"Orpheus and Eurydice" by Poynter‘To Her Ghost: a Sequence from Orpheus Looks Back’: Poetry by David J. Rothman The Society January 21, 2025 Love Poems, Poetry 4 Comments . To Her Ghost: a Sequence from Orpheus Looks Back —in memoriam Emily Desire Gaynor Rothman, 1964-2020 . 1. Breaking Open A sonnet tells the lover’s tale becauseIt is the lover’s sonnet. Lovers loveTo talk about themselves, making what wasSupposed to be a labor of their loveInto an avatar of self-regard:“Oh look how I have loved and lost. Come see.She’s dead and I am suffering. It’s hard.Let me tell you what she meant…to me.”Now, sonnet, break: her bunions; dancer’s gait;One breast a little larger than the other;Her little cat-like growl to indicateSarcastic irritation; her rare, deep laugh.That’s it! Let more in. Let it in. A start.And now, in breaking open: break, heart. . 2. The Ratios of Chance “Ducunt volentem fata, nolentem trahunt.” —Seneca Funny to run into you again.Want to take a run? The snow is great…I’d love to, but we’re eating lunch and thenI have to head back home. I can’t be late…Too bad. Where’s home?New York.No kidding! MeToo…Where?Downtown.Me too.That’s funny. Where?West Village.Seriously? That’s got to beA sign.[cute laugh]Charles Street.What? I live there! Perhaps it was a sign. Who knows how theseThings work, or why. A half a block. Of courseI got her number and went over. SeizeThe day! That’s all I thought. And yet a forceFar greater than the ratios of chanceSeemed interested. Fate? Well, at least romance. . 3. Something To Do What a day. The sun is out, the tempIs perfect. Bees work thoughtfully amongThe lavender. The rains and cool nights temptThe pear tree to go big. The vine is hungWith thousands of green clusters that show promise.It’s a Monday in late June and rightOn schedule garbage trucks descend upon us.The cats lay plans for each songbird in flight.The world is full of work. It doesn’t matterIf it’s paid or not, it’s useful. Things are growing.People have their duties and they scatterTo them. Someone has to do the mowing.Say something. I loved doing things for you.Isn’t there anything that I can do? . 4. Home, No More Home To Me Born with an inexpressible hungerInto families where troubled fathersWere passed down through hard decades that were longerThan the time we could perceive, by othersWho somehow could not, did not want to breakThrough history to the living warmth of touch,We lived as large as we could in the wakeOf loss, and grew into the role of so muchAnd such great passion as passion discovers:To climb, to learn, to sing, and make the lifeOf people who, to live, must become lovers.Then, in our human flaws, I and my wifeBrought sons into the world and did our bestTo help them fledge from a more happy nest. . 5. To Her Ghost I don’t think our life was unusual.Or, if it was, that’s not what will have mattered.The world is big and with big things is full,And in the end each of us will be shattered.Last night, no doubt like many, first I readA bit, then watched some vids, done with my labors.I saw one man blow off another’s headThen rob his store. One guy killed his neighbors.It’s just what showed up on my phone. I guessThat’s how we live today, force-fed real violence,Rough sex, the cult of greed. What can we blessIn this sad state? What is there left but silence?I drifted off. But this is also true.I dreamed the memory of our love. Of you. . . When young, David J. Rothman had the good fortune to study with Czesław Miłosz, Derek Walcott, Seamus Heaney, Mark Strand and Robert Fitzgerald. His most recent books are a textbook, Learning the Secrets of English Verse (Springer 2022), co-authored with Susan Spear, and My Brother’s Keeper (Lithic 2019), a Finalist for the Colorado Book Award in poetry. In 2019 he won a Pushcart Prize for the poem “Kernels,” which originally appeared in The New Criterion. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Trending now: 4 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson January 21, 2025 These precious poems of remembrance are somber soliloquies that themselves were a labor of love and fond memories. They flowed and rhymed so beautifully in appealing to the senses of the reader with captivating words of endearment. Thank you for sharing them with us. Reply C.B. Anderson January 21, 2025 If you are who I think you are, David, then I am not surprised. This sequence was terrific, and the individual poems are worthy additions to the English canon. They were touched with classic strokes and with the hyper=modern at the same time. I could read such poems every day for breakfast, and not feel hungry till suppertime. Reply Margaret Coats January 24, 2025 This is an impressive post-modern sequence of genuine sonnets in the Petrarchan mode. The title suggests they are selected from a larger work, but the non-narrative effect tightly reproduces some canzoniere commonplaces. “Breaking Open,” in an original manner, introduces the lover’s writings as both authentic (speaking of true love) and “scattered” (Petrarch’s Rime sparse). “The Ratios of Chance” is an innamoramento, describing the first meeting when the lover is captivated. Conventionally, this happens through sight alone, and for Petrarch, the lady speaks words intelligible to him only in a dream after she has died. Here it all happens through conversation presented in short