way, it’s a very thought-provoking and distressing incident emblematic of some of the lunacies of war. Reply ABB September 19, 2024 Brian, Knox did have to abandon his bookstore, and the part about him looking out the window for his wife wondering if she’d been discovered was straight out of a biography I read about him. But the soldiers and the burning I just made up. Regarding the anachronisms, yes, there’s lots. And as far as outright fictions, Steuben never wrote a book on artillery. The book he was actually reading was by a guy named Muller. But since Steuben will be an important minor character later on I’m trying to plant the seed here. Several people have told me they think Ben Franklin is the best character, and they’re probably right. Got some really zany ideas for him later on. Reply Mary Gardner September 18, 2024 Bravo! Your details enable the reader to step into the scene. Andrew. I could hear the voices of the ladies and smell the books. The (anachronistic) rubber boots didn’t protect the redcoats from lightning, did they? Reply ABB September 20, 2024 Ha yes that was the idea, Mary. I do recall it is a myth that rubber—like rubber tires on your vehicle—protects you from lightning. Basically I just made that up to give some kind of semi-plausible excuse for why they didn’t get shocked the first time when electricity rippled through the cobblestones. I feel like the kind of non-fiction snob who loves reading the latest books about the Revolution would probably hate the inaccuracy of this thing. Reply Margaret Coats September 19, 2024 I read it! Brought back bookshop memories worldwide. These places are a genre in themselves. I was wondering why such an unflattering portrait of bookseller Knox, but I see how well it corresponds to a lot of body language. Reply ABB September 20, 2024 Thanks Margaret. Was the portrait of Knox unflattering? I mean, other than the fact that he weighed 280 lbs and there’s kind of a natural comedy there. In any case, he’ll be performing ultra-heroic feats in the next chapter so it shouldn’t come off that way then. Reply jd September 19, 2024 Very entertaining, ABB. And your reading is perfect. Reply ABB September 20, 2024 Thanks for watching, jd. Reply Adam Sedia September 22, 2024 I confess, I’ve been a latecomer to sitting down and reading these because of the commitment they require to appreciate fully. I think you’ve outdone yourself in this one. What strikes me most is the almost cinematic effect of continuous action, with an imagistic (dare I say almost cubist?) visual portrayal. Very engaging. Until I read James’s comment, I hadn’t drawn the connection to Byron, but I agree that your mock epic very much follows in the tradition of Byron. Reply George K. September 23, 2024 Very fun, and jealous of your YouTube skills! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Captcha loading...In order to pass the CAPTCHA please enable JavaScript. Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson September 17, 2024 There is so much knowledge and esoterica combined with localized language usage and accents, I found your massive feat demands careful reading and rereading to absorb all the magnificence of your historically oriented mock bio! I simply stand in awe! Reply
ABB September 18, 2024 One generation’s standard cultural references become the esoterica of today. I think the choicest books are books to be re-read, if it doesn’t sound too vain to include myself there. Hopefully the video helps clarify certain things. Reply
Michael Pietrack September 17, 2024 Very fun. The narration and video added to the enjoyment of this very clever piece. The thing I like best about the LOL series is how consistently good it is. It would be an ambitious undertaking to do your whole book like this. I think you should wait for AI to make cartoons out of words. That will probably be here next week… Reply
ABB September 18, 2024 Thanks MP. Yes, I would like to video-ify the whole series eventually but it’s enormously time consuming. Think I just need to write it first mostly. Plus Open AI is supposed to release their video maker technology next year and that will make things a lot easier. Reply
Michael Pietrack September 17, 2024 Also, I think all of our discussions and that video we watched about Wycliffe paid off. Not in the way I hoped, but nonetheless, it was good for something! Reply
Stephen M. Dickey September 17, 2024 Andrew, a couple of weeks ago I decided to reread volume 1 while simultaneously reading volume 2. Then this week gives me a triple dose. Since if possible I would rather listen to poetry (preferably recited by the author) than read it, your recording is right up my alley. First, each stanza has some little enjoyable hook in it, and second, the whole thing is consistently very entertaining. I find Franklin’s character to be a big part of the latter. If Pushkin wrote a novel in verse, you may be writing what seems like the first graphic novel in verse. Reply
ABB September 18, 2024 Thanks Stephen, sounds like you’re taking on quite the project there. Your graphic novel comment gives me some good ideas about formatting. Blake was the first multimedia poet, but then he was also a great artist, unlike me. I won’t use AI to write poetry, but visualizing things is different. Reply
James Sale September 18, 2024 I firmly insist that ABB is a mock-epic poet in the tradition of Lord Byron; others may disagree – but I have to say that in this wonderful extract the point and the stanza which begins, ‘Like when Hypatia, torn from off the wheels’, truly does achieve an epic effect. There are again so many brilliant things to note in this short extract that someday, someone is going to write a book on the whole of LoL. The ingenious rhyming persists: ‘sank in/Franklin’. The marvellous aphoristic quality shows no sign of abating: ‘Ebullience only goes so far when wit / Is absent’. And the narrative thrust and characterisations are simply superb: I did enjoy the electrocution of the two redcoats as disloyal as it may sound to my own country. We have had the highly successful pop group, ABBA, and perhaps now we should consider setting an alternative group: ABBAS, which of course stands for: the Andrew Benson Brown Appreciation Society … Reply
