carolers in a Christmas market (Dan Gaken)‘A Christmas Eve Sestina’ by Mary Gardner The Society December 24, 2024 Beauty, Poetry, Sestina 8 Comments . A Christmas Eve Sestina “He who sings prays twice.” —Saint Augustine The vagabond had too much Christmas cheer. He doesn’t notice that the air is cold Although his clothes are unseasonably light. A crowd of carolers comes by to sing Of Good King Wenceslaus, The First Noel. Oh, Sir, come hither, take this jacket, pray! For all unfortunate, the voices pray (Some silently), exhibiting good cheer And kindness all year long, not just Noel. Their hearts are warm against the season’s cold. Infectious joy evinces as they sing To that poor soul beneath the dim street light. Though tipsy, he feels buoyant and light. He, too, knows God and silently does pray As he with pleasure listens to them sing Those songs imparting gaiety and cheer. No way his heart could feel alone and cold On this, the night before the great Noel. He’ll worship at a church on this Noel, He’ll sober up and feel all fine and light —Some whiskey first, to drink away a cold. Tomorrow, as in boyhood, he should pray For one kind girl who showed him warmth and cheer, Gave him the coat, continuing to sing. He robbed a store. His partners didn’t sing; He freely walks about on this Noel. Eluding cops brings him contemptuous cheer. He pulls a smoke, asks someone for a light, Says thank-you, thinks for them he ought to pray; Alert now, starts to feel December’s cold. This felon, heart not fully hard and cold, Soon with the carolers begins to sing And singing Christian hymns is twice to pray. He’s not the embodiment of Noel, He knows, but may approach the One True Light, Since even sinners for salvation cheer. In evening cold, this night before Noel, Some carolers sing neath a city light And, heartfelt, pray for all to know God’s cheer. . . Mary Gardner is a poet living in Florida. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 8 Responses Margaret Coats December 24, 2024 A lovely sestina, Mary. I’m particularly impressed with your use of the endwords, recognizing and employing the varied senses of each. As I’m sure you wish, your heartwarming story encourages fervent prayer for “felon hearts not fully hard and cold” on “this night before Noel.” Reply Mary Gardner December 24, 2024 Thank you, Margaret. Sestinas are ideal for poets who love words and their meanings. You are exactly right that the intention of this poem is to encourage prayers for the lost and waffling. Reply Jeffrey Essmann December 24, 2024 Thanks so much for this. It’s beautiful. Merry Christmas! Reply Mary Gardner December 24, 2024 Merry Christmas to you, Jeffrey! I’m happy you liked it. Reply Gigi Ryan December 24, 2024 Dear Mary, I love this poem on many levels – your theme of, “He who sings prays twice,” the beautiful flow of this poem, the clever sestina. But even more I love the mixture of the holy and the common – the beauty of the carolers mixed intertwined with the robber. Because, indeed, it is for the common, the sinner, that this season exits. Thank you and Merry Christmas. Gigi Reply Mary Gardner December 24, 2024 Thank you for the lovely words, Gigi. Blessed Christmas to you. Reply Paul Freeman December 25, 2024 You hit all the right buttons with this one, Mary. I was reminded of Hans Anderson’s classic, The Little Match Girl. Reply Mary Gardner December 25, 2024 Thank you, Paul. Both the match girl and the drunkard are deeper characters than their observers can discern. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Margaret Coats December 24, 2024 A lovely sestina, Mary. I’m particularly impressed with your use of the endwords, recognizing and employing the varied senses of each. As I’m sure you wish, your heartwarming story encourages fervent prayer for “felon hearts not fully hard and cold” on “this night before Noel.” Reply
Mary Gardner December 24, 2024 Thank you, Margaret. Sestinas are ideal for poets who love words and their meanings. You are exactly right that the intention of this poem is to encourage prayers for the lost and waffling. Reply
Gigi Ryan December 24, 2024 Dear Mary, I love this poem on many levels – your theme of, “He who sings prays twice,” the beautiful flow of this poem, the clever sestina. But even more I love the mixture of the holy and the common – the beauty of the carolers mixed intertwined with the robber. Because, indeed, it is for the common, the sinner, that this season exits. Thank you and Merry Christmas. Gigi Reply
Paul Freeman December 25, 2024 You hit all the right buttons with this one, Mary. I was reminded of Hans Anderson’s classic, The Little Match Girl. Reply
Mary Gardner December 25, 2024 Thank you, Paul. Both the match girl and the drunkard are deeper characters than their observers can discern. Reply