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Of Elizabeth Bishop

Ms. Bishop is one able–eyed observer;
her vision is acute, that’s plain to see.
Staring at her, I doubt I could unnerve her,
though from the page she sometimes unnerves me.
The variations she can ring on lines
that reach their end in (word, not fact!) “disaster,”
wherein her art so eminently shines,
show me I’m in the presence of a master.
She gives herself to utmost concentration,
a wonder weaver wondering at the world.
Nothing she lights on brooks her reservation:
through her clear gaze full–textured life’s unfurled.
My breath is caught, my ear too; but my time
with her I love more when she deigns to rhyme.

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Tribute to Roethke

—his “Death Piece” parodied

Dense forest stands where sunlit spots
_Had breathed with buttercup.
The homestead of ten thousand thoughts
_Lies shaded now, locked up.

Ideas suffused with energy
_Ran races round this place,
Where spiders’ dust–bedecked debris
_Forms leaden branches’ lace.

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Julian D. Woodruff writes poetry and short fiction for children and adults. He recently finished 2020-2021, a poetry collection. A selection of his work can be read at Parody Poetry, Lighten Up Online, Carmina Magazine, and Reedsy.


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One Response

  1. Margaret Coats

    Yes, Julian, Elizabeth Bishop is an unnerving observer, and one who reserves wonders for concentrated effect. In other words, you’ve chosen your words well. And I agree about the effect of rhyme ringing through some lovelier variations of hers.

    I find your “parody” of Roethke a little more pleasant to read than his original. Maybe nature has decomposed since he wrote–but theme and effect are recognizable.

    Two good pictures of poets. I wonder whether Roethke was having a premonition of his unexpected death. But death poems represent a genre anyone can take up at any time–or many times. Just think of Emily Dickinson!

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