(anonymous)‘The Dying’: A Poem by T.M. Moore The Society September 24, 2024 Beauty, Poetry 7 Comments . The Dying It’s getting to be time again when all the leaves, their labors nearly done, prepare their legacy. We see them everywhere at work on this, the brilliant hues of fall announcing the new terms of each leaf’s call. And soon the trees will cast them off to spare their limbs and branches winter’s wear and tear, and leave the scattered leaves in cold death’s thrall. And yet we love this dying. And we take for granted the endowment it provides: fresh fodder to enrich the soil, the earth. For leaves give back what they consumed, and make a better world. And so, as each leaf glides in dying, it fulfills its holy worth. And what of us, whom life must soon cast off? What have we taken? And what will we leave behind? Will generations long hence know some good left at our dying? Do we scoff at such a notion? Or do we believe that our bequest can help a new leaf grow? . . T. M. Moore makes his home in Champlain Valley of Vermont. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. CODEC Stories:Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) 7 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson September 24, 2024 Leaves in the long run are highly useful to the soil for things such as allowing more air to help water and nutrients get to the roots. They are a great admixture for compost piles. It takes a while (up to a year), as I understand it, for the microorganisms to break leaves down and provide the nitrogen component. You ask the perfect questions and often the legacies we leave come to fruition later on, as well. Reply Cynthia Erlandson September 24, 2024 I love the thought that “leaves give back what they consumed.” A lovely meditation on autumn, a season that I think is supposed to remind us of our imminent death, and that there can be something beautiful in it. Reply Paul Freeman September 24, 2024 I love the cyclical aspect to this poem and that we all feed the leaves. Did you think about using ‘sacred’ instead of ‘holy’. ‘Sacred’ tends to imply something holy and ancient, I feel. I also like the idea of being leaf food rather than worm food. Thanks for the read, TM. Reply Yael September 24, 2024 This poem is a lovely fall meditation. I agree with Paul Freeman that “sacred” would be a better fit than “holy”, because the word holy pertains to God and the worship of God, as far as I understand. Reply C,B. Anderson September 24, 2024 One’s appreciation of leaves might depend on who must do the raking. My son-in-law asks his neighbor to dump the leaves collected on the lawn next door onto his own lawn, where he runs over them with his John Deere mower to enrich the lawn he maintains. Wherever they fall, leaves should never be wasted — they are a gift from heaven. Reply Shamik Banerjee September 25, 2024 Using autumn’s leaves as a metaphor to question the deeds of the current generation and what it will leave behind for the ones yet to arrive is an outstanding concept to ponder upon! Thanks for the read, Mr. Moore. Reply T. M. September 25, 2024 All y’all: Thanks for the reflections and comments. I find that thinking about a single leaf clarifies and enriches my own calling and role in this world. I hope these several poems communicate some sense of that and of my gratitude to God to be a leaf in the forest of His faithful ones, to know, love, and serve Him in all I do. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Captcha loading...In order to pass the CAPTCHA please enable JavaScript. Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson September 24, 2024 Leaves in the long run are highly useful to the soil for things such as allowing more air to help water and nutrients get to the roots. They are a great admixture for compost piles. It takes a while (up to a year), as I understand it, for the microorganisms to break leaves down and provide the nitrogen component. You ask the perfect questions and often the legacies we leave come to fruition later on, as well. Reply
Cynthia Erlandson September 24, 2024 I love the thought that “leaves give back what they consumed.” A lovely meditation on autumn, a season that I think is supposed to remind us of our imminent death, and that there can be something beautiful in it. Reply
Paul Freeman September 24, 2024 I love the cyclical aspect to this poem and that we all feed the leaves. Did you think about using ‘sacred’ instead of ‘holy’. ‘Sacred’ tends to imply something holy and ancient, I feel. I also like the idea of being leaf food rather than worm food. Thanks for the read, TM. Reply
Yael September 24, 2024 This poem is a lovely fall meditation. I agree with Paul Freeman that “sacred” would be a better fit than “holy”, because the word holy pertains to God and the worship of God, as far as I understand. Reply
C,B. Anderson September 24, 2024 One’s appreciation of leaves might depend on who must do the raking. My son-in-law asks his neighbor to dump the leaves collected on the lawn next door onto his own lawn, where he runs over them with his John Deere mower to enrich the lawn he maintains. Wherever they fall, leaves should never be wasted — they are a gift from heaven. Reply
Shamik Banerjee September 25, 2024 Using autumn’s leaves as a metaphor to question the deeds of the current generation and what it will leave behind for the ones yet to arrive is an outstanding concept to ponder upon! Thanks for the read, Mr. Moore. Reply
T. M. September 25, 2024 All y’all: Thanks for the reflections and comments. I find that thinking about a single leaf clarifies and enriches my own calling and role in this world. I hope these several poems communicate some sense of that and of my gratitude to God to be a leaf in the forest of His faithful ones, to know, love, and serve Him in all I do. Reply