photo of strong winds (NCDOTcommunications)Hurricane Poems: ‘The Genesis Wind’ and Other Poetry by Brian Yapko The Society May 25, 2025 Beauty, Culture, Poetry, Rondeau Redoublé 3 Comments . The Genesis Wind —written in the wake of Hurricane Milton I close my eyes to better gauge the gusting wind. It howls and tantrums hard against the metal shutters And bends the flailing palms and scrub oaks. Then I find It deadens into ghastly silence. My heart flutters Within my trembling chest. The Eye’s arrived at last— That vast negation, pregnant with harsh devastation. I wish it could announce to me which wounds are past— What it has spared, what’s yet consigned to condemnation. The Eye! The dreaded Eye! The cold heart of the gale Which augurs windswept agony through Nature’s torment, Which ‘spite its acid calm should fulminate and rail… But it brings deadly silence—dangerously dormant. Enough, I cry! Before I lose my mind, resume Your fierce jihad of diabolic ruination! Its dead calm deepens. Will this house become my tomb? Or could this baleful quietude bespeak salvation? I wait. The violent winds shall all-too-soon return. Unbidden I recall a time when I was eight And played beneath a churning sky without concern As I watched massive cloud on cloud accumulate. The winds picked up. I waved my arms like a propeller! But then my parents screamed that I must run inside; A siren blared. They yanked me in and down the cellar And tried to lock out Death. I grew so scared I cried. This grim-tense quiet now is what I heard back then When voices bleakly rasped about tornadic might Through mustard-yellow skies and pounding hail. And when The danger passed I watched my mother sob from fright. I haven’t thought about that storm in many years Where solid trees had been uprooted, roofs destroyed From winds so focused that it seemed they cut like shears And left a trail of ruins and a weeping void. But now I live in Florida. Yes, I’ve grown old, And hurricanes are just a part of tropic life— The cost of dwelling where it seldom gets too cold; The price of giving up the bleed of urban strife… But wait! The Eye is passed. I hear the winds resume— A growing, rumbling roar with near atomic force. The County sends a text: Seek out an inner room For shelter till the cyclone winds have run their course. The world stands on a razor’s edge. I look for signs And hear the windows quake. I pray the roof will hold. I hear explosions from the nearby power lines. I scarcely breathe with every jagged minute tolled And when I think it’s peaked the tempest gets still worse. I fear the kamikaze wind will heave the sea Into the streets. A kraken wreaks Poseidon’s curse! The lights go dark just as I hear a crashing tree. Such sounds are heard when distant galaxies are born Amid strange streaking lights and brute cyclonic gyres! And here? Might life be born anew though ripped and torn? Might unclean things be purified in holy fires? I fear the whirlwind could bring death if that is willed, But glimpse the icons of my saints by candlelight And trust we’ll live beyond this night. We can rebuild. And now? The wind is dying. All will soon be right. . . God of Second Chances —a rondeau redouble Can we rebuild what was destroyed And see restored the world we’ve lost? There is a force beyond the void Which we ignore at dreadful cost. When all seems crushed and tempest-tossed, When rectitude seems ore alloyed To crumbling rust and sterile frost, Can we rebuild what was destroyed? Though fame seems something to avoid, And wealth a prize that’s over-glossed, We might yet find hope redeployed And see restored the world we’ve lost. Why should we race and then exhaust Ourselves in pointless schadenfreude? Accept—not just on Pentecost— There is a force beyond the void. Philosophy has failed or cloyed And science serves but to accost. Deep truths exist past Locke and Freud Which we ignore at dreadful cost. Prize truth. Repudiate George Floyd. Restore the morals once embossed In stone. Once Order’s reemployed We can set right the lines we’ve crossed. __We can rebuild. . . Brian Yapko is a retired lawyer whose poetry has appeared in over fifty journals. He is the winner of the 2023 SCP International Poetry Competition. Brian is also the author of several short stories, the science fiction novel El Nuevo Mundo and the gothic archaeological novel Bleeding Stone. He lives in Wimauma, Florida. NOTE TO READERS: If you enjoyed this poem or other content, please consider making a donation to the Society