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The Bristlecone Pine

For centuries, the stalwart pine has stood
__in this unwonted spot.
Its shallow roots and resinous hard wood
__shield it from drought and rot.
__Thin soil, high winds, cold air:
it thrives where other living things cannot.
__Dear tree, please hear my prayer.
__Lend me your purple cone
to plant inside my heart, its chambers bare,
__arteries hard as bone.
__For from your potent seed,
that germinates on bleak and barren stone,
__fresh hope will sprout. Indeed,
to love’s avowals I’d once again accede.

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Poet’s Note: I visited the Ancient Bristlecone Pine Forest in the White Mountains in California some 20 years ago. Bristlecone pines are the longest living non-clonal organisms on earth and can live thousands of years.

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Addiction

—a pantoum

Opiates steal a naïve soul.
At first the drug’s a kindly friend.
The mind expands, a joyous whole,
anguish and pain draw near their end.

At first the drug’s a kindly friend.
All tarnished edges glitter gold,
anguish and pain draw near their end.
Alas, a baleful tone takes hold.

All tarnished edges glitter gold.
Bright feelings sprout new wings to fly.
Alas, a baleful tone takes hold,
a downdraft batters from on high.

Bright feelings sprout new wings to fly.
A fledgling soars, but can’t rebound;
a downdraft batters from on high.
It crashes hard, dies on the ground.

A fledgling soars, but can’t rebound.
Though wings expand, a joyous whole,
it crashes hard, dies on the ground.
Opiates steal both mind and soul.

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Mary Jane Myers resides in Springfield, Illinois. She is a retired JD/CPA tax specialist. Her debut short story collection Curious Affairs was published by Paul Dry Books in 2018.

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4 Responses

  1. Roy Eugene Peterson

    “The Bristlecone Pine” is a creative concept of transplanting one of the cones into the heart for restoration, especially with the thought of loving once again.
    “Addiction” treats one of the problems of modern medical prescriptions that takes away pain and suffering but then becomes the problem itself. Both flow nicely and are very well conceived.

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  2. Margaret Coats

    Well, Mary Jane, I’ve heard you can buy bristlecone pine cones, but especially after the cute baby stage when they’re entirely purple, one of them would probably scratch severe damage into a human heart. Still, there must have been worse reasons for trying plant medicinals. Your poem lays out those reasons in good contrast to the bleakest, hardest heart disease–physical and emotional! The touch of an extra syllable in your final line suggests sprouting induced by “love’s avowals.”

    “Addiction” makes good use of the lines from a pantoum’s first stanza repeated in the last. In this poem, the fledgling and the battering downdraft represent the natural outdoor images brought in to develop your description of the effect of opioid addiction. This is an excellent way to depict the baleful changes from initial use to final results all too likely even when the drugs are prescribed and used under supervision. I also appreciate the middle warning sign of “tarnished edges glitter gold.” Nicely thought out!

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  3. Cynthia L Erlandson

    “The Bristlecone Pine” is a wonderful extended metaphor. And I like the way you’ve used meter: sometimes five meters, sometimes three.

    The pantoum form, with its pattern of repetitions, seems especially suited to “Addiction”, perhaps because the ideas that need to be emphasized. Your allusion to the proverb “All that glitters is not gold” makes for great imagery and insight.

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  4. Cheryl A Corey

    The Bristlecone pine – is that the one which releases its seeds when affected by fire?

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