"King David in Prayer" by Pieter de Grebber‘A Simple Prayer’ and Other Poetry by Marc Gilbert The Society December 14, 2024 Beauty, Poetry 8 Comments . A Simple Prayer Crown my head in gray, dear Lord, __And bless my tangled tongue. Return to me the mystery __I knew when I was young. Before the echoed scorn of cynics, __Before the sophist’s sneers Condemned and then converted me __And ground me in the gears Of mundane acquisition’s clock. __Behold the jester’s prize: A stick with hanging golden carrot __And blinders for the eyes That once looked round in youthful wonder __At all Your hands had made, Dimmed by fleeting glimmers sparked __By treasures doomed to fade. Restore to me the power I had __To see with childlike grace, To marvel at the morning sun __And trace the stars in space. Lift the veil of reason’s pride __Let awe be my reward, And let me walk in mystery, __With trust in You, my Lord. . . Well Into Dusk Well into dusk I came upon this spring once more, I know, because I’ve passed this way a time before. It is the damnedest thing that thirst itself compelled my steps to stray. The day’s distractions either work or play, the wayside stops, the golden dead-end roads, I sought for shelter when the skies turned grey and chose to bide in an unfit abode. Time dulls the senses and the years erode the sting of hunger and the pain of thirst. Avoiding water where I knew it flowed I hid away from what I sought at first. Well into dusk I come upon this spring and dare to drink; it is the damnedest thing. . . Marc Gilbert manages a poetry board called The Tangled Branch. His poems have appeared in a number of journals over the years, including The Lyric, Mind in Motion, Riverrun, and The Avalon Literary Review. He designs software and creates online courses in computer programming and game development, and lives in Wakefield, Michigan. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. 8 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson December 14, 2024 These two lamentations of the discrepancy between youthful faith, trust, desires compared with those of a life lived with seeming regrets is all too familiar as reflected in your well-done melancholy poems. Reply Michael Pietrack December 14, 2024 The first poem, which was moving, reminded me of Mark 10:15. Reply jd December 15, 2024 Both are lovely. Thank you. Reply Marc Gilbert December 16, 2024 Thank you for the kind comments. Marc Reply Rachel Lott December 16, 2024 “Crown my head in gray, dear Lord, And bless my tangled tongue. Return to me the mystery I knew when I was young.” I did a double-take while reading this. It reminds me so strongly of GK Chesterton. Reply Marc Gilbert December 17, 2024 Thank you, Rachel. I can only wish I could write like Chesterton. Reply Daniel Tuton December 17, 2024 Marc, these are beautiful. Recovery of the simple, childlike joy of attention and appreciation (and wonder!) have been modest goals of mine in my retirement, and so far I think the slowing down process is beginning to work its magic. Reply Marc Gilbert December 19, 2024 Thank you, Daniel. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson December 14, 2024 These two lamentations of the discrepancy between youthful faith, trust, desires compared with those of a life lived with seeming regrets is all too familiar as reflected in your well-done melancholy poems. Reply
Michael Pietrack December 14, 2024 The first poem, which was moving, reminded me of Mark 10:15. Reply
Rachel Lott December 16, 2024 “Crown my head in gray, dear Lord, And bless my tangled tongue. Return to me the mystery I knew when I was young.” I did a double-take while reading this. It reminds me so strongly of GK Chesterton. Reply
Marc Gilbert December 17, 2024 Thank you, Rachel. I can only wish I could write like Chesterton. Reply
Daniel Tuton December 17, 2024 Marc, these are beautiful. Recovery of the simple, childlike joy of attention and appreciation (and wonder!) have been modest goals of mine in my retirement, and so far I think the slowing down process is beginning to work its magic. Reply