Painting by David Caspar Friedrich‘Against All Earthly Fire’: A Poem by Leland James The Society December 17, 2023 Beauty, Poetry 12 Comments . Against All Earthly Fire “Our earthly fire … no matter how fierce or widespread it may be is always of limited extent.” —A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man, James Joyce A checkered board in frozen mates, gray stones —seen from the hills that rise above the town— castles, infrequent knights among the pawns moonlit in shadows cast on frozen ground. Come near, the poet walks among the graves: end notes in marble etched, traces grown faint of mortal reigns; above the graves, a rage, a groan, a last embrace of earth’s heartache asking the overarching question echoed in dove’s lament beyond the iron gate— Stillness descends. A sudden comfort of snow recasts the checkered plat, the mortal fate. The stones, in white, redress earthly desire, a field of shields rising against the fire. . . Leland James is the author of six poetry collections, four children’s books in verse, and a book on creative writing and poetry craft. He has published over three hundred poems worldwide including The Lyric, Rattle, London Magazine, The South Carolina Review, The Spoon River Poetry Review, New Millennium Writings, The American Poetry Review, The Haiku Quarterly, The American Cowboy, and The Ekphrastic Review. He was the winner of the Aesthetica Creative Writing Award and has won or received honors in many other competitions, both in the USA and Europe. www.lelandjamespoet.com & https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/leland-james NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. Trending now: 12 Responses Cheryl Corey December 17, 2023 A stark reminder of our mortality. My favorite phrasing here is “end notes in marble etched, traces grown faint of mortal reigns”. Reply Paul A. Freeman December 17, 2023 Some great imagery in this piece slowly build up a vivid picture. My fave quote is exactly the same as Cheryl’s. Thanks for the read, Leland. Reply Joshua C. Frank December 17, 2023 I agree with Paul’s comment about the imagery. Well done! Reply Monika Cooper December 18, 2023 Moonlit cemetery as chessboard, ooh! I especially love the surprise of the closing couplet and the last line – eerily valiantly beautiful. The rhymes fall into exactness at the end, as a gate clicks shut. Reply Leland James December 18, 2023 What readers you all are. Thanks. Makes me want to be a poet. Reply Drilon Bajrami December 18, 2023 The first quatrain painted a beautifully vivid picture of the scene therein. I can also feel the tension in the poem building up until the final couplet and what a finish the couplet is (even further powered by the preceding lines of the comfort of snow), it ties in all the previous lines into two concise and powerful ones. Masterfully written poem, Leland. Reply Paul Erlandson December 19, 2023 I had meant to comment earlier but forgot. I really, really like this poem, Leland!! Reply Cynthia Erlandson December 19, 2023 This is intensely beautiful! Reply David Hollywood December 20, 2023 This wonderful poem creates and captures such strong emotional imagery. Many thanks Reply Margaret Coats December 20, 2023 Sophisticated sonnet, Leland, with Joyce’s “earthly fire” as subject, a graveyard as the setting, chess as a source of images, and “the poet” as observer. The snow does indeed recast the scene against the fire, and to good effect, with those shields at first unseen. Reply Susan Jarvis Bryant December 22, 2023 I like the spooky beauty of this sonnet and the striking wonder of the closing line, “a field of shields rising against the fire” – it’s magnificent! Reply Leland James December 22, 2023 Another thank you for the kind comments, as above. It is one of the things that SCPs does that is rare. Feedback from readers. This happens once in a while in other venues. But nothing like here. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Cheryl Corey December 17, 2023 A stark reminder of our mortality. My favorite phrasing here is “end notes in marble etched, traces grown faint of mortal reigns”. Reply
Paul A. Freeman December 17, 2023 Some great imagery in this piece slowly build up a vivid picture. My fave quote is exactly the same as Cheryl’s. Thanks for the read, Leland. Reply
Monika Cooper December 18, 2023 Moonlit cemetery as chessboard, ooh! I especially love the surprise of the closing couplet and the last line – eerily valiantly beautiful. The rhymes fall into exactness at the end, as a gate clicks shut. Reply
Drilon Bajrami December 18, 2023 The first quatrain painted a beautifully vivid picture of the scene therein. I can also feel the tension in the poem building up until the final couplet and what a finish the couplet is (even further powered by the preceding lines of the comfort of snow), it ties in all the previous lines into two concise and powerful ones. Masterfully written poem, Leland. Reply
Paul Erlandson December 19, 2023 I had meant to comment earlier but forgot. I really, really like this poem, Leland!! Reply
David Hollywood December 20, 2023 This wonderful poem creates and captures such strong emotional imagery. Many thanks Reply
Margaret Coats December 20, 2023 Sophisticated sonnet, Leland, with Joyce’s “earthly fire” as subject, a graveyard as the setting, chess as a source of images, and “the poet” as observer. The snow does indeed recast the scene against the fire, and to good effect, with those shields at first unseen. Reply
Susan Jarvis Bryant December 22, 2023 I like the spooky beauty of this sonnet and the striking wonder of the closing line, “a field of shields rising against the fire” – it’s magnificent! Reply
Leland James December 22, 2023 Another thank you for the kind comments, as above. It is one of the things that SCPs does that is rare. Feedback from readers. This happens once in a while in other venues. But nothing like here. Reply