lines, though the colloquy makes up one quatrain of a formal sonnet. The “chanciness” preserves the conventional idea of a fated meeting, as does the epigraph. “Something To Do” is one of those “uncertain” poems that could take place before or after the lady’s death, while hinting at the lover’s premonitions or regrets. “Home” is a retrospective of both the lover’s life with his wife and his own upbringing. As do several of Petrarch’s sonnets, it serves to sketch the lover’s personality more fully. “To Her Ghost” is a typical sonnet “in morte” with the lover objecting to the world proceeding as usual with his lady no longer present. He is more sensitive to its faults and finds consolation only in memory. These are masterfully done, David, in your own expert style but with recognizable reference to literary love conventions, whether you thought explicitly of Petrarch as I do, or not. Reply Dan Pugh January 25, 2025 These poems are from the heart – and from the Muse. As a retired clinical psychiatrist I was particularly struck by “Home, No More Home to Me” The narrator seems to be a special kind of hero that I call a chain-breaker. In some families the disfiguring hang-ups of each generation disfigure the next in the same way – e.g. relentless terrorizing degrading child-abuse mixed with genuine parental love. A. E. Houseman characterized these cycles thus: “Souls undone, undoing others – long time since the tale began …” As a therapist I never in my 50 years of practice led a patient to be a chain-breaker, but I’ve had patients who had previously done it on their own. They’d spotted their intergenerational chain when they were young, and had resolved to break it and had succeeded in rescuing their own children and posterity from the family curse. They were seeing me later in their life about some unrelated condition. Still, inside myself I had to salute the heroism of their backstory. There are many psychiatric patients who ain’t sissies. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson January 21, 2025 These precious poems of remembrance are somber soliloquies that themselves were a labor of love and fond memories. They flowed and rhymed so beautifully in appealing to the senses of the reader with captivating words of endearment. Thank you for sharing them with us. Reply
C.B. Anderson January 21, 2025 If you are who I think you are, David, then I am not surprised. This sequence was terrific, and the individual poems are worthy additions to the English canon. They were touched with classic strokes and with the hyper=modern at the same time. I could read such poems every day for breakfast, and not feel hungry till suppertime. Reply
Margaret Coats January 24, 2025 This is an impressive post-modern sequence of genuine sonnets in the Petrarchan mode. The title suggests they are selected from a larger work, but the non-narrative effect tightly reproduces some canzoniere commonplaces. “Breaking Open,” in an original manner, introduces the lover’s writings as both authentic (speaking of true love) and “scattered” (Petrarch’s Rime sparse). “The Ratios of Chance” is an innamoramento, describing the first meeting when the lover is captivated. Conventionally, this happens through sight alone, and for Petrarch, the lady speaks words intelligible to him only in a dream after she has died. Here it all happens through conversation presented in short lines, though the colloquy makes up one quatrain of a formal sonnet. The “chanciness” preserves the conventional idea of a fated meeting, as does the epigraph. “Something To Do” is one of those “uncertain” poems that could take place before or after the lady’s death, while hinting at the lover’s premonitions or regrets. “Home” is a retrospective of both the lover’s life with his wife and his own upbringing. As do several of Petrarch’s sonnets, it serves to sketch the lover’s personality more fully. “To Her Ghost” is a typical sonnet “in morte” with the lover objecting to the world proceeding as usual with his lady no longer present. He is more sensitive to its faults and finds consolation only in memory. These are masterfully done, David, in your own expert style but with recognizable reference to literary love conventions, whether you thought explicitly of Petrarch as I do, or not. Reply
Dan Pugh January 25, 2025 These poems are from the heart – and from the Muse. As a retired clinical psychiatrist I was particularly struck by “Home, No More Home to Me” The narrator seems to be a special kind of hero that I call a chain-breaker. In some families the disfiguring hang-ups of each generation disfigure the next in the same way – e.g. relentless terrorizing degrading child-abuse mixed with genuine parental love. A. E. Houseman characterized these cycles thus: “Souls undone, undoing others – long time since the tale began …” As a therapist I never in my 50 years of practice led a patient to be a chain-breaker, but I’ve had patients who had previously done it on their own. They’d spotted their intergenerational chain when they were young, and had resolved to break it and had succeeded in rescuing their own children and posterity from the family curse. They were seeing me later in their life about some unrelated condition. Still, inside myself I had to salute the heroism of their backstory. There are many psychiatric patients who ain’t sissies. Reply