"Tintern Abbey" by Hamandista‘Roofless Church’: A Poem by Peter Venable The Society December 3, 2024 Beauty, Poetry 6 Comments . Roofless Church The stone-hewn walls, No window sash. No pews, no halls. Burnt logs, damp ash. The roof, vanished. No organ flues. Shaped block, granite, And endless view. Above, hawks soar. No bells to chime. No wooden floors. The rasp of time. No stained-glass panes. A Celtic cross. Stony door frames. Graves thatched with moss. Inside, packed sod Where tourists tramped. Can we see God, where hikers camped? This silent space. Cathedral bare. This sacred place In awe we stare. A sapphire sky. Holy. Austere. Time trudges by. We shall dwell here. . . Peter Venable has been writing poetry for 50 years. He has been published in Windhover, Third Wednesday, Time of Singing, The Merton Seasonal, American Vendantist, The Anglican Theological Review, and others. He is a member of the Winston Salem Writers. On the whimsical side, he has been published in Bluepepper, Parody, Laughing Dog, The Asses of Parnassus, and Lighten Up Online (e. g. # 48) NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 6 Responses jd December 3, 2024 Love this poem with its sparse store of words. The few say so much. Reply Paul Freeman December 3, 2024 A clear, profound image produced with a few staccato words. Great stuff, Peter. Reply Danae Garriga December 3, 2024 Great poem! Alludes to the fact that places are somehow “alive” even after a building may be long gone, the events that happened there live on forever. Especially one used for worship! Reply Peter Venable December 4, 2024 Thanks. Odd how some poems just surge. Key On! Reply Roy Eugene Peterson December 4, 2024 Peter, this is a wonderful ode to the spirit that we can still feel present in a place where a congregation once worshipped. Thank you for memorializing this one that must have been special. Reply Cynthia Erlandson December 6, 2024 What an amazingly compact and beautiful word painting! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Paul Freeman December 3, 2024 A clear, profound image produced with a few staccato words. Great stuff, Peter. Reply
Danae Garriga December 3, 2024 Great poem! Alludes to the fact that places are somehow “alive” even after a building may be long gone, the events that happened there live on forever. Especially one used for worship! Reply
Roy Eugene Peterson December 4, 2024 Peter, this is a wonderful ode to the spirit that we can still feel present in a place where a congregation once worshipped. Thank you for memorializing this one that must have been special. Reply