of Classical Poets. The Society of Classical Poets does not endorse any views expressed in individual poems or commentary. ***Read Our Comments Policy Here*** 3 Responses Roy Eugene Peterson May 25, 2025 Your vocabulary is marvelous and extensive using words like “gyre” and the German “shadenfreude.” I detect from the first title there is a double meaning intended beyond that apparent text of the poem. As a young person who used to be taken to the cellar when tornados passed by our upper Midwest farm, your description is as fitting as it is frightening. I imagine hurricanes are similar with their broad sweep and devastation. While Florida has a great climate, I am sure you will have tense moments, since you have recently moved there. “God of Second Chances” is presented with so many innate truths such as “science serves but to accost.” Brilliant put down, George Floyd included! Your academic background also shines through with Locke and Freud. Altogether, these are masterful works from a skilled poetic artist. Reply Laura Schwartz May 25, 2025 Brian, each line in “The Genesis Wind” is a gem. Referring to the hurricane’s winds as tantrums is original and perfectly descriptive; “jihad of diabolic ruination”, diamonds! On and on, you took me through The Eye as if I’d been there with you. The elucidation of your experience leads us on a journey we wish you could avoid in the future! Beautifully written. You are calling us to hold on to timeless truths and morals in “G’d of Second Chances” instead of shifting to ‘woke’ narratives of politics and cultural sentimentality. “Deep truths exist…Which we ignore at dreadful cost” points a frightening finger to the current loss of core, ethical values. Your wisdom erupts in this magnificent mega-rondeau! Reply Julian D. Woodruff May 25, 2025 A vivid, bristling-whistling, harrowing narrative in your 1st, Brian. Milton passed through Lake Mary, where one of my daughters resides. They got buckets of rain but, it would seem, not much more. If all in Milton’s path can be put in the condition Lake Mary currently finds itself, “all will … be well,” though maybe not soon enough for many residents. Your 2nd is masterful–as if you’d been reading and writing rondeaux redoubles all your life. Thanks for both. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published.CommentName* Email* Website Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Roy Eugene Peterson May 25, 2025 Your vocabulary is marvelous and extensive using words like “gyre” and the German “shadenfreude.” I detect from the first title there is a double meaning intended beyond that apparent text of the poem. As a young person who used to be taken to the cellar when tornados passed by our upper Midwest farm, your description is as fitting as it is frightening. I imagine hurricanes are similar with their broad sweep and devastation. While Florida has a great climate, I am sure you will have tense moments, since you have recently moved there. “God of Second Chances” is presented with so many innate truths such as “science serves but to accost.” Brilliant put down, George Floyd included! Your academic background also shines through with Locke and Freud. Altogether, these are masterful works from a skilled poetic artist. Reply
Laura Schwartz May 25, 2025 Brian, each line in “The Genesis Wind” is a gem. Referring to the hurricane’s winds as tantrums is original and perfectly descriptive; “jihad of diabolic ruination”, diamonds! On and on, you took me through The Eye as if I’d been there with you. The elucidation of your experience leads us on a journey we wish you could avoid in the future! Beautifully written. You are calling us to hold on to timeless truths and morals in “G’d of Second Chances” instead of shifting to ‘woke’ narratives of politics and cultural sentimentality. “Deep truths exist…Which we ignore at dreadful cost” points a frightening finger to the current loss of core, ethical values. Your wisdom erupts in this magnificent mega-rondeau! Reply
Julian D. Woodruff May 25, 2025 A vivid, bristling-whistling, harrowing narrative in your 1st, Brian. Milton passed through Lake Mary, where one of my daughters resides. They got buckets of rain but, it would seem, not much more. If all in Milton’s path can be put in the condition Lake Mary currently finds itself, “all will … be well,” though maybe not soon enough for many residents. Your 2nd is masterful–as if you’d been reading and writing rondeaux redoubles all your life. Thanks for both. Reply