ABB September 19, 2024 ABBAS—ha! I will leave you to head that one up, James. As president, you’ll get to wear a special hat and can come up with a secret sign by which entering members can identify themselves. Wonder what the average Brit would think of this, probably wouldn’t like it. Kind of like when the Mel Gibson movie ‘The Patriot’ came out and it got a lot of negative reviews on the other side of the Atlantic for the way it portrayed the Tarleton-inspired villain. Reply
Joseph S. Salemi September 18, 2024 Once I started reading this, I couldn’t stop. The amazing picture of an 18th-century bookshop, the “ring-a-ling” as various customers enter, the different books for sale, the vicious and ignorant Redcoats, the allusions to the murder of Hypatia and the burning of the Alexandrian library, the almost surreal actions of Ben Franklin (the electricity guru), the survival of one book on “Field Artillery” that Knox picks up, with the unspoken suggestion of the major logistics feat he will later on accomplish in transporting artillery pieces to Boston… it all fits together seamlessly, as if in a dream. What an ambitious and imaginative piece of work! Reply
ABB September 19, 2024 Thanks for the appreciative words, Joe. Going to take years to finish this thing, so hopefully I won’t fall victim to a freak accident. Reply
Brian A. Yapko September 18, 2024 Andrew, this is a delight from start to finish — as is all of Legends of Liberty. You won my heart when you described Knox as a blend of Falstaff and Prospero. And having read both Pamela and Shamela your reference to Pamela particularly tickled me. As it happens, I just started volume II and recently finished Lightning Ben, so I feel fortunate to have the background and context of Ben Franklin as an electricity/lightning-bolt-wielding superhero. Your excerpt here is, of course, wildly entertaining as we would expect given your unique mash-up of serious and comic peppered with anachronisms and literary allusions. Because you use anachronisms freely, I’m not in the least troubled by an early date for metric measures or the arrival of pianos in America any more than I am about referencing E=mc2. You’ve created a universe in which such minutiae are best accepted as part of the fun. And poetry must not be overburdened by the accuracy police. I’ve written too much historical stuff of my own which, no doubt, would give a serious historian apoplexy. But I’m most struck by the sadly ironic horror of two redcoats torching a bookshop in which all of the contents represent British patrimony. It’s as if they were destroying their own heritage in their desire to assert power over the colonial “traitor.” I know Knox was a bookseller, but is there a historical incident on which this is based? Either way, it’s a very thought-provoking and distressing incident emblematic of some of the lunacies of war. Reply
ABB September 19, 2024 Brian, Knox did have to abandon his bookstore, and the part about him looking out the window for his wife wondering if she’d been discovered was straight out of a biography I read about him. But the soldiers and the burning I just made up. Regarding the anachronisms, yes, there’s lots. And as far as outright fictions, Steuben never wrote a book on artillery. The book he was actually reading was by a guy named Muller. But since Steuben will be an important minor character later on I’m trying to plant the seed here. Several people have told me they think Ben Franklin is the best character, and they’re probably right. Got some really zany ideas for him later on. Reply
Mary Gardner September 18, 2024 Bravo! Your details enable the reader to step into the scene. Andrew. I could hear the voices of the ladies and smell the books. The (anachronistic) rubber boots didn’t protect the redcoats from lightning, did they? Reply
ABB September 20, 2024 Ha yes that was the idea, Mary. I do recall it is a myth that rubber—like rubber tires on your vehicle—protects you from lightning. Basically I just made that up to give some kind of semi-plausible excuse for why they didn’t get shocked the first time when electricity rippled through the cobblestones. I feel like the kind of non-fiction snob who loves reading the latest books about the Revolution would probably hate the inaccuracy of this thing. Reply
Margaret Coats September 19, 2024 I read it! Brought back bookshop memories worldwide. These places are a genre in themselves. I was wondering why such an unflattering portrait of bookseller Knox, but I see how well it corresponds to a lot of body language. Reply
ABB September 20, 2024 Thanks Margaret. Was the portrait of Knox unflattering? I mean, other than the fact that he weighed 280 lbs and there’s kind of a natural comedy there. In any case, he’ll be performing ultra-heroic feats in the next chapter so it shouldn’t come off that way then. Reply
Adam Sedia September 22, 2024 I confess, I’ve been a latecomer to sitting down and reading these because of the commitment they require to appreciate fully. I think you’ve outdone yourself in this one. What strikes me most is the almost cinematic effect of continuous action, with an imagistic (dare I say almost cubist?) visual portrayal. Very engaging. Until I read James’s comment, I hadn’t drawn the connection to Byron, but I agree that your mock epic very much follows in the tradition of Byron. Reply